Gurmeet Debina- Match made in heaven - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
hi dear friends thank you so much for all you valuable comments... i thought i m not good in writing... but you all made me feel happy on my writing... i will try to give me excellent in the FF... i have a request on you all... plz do the review about the parts and give me your suggestions. your single word is important me like a cores... it will help me do improve myself a lot... so kindly do the comment and hit the like ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: priiya84

as usual😔...late...and i'm bit lazy to type all i liked(i love all parts from 17 to 20)
so sweet cute...everything..
i loved when they prayed..
"Please full fill all her desires" "Please full fill all his desires"😍🤗

🤗and their nick names kuku,sajna..and i fell in love with
Cinderella❤️...she gave a nick name to it also..cindu..
their kitchen scene..i always dreamed my future hubby will do like this and i get on dream come in front of me in the form of kuku sajna..
😍😳☺️
waiting for the next update..



hi priya thanks a tons ... i dont have words me describe my happiness about you comments. you read all my parts... post your like and suggestion about the part. do you know one thing i m waiting a lot for your comment about the pats each and every time. plz keep give me this support and suggestions... thanks a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all the parts in one go...

really a nice story and you write very beautifully😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jikky_84

read all the parts in one go...


really a nice story and you write very beautifully😊




hi friends thank you so much for your interest on ss... keep commending on it...give ur suggestions

thank you so much for you first comment ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
😆thanku... waiting for d next update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely dear!!!😛
Plzz do continue!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nooriewas

Lovely dear!!!😛

Plzz do continue!!!😛


thank you so much... with in few hours i will update the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 22

The day evening Ram called Mythili and asks her to get ready' he will tack her to outing'.

After cuts Ram's call Mythili is very happy' within few minutes a servant came with a parcel to Mythili, she was surprised and got that from the servant. The parcel was send by her Ram with a rose. She opens it, it was beautiful dress, she like the dress very much, her mobile blinks once, she opens a message, it was from Ram,"I hope you like it", she heads to send a reply but stopped and she plans to show her happiness directly, so she stopped and move to change her dress, within few minutes she wore the dress and got ready.

Ram back to home, he wann change his office suit. When he entered into their room, Mythili stand on the balcony with Chindu. She turned and seen Ram, Ram was freezing, his Kuku is looks like a goddess. He thought if the goddess in the earth at present, they should be like this.

Mythili neared to him and waves her hands front of him, but no reaction from him, she shacked his shoulder, Ram' Ram'. What happen?

Nothing I thought the goddess got down from the heave and stand front of me''.

Mythili feel shy and she said I like the dress very much. Where we are going? You didn't say anything about this.

It's a surprise to you. But I am sure you like it very much.

In half an hour Ram and Mythili was ready and they got into the car.

When they sat the car Ram took a cloth and blindfold Mythili.

Mythii asked what this is.

I told you na I am going to give you a surprise then the surprise is starts from now, So, no more questions.

Mythili is kept quite in few minutes then she ask Ram at least give a small clue. Please'

Within few minutes we will be there. So you please wait for the moment.

Ram's car stopped in front of their destination.

Ram removed her blindfold.

Mythili was surprised. That is her mansion.

Yes Ram and Mythili in front of Sinha's mansion. But now the name board of the mansion is changed as "SINHA'S SCHOOL OF DANCE"

When Mythili got down from the car, she is in high level of shock and she is on cloud nine too'..

At the moment she forgot all around her even her Ram too.

The mansion was decorated with lights and flowers; Nithi, Karan, Mr & Mrs Chopra, Mr. Mrs. Rakesh Mahar, the old age couple and the orphanage students are inside the mansions and also some important VIP's of the city too.

Tears starts rolling from Mythili's eyes, Ram hold her hands and lead her to entrance of the dance school, yes, from now it's a Sinha's school of dance.

Nithili came with a pleat full of flowers and a scissor.

Mythili seen all her beloved once are around her, she can't understand what happening around her and how to react for this happiness. Ram gesturing her to cut the ribbon.

She said I can't.

