Yati's creations :TOOTATA TARA(CHAPTER 7(Page 13)) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Roopzzz...Raj...jananishan...surur...sunayna...atiya...archana...minu..revathi... Thanks a lot...
Nice 2 meet u Reshma... thanks 4 ur appreciation n for d name of dis jodi..."AALAGA"
Atiya ...hmmm... yup u r r8...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yati...superb story..and beautiful names..raga and alaap...so musical...
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CHAPTER 5
Raaga arrives at home. She calls Nandu to get some water for her. Kaveri comes in the living room when she hears Raaga's voice. Kaveri asks, " Raaga kaisa raha college ka pehla din?" Nandu gets water for Raaga. Raaga thinks for a while and says," Hmmm…. Daadi thik hee raha." Kaveri again asks," ragging toh nahi hue naa .." Raaga assures Kaveri that nothing wrong happened at college. Raaga goes to her room.
Raaga's eyes are closed and she is listening to some music on her iPod. She feels someone's hands on her eyes from behind. She touches those hands and smiles. "pehchaan liya Aditya…." . Aditya takes off his hands from Raaga's eyes. Raaga turns.

Aditya asks, " So… kaisa raha college main … would be Dr. Raaga ka first day ?" Raaga tells everything to aditya and also about Aalap. Aditya teases Raaga," Ohooo….Lagta hai koi kaafi impress ho gaya hai tumko dekhkar…" Aditya winks at Raaga. Raaga tosses a pillow at Aditya. Both giggle. Aditya gets a call and he leaves Raaga's room.

Aditya was stepping out of Raaga's home but Kaveri stopped him. She asks, " Aditya, Raaga se baat hue tumhari. College main toh sab theek raha naa, tum uske bachpan ke friend ho toh tumko usne bataya hoga naa, mujhe uske liye chinta ho rahi thi." Aditya replies, " Daadi, Aap tension mat leejiye, Sab theek raha." Kaveri smiles.

It's night. Everyone is in their rooms except Raaga. She goes to the terrace. She is looking at the sky and conversing with her mother.

"Maa, aaj pehla din tha college ka. Main toh kaafi dari hue thi. Par aap mere saath rahi toh dekhiye sab theek hee hua. Well, mujhe apna college pasand aaya. Aur haa pehle hee din meri Antara se friendship bhi ho gayi. Par ek ajeeb baat bhi hue. Woh ladka …..pata nahi kya naam hai uska… Uss ladke aur uske group ko dekhkar toh main darr hee gayi thi, Maa. Jab unn logo ne mujhe bulaya, toh mujhe laga ke ab meri ragging ho kar hee rahegi. Thanks to you Maa, Apne bachaa liya…Aur phir …..woh rashte main scooty ne gadbad kar di….. phir se wahi ladka mujhe mil gaya… Aur Kamal toh tab hua…jab uski bike bhi gadbad ho gayi…... Pata nahi par mujhe who kuch ajeeb sa lagaa Maa…. Kher jaane deejiye mujhe usse kya lena….. usne meri help kee….mechanic ke baare main bataya….Yahi kaafi hai…Ok Maa …ab mujhe need aa rahi hai…kal college bhi jaana hai main jaati hoo… Good night Maa" Pole star twinkles at Raaga. She leaves for her room.

Aalap is in his room. He is trying to sleep but glimpse of Raaga are disturbing him. He is reminding every bit of Raaga,the way she was looking at Aalap when his group was taking her intro, the way her jhumkis were kissing her innocent face when she was standing under the tree. Aalap is finding it tough to sleep. He says to himself, " Ufff… bahut hua …. Ms. Raaga….ab jao yaha se…. mere ko sone do." He closes his eyes but soon opens them and says in tough tone, "Aur Haa…. Plzzz mere sapno main aakar mujhe disturb mat karan ….good night" He again closes his eyes.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yati dii wenever i read ur FF it gives a diff feeling it seems magical the last 2 chaps wer beautiful luved em

and i luv dese lines
Ufff bahut hua Ms. Raaga ab jao yaha se mere ko sone do."
"Aur Haa…. Plzzz mere sapno main aakar mujhe disturb mat karan ….good night" .
alaaps character is really cute
Edited by Jafrina_luvs_KM - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
👏lovely chapter...mwah...my night weekend will be good...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awesum chapter yati 🤗
continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
I loved the chapters yati... Especialy alap's staring on raaga,raaga's talking with stars and alap's words don't disturb in dreams very much... Continue soon... Mwah
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yati i am speechless...your FF is so different from all the other ff and so unique dear👏...i can imagine Ragaa as Nivi and Alaap as Viren ☺️
but the most thing i liked in your ff is Raaga's innocence like our Nivi...her talking with her mother made me feel so emotional can't tell you dear
And Alaap is a full copy of Viren😆...such a unique character loved it dear...
Yati can you do me a favor dear? please PM whenever you update...i am over excited to know more about Raaga and Alaap aka NivRen's lovestory😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow mind-blowing loving the story very much do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely ... Alaap ke dil me hulchul ho rahi hai
Edited by Raj_Luv_NiViren - 14 years ago

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