FF: She's So Gone - Update - Part 3, 4 &5 (11/12)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys, I've got another FF that I hope you enjoy. I've been thinking about writing this for a while now so I thought why not? So I hope you like the intro and here goes:
Character Sketch:
Nivedita Sharma: A 17 year old girl who is shy and new in town. She's just started college and is finding it difficult to fit in. She's a kind of a geek and likes to read a lot. Her books are her friends to her; you know what they say, no demands and no complaints. She only had a mum as her dad left her when she was young for someone else. Ever since then her relationship with her mother has not been so great. Her mom has a boyfriend which makes it hard to talk to her at all. She wishes she had someone to talk to. Only if things had stayed the same as they were. She dreams too of having a hopeful future, but every time she fears that she can't do anything. Maybe because no one notices her. Having moved to a new house, new city and new college, she finds it hard to adjust to everything. Especially college. The group that you want to avoid seem to have a problem with her, well the girls in that group anyway. Just one decision made by her changes everything.
Viren Sood: The hotshot and leader of the group. He's outgoing, funny, and talented and really, the person you'd die to be seen with. He's the complete opposite of Nivi. His group are basically the bullies of the college. Although he doesn't like it, he can't do anything about it whether he says anything or not, it doesn't make a difference. One day, a new girl enters his college and the girls in the group take an instant hate on her just because she is different. That's all they look at. What he doesn't realise is how much they really have in common and how close they really are. His group could go to any lengths in bullying, which tempts Nivi to make a decision of her own which changes everyone around her.
The Group: Along with Viren there is,
Payal ' the main girl out of the 3 and tries to impress Viren
Gauri ' the one who tries to speak but gets quietened down
Supriya ' the dumb girl that follows
These girls are cheerleaders in the college.
And, the boys, Akshay and Jay who like to try and flirt with girls but always fail.
Intro
My life when I first thought about it wasn't that great. If we're talking 2 years ago, yeah it wasn't great. I had overcome the hardest obstacles in my life 2 years ago. To just be where I am, I had to face my fears. After that everything seemed to be sailing smooth. But now? Where I'm standing at the moment, I didn't expect to be. All my memories came flooding back to me. Why? Why me? People say not to dwell in the past, but at the moment I can't stop. You're probably thinking random? I'll explain everything. Hi I'm Nivedita Sharma, it all started 2 years ago.
This was just a quick intro and please do say if you would like for me to carry on with this. I would appreciate any comments or improvements on anything. Do comment! xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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continue it sounds very interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey fajj long time
how ru
the ff sounds great loved the intro the character of nivi is quite different
wud luv u to continue
by the way wat happened 2 ur uder ff pleaz continue dat aswell i know it can be hard especially if ur righting 2 at the same time but pleaz do try wud luv 2 read

ps luving the title sounds so gangsterish(i know dats not a word lol)
Edited by Jafrina_luvs_KM - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Intro was really nice...now wating for next...seems interesting😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Faj, i love the intro... Nivi need some one to hold ,understand ,support and encourage her... Hope viren will do this in coming chapters... Continue soon...
Btw please continue "DOSTI AUR PYAAR"...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please update soon
and please please please
continue Dosti Aur Pyaar ff too.
😊 šŸ˜› 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww faj long time yaar ..
where hav you been was missin you yar ..
plz do continue.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi faj...good start dear...can't wait to read the coming chapters...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pls continue sweetie, like the intro
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear...happy to kno u started a new ff...
Intro sounds very interestin...update soon...eager to read te chaps!!

And dear pls do continue ur previous ff...love it a lot!!

Thanx 4 te pm sweetie...

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