|Thank You..||An RishNa OS..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello cupcakes!😃 I am not soo new to this forum..but ya i ve been here for one week...nd I am Sharmi. Some may know me...whereas the rest may not. Brahmarakshas is awesome...nd RishNa r awesome..nd i am just loving their chemistry. But filhaal the plot is not going good as expected...so i am dissappointed. Well this is a piece that just popped into my mind. Here it goes..😉

Rishabh arrives at time and saves both Raina and her papa. Appu fearing her reality getting disclosed she fleds from there vowing to come back nd destroy Raina. Suresh was badly wounded. The doctors were treating him.
Raina was frightened. Rishabh hugged her tightly nd she was crying in his arms.
"Rish...Rishabh mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai. Agar Papa ko kuch hogaya toh main kya karoongi? Meri toh koi apna nahi hai Papa ke alava." She said amidst sobs.
"Nahi Chindi...uncle ko kuch nahi hoga. Vo theek hojaayenge. Tum bas himmat mat haarna." He said brushing her hair.
Mohini felt Raina's pain. She couldnt see her daughter in pain. She went and sat beside her nd consoled her.

After sometime the doctors came out of OT.
"Doctor..doctor Papa kaise hain..vo theek hai na? Unhe kuch hua toh nahi?" Asked an scared and anxious Raina.
"Darne ki koi baat nahi. Vo theek hai..par ab bhi coma mein hain. Iske aage hum kuch keh nahi sakte..waqt hi batayega." Saying so the doctors took their leave.
Raina hugged Rishabh out of happiness.
"Thank god Rishabh..papa ko kuch nahi hua. Vo theek hain." Nd she smiled a bit.
"I know..i know...ab tum please rona mat." He pulled her back nd wiped off her tears.
Raina insisted on staying back with her dad. Nd Rishabh stayed back wid Raina.

"Rishabh" raina called out.
Nd he turned around. He saw her smiling. Seeing her smile he smiled at her.
"Kya hua chindi?"
"Kuch nahi...bus tumse kuch kehna tha."
"Batao"
"Vo..aaj..aaj jo tumne mere Papa keliye kiya, unki jaan bachayi...agar tum sahi time pe nahi aate to pata nahi kya hota...mein toh apni papa ko kho deti...thanks...thank u sooo much Rishabh...Thank u."

😉She was smiling brightly nd threw her hands around his neck nd embraced him in a hug.
"Thank u papa ko bachane keliye." Nd she kissed his cheek out of happiness.
Rishabh was hell shocked. He never expected something like this from his Chindi.
Nd she pulled back. Rishabh's mouth was a bit open.
"Chindi..tumne mujhe kiss kiya??!!" Rishabh asked her.
Raina blushed furiously...she just realized what she did. She had kissed him! Now she was feeling embarassed.
"Jawab do. Tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya?" Rishabh demanded for an answer.
"Vo...vo..." she fumbled.
"Kya vo...vo...accha.. ab mein samjha. Tumse control nahi hua na? Haan kitne din aur control karoge...afterall tumhare saath itna hot ladka toh hai." He said praising himself.
"Oh hello...aisa kuch nahi hai...vo..vo...bus ek thank u kiss tha. Tumne mere liye jo kuch bhi kiya..mein usse bohoth khush thi..aur khushi...khushi mein hogaya... aur mein tumhari tarah awaara nahi hun...ki tumhe kiss karne ka bahane dhoondun." She said folding her hands clearly irritated. He was standing there grinning..nd swallowing his chuckles.
She glared at him...firing bullets from her eyes. She turned to leave when she felt a tug in her hand. She looked back only to find Rishabh holding her hand.
"Thank u toh boldiya...ab welcome bhi leti jao." Saying so he pulled her close. She landed on his well toned muscled chest. His hand snaked aroung her waist pulling her more towards him. He leaned in closer nd whispered..
"Your most welcome...aur aisa bhi keh sakte hi ki..its my pleasure." She blushed nd a smile made its way to her lips.
He kissed her cheek nd she closed her eyes. His breath fanning her cheek nd it burned there. It was a long one. He just stood there placing his lips on her skin. She clutched his shirt tightly. She let out a shivering nd shy wala smile.
Slowly he broke the contact between his lips nd her skin. He looked at her. Her chest heaving up and down..eyes closed..a smile playing on her lips.
He smirked thinking.."my touch affects her soo much. Good for me!" He felt nyc. He just loved the thought that he affected her so damn much.
She opened her eyes to find him staring intently at her. She looked into his eyes. Both stood there glued to their gazes with a smile in their faces.
They didnt want to let go of the other. They liked being like this. It was beautiful. Nd the next morning dawned with something new in their lives...

Well..welll i hope u guyz liked this. It was just a random thought.
Do give ur feedbacks...waiting eagerly.

Love Sharmi😳



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pilar thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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good one😊..bt it was all of a sudden..😆 considering the present situation of our show!! bt imaginations have no limit😊❤️
bt dont expect even a bit of ths soon in our show now😆 dumbo rishb is still living in confusion!! kiss hi nahin, koyi hug bhi nahin ho saktha..!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was sooo cute
Would love to read more from you
Keep writing! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pilar

good one😊..bt it was all of a sudden..😆 considering the present situation of our show!! bt imaginations have no limit😊❤️

bt dont expect even a bit of ths soon in our show now😆 dumbo rishb is still living in confusion!! kiss hi nahin, koyi hug bhi nahin ho saktha..!😆


Ofcourse..ofcourse.. nothing can be expected from either of these.😆 it was just a sudden thought.
Thanks dear😳.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Itna bura tha kya...almost more than 60 views aur sirf three comments!😕
Srry if i ve dissappointed any of u u guyz..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

This was sooo cute
Would love to read more from you
Keep writing! 😃


Aww...thanks sweetie.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the OS..love it.👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its so good.. please write a lengthy one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww Sharmi... Love this one a lot...
Love RishNa scene... And their kiss!!!!... Want more stories from you... Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sharmi, nice one. Short and sweet.

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