Gurmeet Debina- Match made in heaven

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Before I Begin'..

Hi friends I am a huge fan of Gurmeet Debina aka Gurbina. I wann them to come together in any daily soap as lead couple. I hope it will happen, before that I plan to write a short story with the character sketch of our beloved Gurmeet and Debina. Hope you all like it. Friends this is the first time I am writing story. Kindly support me. Give me you valuable suggestions and commends. Love you Gurbina

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❤️❤️❤️Match Made In Heaven❤️❤️❤️


Character sketch

Debina aka Mythili Sinha



Mythili: 22 yr Kathak dancer from orthodox middle class family girl. She is the only child for her parents. An innocent girl, parents is her world and dance is her life. Accordint to her business men are machines they don't have essence in their life. Dance and music are sacred art; it's a blessing of god.
Gurmeet aka Ram Chopra



Ram: 27yr business tycoon. He is the sole proprietor of RC Motors Ltd. It's one of the international car manufacturing companies. Ram is the back born of the organization. Irresistible person, good in heart. Music, dance etc are waste of time, up to him. He wants to make RCM is world's no 1 automobile company. He is very patriotic. Love India.

Ankit aka Karan


Karan: Ram's close friends, he will do anything for Ram. Down to the earth person. He is the Legal Advisers of Ram's company.

Rubina aka Nithi


Nithi: she is Mythili's childhood friend. she know Mythili very well more then all. nice girl. Lovable person.




Edited by devibabu - 13 years ago
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Hi friends i dont know you people are like it or not... if you like it just hit the like

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Edited by devibabu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmm CHaracters seems Interesting...:))))
Waiting for the plot...:)))
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Wow, character sketch seems very interesting! I'm eager to read this story, dear, can't wait for the first chapter!
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Part 1

Sun is showering its morning rays; Morning hazy just melting in the rays, the chirping of the birds, temple bell sound, everything seems to be pleased. The day is one of the most expecting days of Ram in his existence. He has gone to sign a big international deal today.

Ram got ready and comes out from his room.

"Congratulation dear". Ram's Mom said to him.

He saw his mom with pooja plate. He got the blessing from her.

Thank you maa, but for what?

Today you are gonne to sign a big deal with Mr. Watson na.

How come you know maa?

Your dad told me just now.

Sorry maa after the singing of the deal. I plan to tell you the matter with some special surprise but dad!

It's okay dear. Mrs. Chopar gave a kiss to Ram's forehead.

Okay maa I have to go now. Caught you evening.

Ram just moves from her. She called him Ram'..

Ram turned. Maa'

Before gonne to office, go to the temple dear' Ram gave a smile. Okay maa.

Ram is in temple.

He prays to the God, "Thank you God", you giving me all. Be with me, guide me.

He came out of the temple his mobile rings. He picks the call that was Karan.

Hi Karan.

Where are you Ram? I am waiting for you.

I am in Sitaram temple. I will be there in a few minutes. Is everything read in office?

Ready yar. All are waiting for you. Mr. Watson also started from his hotel.

While talking in the mobile, Ram was heading to cross the road toward to his car. He didn't notice a car come very fast towards to bash him. Suddenly a hand held his hands pull him beside the road. People around the road were yelling. Some vehicles tire screeching sounds' bash the area, pollution matted the circumstance. Fraction of second the car crossed him, went very fast. Even he didn't notice the number of the car. Everything was stopped a while. Ram came out of the shock, sees the person who saved him from the accident. Who saved his life, who gave second birth to him. If the car bashed him, surely it will take off his life. He can realize it; his life starts again when he sees the person's eyes.

He couldn't see the person's face. It was fully covered from her duppta. She is in pink chudi. He sees her eyes, Beautiful eye. Her hazel eyes. He ever never has seen such a powerful eye. He just forgot him.

The girl asked, are you okay? Just relax, relax yourself, and be careful while crossing the road.

Don't worry. Your day will be good. Tack Care. Have a Good Day.

She leaves his hands and move to her Scooty take her bag but he can't move his eyes from her. He is staring at her. Even he didn't thank her for saving him. He still stares at her. She went inside the temple.

He was not in the world before someone pulls his hands. He just comes to relies what happened. Everything liked a dream for him. A little girl pulling his hand and ask him to buy the roses.

He smiles to the girl. She is having baby pink color roses. He came down to the girl and asks why you are not going to school? She replied I will go to school after 8 o'clock. Now I am helping to my mom. Today she is not well so I am doing her work. She looks so cute. Ram buys a bunch of roses and gave her 100 rupees. I don't have change. He said no problem keep it with you. She said no no I don't want it. I just want the exact amount of my roses. I don't want extra amount.

