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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5

What the hell? That was Viren? That day I was shocked. Many things to take in at once! Too much to digest!

For the rest of the day, I locked myself away in my room, thinking about how I was going to handle the situation. I mean, what do I say when or if he asks, why did I run away? Or, why was I so worried? Or...

THUD!

I think I know what that noise was! Yep I did! Mom! Who else?

I came out of my room peering out to have a look at what was going on. It was my mom clearing up pieces of glass that she dropped. She must have went out again! I was thinking of going back into my room when my mom cut her finger.

"Mom!" I shouted. I went over to see to her.
"Leave me alone!" she screamed

I backed away straight away. God knows what she would have done if I'd stayed. What was wrong with her? I thought. But thinking about it, I realised she was always like that when something went wrong. Maybe it was her stupid boyfriend! Whenever I used to say boyfriend, it got me frustrated! One thing about my mom, never remind her about a bad moment or a time she's been out of control at you - that probably results in you having permanent scars for the rest of your life. Not pretty!

Next day

I woke up bright and early and got ready for college. I didn't know what I was going to do when I got there! Would he say anything to me? Would he even see me? for that matter. But at that moment in time, this wasn't important. My mom was.

I got into the living room and saw the person I least liked, my mom's boyfriend. She was leaning her head on his shoulder and was sleeping. As soon as HE saw me, he got up and came towards me.

"Hi Nivi, your mom's sleeping so be quiet. I'll look after her so don't worry." he said.

"Ermm, I'm not worried? And how did you get in?" I asked.

"Your mother gave me the keys." he replied.

My eyes went towards the table in front of my mom and I saw a glass of wine there.

"Were you drinking?" I asked

"So what if I was? Look, you're my girlfriend's daughter, I don't need to answer you!" he said frustrated.

"Yeah why would you answer me, you've already done one bad thing!" I said under my breath.

"Did you say something?" he questioned me.

He was giving me the Glare of Death look when I said that. As soon as I saw that, I left immediately without answering him.

Look after her my foot! He's probably gonna get drunk and blurt something out like 'Oh, your daughter was so rude to me! She never let me eat breakfast or, she never let me touch the wine rack!' to my mom.

If you're thinking, what the hell are you on about Nivi? You have a right to. He's got me in trouble before by saying all this to my mom when I never actually done anything.

I didnt realise whilst in my thoughts when I reached college. To be honest, I didn'y care whether I saw Viren or not. I was just too annoyed to care!

But I did feel sorry for him looking back. Well, I couldn'y help it! It was his fault! He had to be the leader of a stupid gang with people with brains the size of a pea! No wonder people couldn't say anything to him. It was his looks I guess, but don't take this the wrong way! HE seriuosly needed to know when to talk to people. He couldn't even take hints. I guess he was that full of himself!

What am I rambling on about? your thinking. Don't worry, I'll explain all...

Ok, so how was it?
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Please leave a comment letting me know what you think!!!
Luv u guys!! xxx




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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
all the three chap were very interesting dear...Nivi is going through a lot in home as well as in college ...interesting and nice update dear...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc updates faj...thnx a lot for d pm..u r writing so beautifully..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
very nice chapters yaar,, well explained about nivi's mind,, sad for her present situation,, do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Great update please continue soon really loved the chapeters please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg dear...awesome updates yaar 😃
poor nivi...got to face problems both at home n clg
Liking ur story a lot dear...eager to knw more!!

Continue soon sweetie 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
great updates dear...u r updating after a long time..glad to see u back...waiting for ur new updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Very Good updates... please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon want to know what happens next. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon waiting for your update.😊

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