FF 'CHANGE' update Part 26 page 38 - Page 17

Originally posted by: mahnaz_00

My My Naley......
What hv you done girl??
You gave me goosebumps!!😳
Every single bit of it was written so very beautifully.....
Luved the way you discribed their passionate kiss
Do continue soon dear

TC
Mahnaz😊

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Naley dear😊

The whole part is soooooooooooo hot😳

I loved the way you described everything😳

Very good writing👏

Can't wait to read more😊

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

☺️ Hot ....hot ....hot ....hot .......soooo hot!!

☺️

What an epi girl......luv u luv u luvvvvvvvvvvvv u for this 🤗 u hv made my weekend soo special..!! Luvd the update from the bottom of my heart....😳

The ArBi kiss was soo perfectly described...by u...!! Naley.....my mastero of FF writing....luv u to bits...❤️

*Tanu in ArBi heaven.........watching them KISS 😍*

Fab update...👏

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Naley Naley Naleyyyyyyyyyy......😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

Now girl this is the FIRST time i use so many of that "dreamy" emoticon at one go....Hayyeee...😍.... Totally gone in dreamland when i read this part of yours..I read it earlier..and was gushing like crazyyyyy..Woman i had to pause, take in all the parts...and then carry on reading..Wayy too hot to handle..Oucchhhh!!...*burns finger*........😆...i was smiling like a cuckoo...😆....

Loved the way you describe the parts..and Naley girl i LOVE those minor teeny weeny details you put in...The eyes, wet hair, wet body, Armaan's HAIR brushing against Bharti's cheeks, the way he holds her...Gosh every single small details..i lowwweee..!! I told ya i love it esp when someone describes human's features..ahem..guys features..😳 😳😆...and you did JUST that!!....

I esp loved the last scene, in the car..when he says he wants to kiss her..and eventually they share a moment ..and Bharti HAD to break from it..to prevent herself from getting carried away...Woaahh...Bharti getting lost in Armaan's charms huh...😉...and also my fave line of Armaan was when he said "we already DID that.."......😳😆..Naughty boy!...

Totally worth the wait..cos you made it uber duber super duper romantica..with a capital R...!! ..That's ma girl......!! 😎.......😆

Do update whenever you're free..right now i think all of us are lost in this part..finding it very tough to come out of it...getting back to my dream land......haayyeee...😍......😆

Originally posted by: haaki.b

sis!!!!!!!!!! The hottest episode which I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

just NO COMMENTS!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

OMG

OK i read this part last night but commenting now.... i am thinking about it from last night... sooooooo romantic and BEAUTIFULY writen👏

sooooooo HOT and ROMANTIC😍

really nice

and all part had Arbi only

i love these kind of parts where there is only Arbi😉😉

well Arbi in mornig was soooo cute and at night 😉HOT😉

outstanding job done dear

love it LOVE IT LOVE IT😃

keep up the good work sweety

loving this FF yaar😉

Con soooonnnnnn please plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

CHANGE

Part 16

Bharti: about us ..so...what do we call this relationship..? I'm sure we are not friends anymore after that kiss ..looking at Armaan ..trying to control her smile

Armaan: gives quick glance..smiles and looks at the road again..well I'm sure we can figure out a name very soon ...and more kissers like that will definitely give a name

Bharti: smiling more kissers ..Or more kissers from me ....

Armaan: you already know the Answer for that one ..as he takes her hand interlocking with his gently placing a kiss ..Bharti keeps her head on his shoulder as as they drove away......

Bharti: Stop..'Stop...'Armaan'...Stop..the car'

Armaan: holds the breaks quickly '. why what happened ?

Bharti: Bhasker..'

Armaan: where.. '

Bharti: there pointing her finger '...o god I'm so screwed

Armaan: Bharti why is your Brother trying to climbing the back wall of your House

Bharti: Armaan I got to go 'I'll talk with you latter as she kissers his cheek ..thank you for last night .. Opens the door to get out '

Armaan: Holds onto her Hand quickly' closing the car door again Bharti slowly turns towards him as he holds her face in his palms their foreheads touch each other close your eyes '

Bharti: Armaan I got to go...'I loved to stay here with you but have to go'

Armaan: Bharti.. please close your eyes '.

Bharti: she couldn't refuse looking in to those charming eyes' so she closed her eyes 'okay ,find...'now what'?

Armaan: don't open them till your heart say so'

Bharti: ok...'. I wont I ..Promise '.

Armaan: said nothing for a moment merely stared at her ..took her face gently towards him his arms up around her neck and pulled her mouth back down on him kissing her .. the sudden contact of his lips made bharti's hands reached up to clasp tightly around his neck keeping his lips hard upon hers.. the pleasure of his warm lips going through her whole body..it felt heavenly that she never wanted him to stop... ' when he finally wrenched his mouth a way Armaan's heart were pounding so hard just like Bharti's...'