He likes her loyalty. He said okay keep the money with you tomorrow I will come and buy some more flowers from you. She is happy, went off. Ram is still standing there, he wanns to see the girls face that saved him. She didn't come out. Suddenly a car stopped beside him, Karan came out from the car.

He yelled - Raam'..

What happen Ram? What happen to you?

Karan???

While talking to you I heard some noises. Car tires screeching sound, someone shouting. I don't know what happened? I keep calling you but you didn't reply me. So I came here.

Than Ram is remember he was talking with Karan in the mobile.

Ram: Nothing yar'. Come let go.

Is everything okay Ram?

Oaky yar come on.

They are heading to their cars.

Karan noticed roses in Ram's hand. He smiled. Roses??? Are you waiting for someone? He winked to Ram.

Ram got an idea. He called the little girl who sold roses to him. She ran towards Ram. She gave the roses to the girls and asks her to give the roses to the girls who will come and start the Scooty. He showed the Scooty to her. Little girl said "okay". Ram added say thanks to her behalf of me for saving me. She smiled.

Ram moved from there.

Inside the temple

Nithi called Mythili when she was removing her duppta.

What happen yar? Why are you late? I am waiting for you more than half an hour.

Sorry Nithi, heavy traffic, Heavy pollution.

So you covered yourself in duppta na.

Yes yar ' this pollution too bad.

In front of the temple there is one guy might be met an accident if I was not there.

What happen?

Nothing yar he is okay now. He was talking in the phone not noticed the car.

Oh no!!!

I pulled him beside. He was looking like an educated person, seems to be rich. But he doesn't have a sense. He simply crossed the road without noticing besides. Mythili was irritated of the incident.

Okay yar leave it. Come let's go.

Nithi and Mythili went to pray the god.

Mythili closed her eye. Ram's face appeared front of her. She opened her eye. He is not there. Again she closed her eye, again she saw him, her heart beating very fast. She felt some new feeling. This is the first time she feels like this. Again she closes her eye. Again he. She has opened her eye to see Lord RAM, SITA, LAKSHMAN and HUNAMAN. Ram was there. She was confused.

She prays god, pleas be with him. Save him. Give all the happiness and prosperity to him.

Nithi and Mythili came out. When she starts the scooty she thinks what she prayed to the god. Why I prayed for him? Who is he? What is this new feeling I felt?

The little girls called her. didi' didi'

She turned and saw the girl.

She gave the bunch of roses to her and said THANK YOU.

Why you are giving roses to me.

She replies one bhaiya asked me to give this to you for saving him.

Have it.

Nithi patted her shoulder.

Who had given this?

I think the guy who I saved.

Oh ohhh' Roses for you'Nithi teased her.

Chup yar'.

She collected the roses from her and chuckle. She loves the roses.

Mythili gave one rose to the little girl from the bunch.

She smiled. Thank you didi.

Nithi and Mythili are heading to their Dance School.

Ram is in driving he keep thinks the beautiful eyes. He too felt the same feeling what Mythili felt. He stopped the car in front of his office. He went inside in full bang with his bodyguards, Karan also with him.

They enter into the meeting hall. Nana Ram's PA. She is waiting for him.

Sir, everything is ready. Please check it out sir.

Ram read all the documents. Karan, have you checked out it?

Yes Ram, everything is fine.

Someone enter into the room. Sir, clients are arrived.

Ram went to invite them.

After 2 hours the agreement was signed from both the companies. Ram was in super happy. He just closed his eyes to pray the god but her powerful eyes are there. He opened his eyes; again he closed again her eyes. He chuckle and say thanks to her heartily. Of course, this was noticed by Karan.

After the send off the clients, Ram and Karan hugged each other.

Karan it is one of the unforgettable days in my life. Soon my dream will come true.

Yes yes your dream girl will come to you na'.

What?

Since morning I noticed, you are in some special world what's the matter?

Ram narrated the morning incident.

Oh this is it. You find your girl. Am I right?

Oh no yar' she saved my life. I don't know anything about her; even I don't know her name. I just want to thank her in person for saved my life. That's it.

That's it. Karan stressed the words

"Yeah, that's it", Ram too stressed it.

Humm hum let's see. Let's see ' Karan teased Ram.

Precap ' will Ram meet Mythili?????


PART 2

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Edited by devibabu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww really veryy intersting...waiting 4 more...plss continue soon dear
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wow diii, very nicee story, i luv it !!👏 plsss continue, character choices r superb !😛
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dear,great update..
seems very interesting...same me too a guru-debi fan..
so if u pm anyone,add me..

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Part 2

Karan teased Ram.

Karan, even I don't know her face yar'

What?