Everyone is shocked for her answer.

All elder ones are here, they should do this. I am very younger to all. How can I?

All are laugher for her answer, Ram was happy about his wife's manse but he said I know that but this is all our wish that you should open this dance school, it's not only our wish, it's your parents wish too. So you have to do this.

Mythili took the scissor and cut the ribbon and entered into the dance school.

She has many surprises there too'

The mansion interior is changed as like a dance school but the building is as the same. Mythili's many dance snaps was blowup and placed on the wall.

In the middle wall a very big photo blowup of Mythili's parents, and a huge Nadarajar Moorthi also there.

Mythili can't believe her eyes. She can't utter a single word. All are very happy about the new dance school and they covered their blessings and good wishes too Mythili.

She wann say many things to Ram but at present she can't do that.

Everyone is gathered in the main hall of the dance school.

Nithi started her speech, this is the school for poor students and orphans, they no need to pay any fee for the school, their interest and dedication of dance is their fee. And finishing their course, they have an exam and after clearing the exam they will get their government authorized certificates. Yes, the dance school is government authorized dance school. Students who all are learning dance in the school can take dance as their currier.

Karan said yes, the school is legally registered.

Ram said dance is a divine art. Everyone is equal in front of god; dance also like a god, so in the school there is no partiality between students, you all will treat equally.

Mr&Mrs. Chopar said,we hope my daughter in law will put all her dedication toward the dance school and she will serve for the dance.

Mr&Mrs. Rakesh Mahar said, we hope Mythili do her best for the school, dance school for a poor students is her life time ambition, today it occurred, god bless her.

The old age couple said, one day the dance school will be top level in our country.

Everyone of there is very happy. All are asked Mythili to speak. But she can't do that.

She was struggling with words, Ram slightly move beside her and hold her hands without knowing other and smiled and gesturing her to that you can, she too smiled and heading to start her speech.

I didn't expect this day will come in my life this much soon, dance school for a poor and orphan people is not only my ambitions, it's my parents ambition too. I thank you all for the wishes and blessings, I promised you that I will full fill all your words and give my excellent to the school.

She gave a pass for a while and continued, Ram this manthra for many people around the words. But for me it's a like a breath. Without breath a living creature can't survive in the world. Without Ram, Mythili is like a soulless body. I am not saying this only for this dance school for everything he gave me in my life. He filled my life with happiness and prosperity. I don't have words to explain my happiness' thank you so much Ram''

The small function is finished all are having their dinner. Ram arranger the best dinner for all.

While the dinner. Ram is busy with guests. Karan and Nithi were accompanied with Mythili.

Karan said past 2 to 3 weeks he is busy with this school work only. After finishing the office he directly came here and supervising all the works up to late night.

Nithi said yes Karan; he took lots of effort for the best outcome of the school and this function too. He did this for Mythili's happiness. She missing her parents very much and also this is the place of the sweet memories of them. So he put all his effort.

Hummm' here after Mythili will come here regularly she can happy with her parents memories here. Karan added.

Mythili, quietly listening them.

Ram joined them. What up guys? What you are complaining about me into my wife?

Oh no! We are not complaining, your beloved wife only complaining to us about you.

What complain?

That you are not at the time to home, you didn't take care of her etc'..

Oh! Is it?

My was embarrassed and said no no'. I didn't say anything they are simply making fun of me.

After finishing the dinner all are back to the mansion.

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In Chopra's Mansion

All are sitting on the couch talking about the function and the gust and all, but Mythili was restless she is not interested in the talk, Ram noticed that and said Mythili if you feel sleep go and sleep I will come.

Mythili went to their room.

After some time Ram enters into the room, Mythili ran from balcony and hugged him tightly and started crying. Ram doesn't know what happen to her.

What happen Mythili? Why are you crying? She didn't speak.

He asked again. She said please hug me tightly. Don't ask anything to me.

Ram did that.

Percap ' Mythili's guilty conscious

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Part 23 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56312435

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Edited by devibabu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely and Cute part!!!
Thanks for PM!!!
Plzz do update!!

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