Bharti: still eyes closed.... '.she slowly opened them to meet with his

Armaan :you asked me about our relationship about us'.... I want this.. as he places his palm on Bharti's chest feeling her strong heart beat pounding so fast ''while he takes bharti's hand placing her palm on his chest ...'Bharti feeling Armaan's heart Pound so hard just like hers .. I want to be he here..'I want to be right here'... I want everything do with you Bharti'....I want all... 'I want us '.

Bharti: heart pound even harder... 'looking in to his eyes.. feeling his heart pound with hers ...'I want to be here with you to...'as she kissers his lips softly...her lips still resting lightly on his ... 'I want us....'. keeping their foreheads together their noses touching each other smiling....'.but I really got to go right now.... Saying softly as she smiles '

Armaan: Armaan smiles ..looking down looks up again at her. moving her hair back her ear' smiling'.ok...'ok..go..as he kissers her forehead ' I'll call you..

Bharti: gets out from the car....you better as she smiles.. he smiles back at her .. pulls away the car ..'.Bharti stood there watching the car disappear in to the far road'as she was still lost with him.. Still feeling his heart beat keeping her palm on her chest feeling her heart' turning herself around stretching her arms taking along deep breath smiles looking up in to the light blue sky....'Mum he is amazing ..I think I'm in love..... 'looking up ..smiling away lost with Armaan'

Suddenly familiar voice ringing on her ears'.With whom'?

Bharti: stopped dead in her tracks.....'slowly bring her head down 'Dad!! '.

Mr.Khanna: expression was dead serious, his eyes fully widened.. love With whom Bharti.... '? Looking on at his daughter '...for a answer

Bharti: starts to sweat allover like the whole world was turning around her 'as she hesitates ..'No...'No.. I'm I'm ..not ..in love.. dad'.me...'in love.....'yeah right 'with fake laugh...' .who ..said that...'I was just ..Enjoying the outdoors...' me being the environment... friendly only....' person in... the family....'.dad... i....i....'think.. you ..should..tryout.. the...'new... 'hearing ..aid.... thing '...that'...i was...'

Mr.Khanna: Bharti'..Stop it..'.just don't try to act smart with me young lady.....'where were you last night..? in anger

Bharti: hesitates again...'I...'.I'...was.. with...'with..as he notices her Brother calming... the last bit of the wall....'I was with... Bharkar'...pointing her finger to the direction of her Brother'..

Mr.khanna: what ....! as he turns himself to see Bhaskar on the wall ..'just about to climb down the other side'..come here dragging Bharti along with him 'inside the gates

Bhasker: just about to climb down from the wall'''.

Mr.khanna: Hold it right there'.shouting out loud in anger....

Bharkar : frizzed in shock'.... slowly turns to see his dad & sister....'coming towards him '

Mr.Khanna: Bhaskar stay right there....'.what in gods name is wrong with you..what are you doing'?.. Son you better come with really good explanation for this..... '.stemming with anger while 'Bharti behind her dad 'enjoying every moment'....

Bhakar: still looking frozen hesitates 'I....'I....'.was....'just'...I'.....'was.. I..

Mr.khanna: I was just what Bhaskar...'? Is something stuck inside your mouth son is that why you can't speak up right..'like your sister.. ok ok.. Fine five seconds to explain your reasons to be on top of that wall ..''starting right now... ..'.his arms folded in front of him staring away in anger..

Bhaskar: No...'.No...'.my.. Mouth.. is.. fine 'dad'..I was just'...just....

Bharti: behind her dad she controls her laughter ..now was thinking away of saving her brother...'she starts acting showing her brother ..what to say'

Bhaskar: looks at his sister'...I ...'was....'just ..Flying' ...

Mr.Khanna: What..!!..

Bharti: hitting her head hard'...suddenly Mr.khanna turns to look at her she stops her acting pretends on looking somewhere else ..

Bharkar: No'....No....'not'... not....'.flying....i.. was....'not....'flying ..me flying..in.in.. my dreams..not..here..on this ..wall....'no..no..i was ..not flying.. .i..was..just' just...'Pecking...'No....'No'....watching...'No'. binoculars...'No'...No..

Bharti: hitting her head really hard again....'finally she pointing her finger at bird which was flying by...'

Mr.Khanna: pretty much irritated.... one second son ..I'll keep you permanent on that wall ...'.

Bharkar: No..dad..please.....'as he looks at the bird.....'he finally gets it

I.... 'was....'Bird'... watching.. ..I ..was....bird watching Yes.. Yes..' I was bird watching... jumps up in delight that he got the words right.... 'suddenly he slips falling down the wall '.. .

Mr.Khanna & Bharti :shouts out ....'Bhaskar'. Coming running towards him '