Yes, I don't know her face I didn't see her face ' she covered her face in duppta.

Oh no! Then how can you find her and cover your thanks

I noted her scooty number, so I can find her address.

Wow that fine yar' oaky come on lets go.

Where?

To find her address, hurry up man

I already inform Nana to get the address of the scooty number.

Nana knocked the door, excuse me sir

Get in

Sir, address of the scooty

He got the address paper from her. Nana went out.

He smiled.

Mythili learned dance for 14 years. Now she is teaching dance in the same dance school where she learned dance. And also she is teaching dance to the orphan children. Every day evening she went to the orphanage to teach Kathak to the children. She spends most of her time in there. She loves the place. She loves the children.

That day evening, Mythili was in orphanage teaching Kathak to the children. Nithi took Mythili's Scooty went out to get some snacks for the children.

Karan and Ram get out of the office to meet Ram's mystery girl. Ram's mobile rang. It was Nana.

Sir, Mr&Mrs. Rakesh Mahar wants to meet you. They ask me to fix the appointment. From the last week itself they want to meet you sir but due to the hectic schedule we couldn't fix the appointment.

What? From the last week itself they are waiting for my appointment. Why you didn't inform me.

Sir, we had lot of clients meet so I postponed their appointment.

"Okay", fix the appointment immediately, and listen hereafter don't make them wait for me. When they call you for my appointment inform me immediately. Don't repeat this mistake again. I will come within few minutes.

Karan understood the situation. He asked Ram to attend the meet; he went to find the mystery girl's house.

Karan got the address paper from Ram, he moved. Ram went inside the office.

When Karan was in driving he saw a Scooty went before his car. He just had seen the number of the Scooty. The same number what was in the address paper. He has fastened his car to see the person face, before that the scooty was stopped in the front of one supermarket. Nithi went inside. Karan saw Nithi. He though she is person one who saved his close friend's life.

Karan stopped the car on the side of the road. He was waiting for Nithi to come out.

Mr&Mrs. Rakesh Mahar came to meet Ram to felicitate him; he denoted a huge amount to their orphanage. So they plan to arrange some program, they came here to get his date for the felicitate program. Ram doesn't want this but he couldn't avoid them. He respects them very much. So he accepts their invite.

Ram finished his meeting. He dropped Mr&Mrs. Rakesh Mahar to their orphanage. He is trying to call Karan but he couldn't reach him due to the rain. Yes, it was heavily raining. Due to the rain Nithi also not come out the supermarket, Karan is too waiting for Nithi in the car.

Mythili was in the orphanage. She is playing with kids in the rain. It was thundering, lightning claps their hands, the kids were scared. Mythili took the children inside the building. They were in the old building. Rain too shown it's heaviness like thunder and lightning.

Due to the rain there is power cut in the area.

Mythili's instinct says something. She feels something going to happen there.

Immediately she shifted the children to the old building to new building.

It is heavily raining, Mr&Mrs.Rakesh Mahar asks Ram to come inside. Ram gets inside to the orphanage. They were in their officer room.

Ram was waiting more than an hour but the rain was not stopped, even he couldn't not reach Karan's mobile due to signal problem.

He wants to meet his mystery girls. The rain keep increases, it's not reducing its bash. So he greeted to Mr&Mrs.Rakesh Mahar and move out of the building. He just walked into the rain.

Thunder attacked the old building where Ram was walking. One hand pulls him. He was turn around and loosen his balance and fall down on the person who pulled him. Immediately one side wall of the building was collapsed and fall down. Both of them were rolled on the ground.

Ram couldn't see the persons face in the darkness. He tried to balance himself and got up, lighting sparked, he saw the person who saved him. He was surprised even shocked too," yes", it was Mythili. He couldn't believe himself. Still she was on the ground.

Ram was freeze. Mythili trying to get up, but she couldn't, she was wounded in her left hand, and it was bleeding. Again a thunder claps, it get Ram to reality. He is extended his hand to Mythili to get up. First she was hesitating but she couldn't balance herself so she took his help and got up.

Thank you

Her voice buzzing in his mind. He lost in her beauty. She is look like an angel in the lighting.

Still he is holding her hand. She is singing him to leave her hand.

He couldn't get her, because he lost in her. Again she is singing, no reaction from his side.

Hello hello

Hummm

Leave my hand, it's hurting

humm

Then he saw her hand. It was bleeding. He can't see her pain. He took his hanky bandaged it on the wound.

She said to him thank you, be careful, tack care.

He was still staring in her eyes when she slowly disappeared into the darkness.

Percap ' Mythili in Ram's room.


PART 3- Scroll down

Edited by devibabu - 13 years ago

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