MISTAKE [ArBi & BP] - PART 01 PG 3 {20/02} - Page 3

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Firstly dear.. a warm welcome to the BB Forum.. 🤗 It feels awesome to hv someone sooo super talented like u to grace our forum..n join in the elite BB creatives ranks..!!

N OMG girl.. ur character sketch n intro was super duper awesome..!! Gosh.. quite a hard hitting intro.. for a minute i had to pinch myself to realise it was Bharti who was weeping.. 😔 But gosh... girl, u sure rocked !!

What to say abt the first epi.. superb... there really cant b a better way to introduce ArBi in the track than an all out FIGHT OUT.. ❤️ Luvd it soo soo much! n wow yaar Bharti in red suit must b looking ravishing.. no wonder Armu wanted to check her out..!!

Luvd it to bits.. pls. keep up the gr8 work..!! Rocking.. 👏

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Welcome to the BB forum Lali🤗
Totally loving your FF😊
Its quite different, specially the intro.
Continue soon😊

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

outstanding dear👏👏👏

the way you discribe evrything is awsome

and the way armaan and bharti was fighting was sweet

i love these kind of sweet fight bew them

loved it

armaan is really HOT the way you discribed him

loved it

do write more and soon

love it again👏

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome part dear...
Loved it to the core...
You are very good at writing...
The way you describe the scene is awesome...
And as Tanu Said...
WELCOME TO THE TEAM OF CREATIVES OF BB!!!!
Now coming to the part....
The way Armaan And Bharti fight is awesome...
I really enjoyed reading that part....
Armaan calling bharti chilli powder...
It was so cute....
Continue soon....
Cant wait for the next part...
Thanx for the PM...
Keep the PMs coming....

Take Care
Zoya

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

Very well written 👏 loved the way you described the entire thing ... loved Armaan and Bharti's first meeting ... but it seems Armaan and anu knows her quite well from before ...Armaan is really naughty😉 bechari Bharti ko kitna tang kar raha hai ... Amarjeet is really sweet 😛 the father-daughter relation is awesome ...want to know the secret that he is hiding from Bharti ...

Are you a REMIX fan by any chance ?? ( plz don't mind , i am just asking it ) because these 'kukreja' and 'makhija' reminds me of Sonia Ray and Sumeet ahuja of remix ...😆

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

OMG Lali!! ..........😆

That was PERFECTTTTT!! Awesome!! 👏
THANK U SOO MUCH

I loveee how Armaan is all arrogant and acting like he's all HOT and girls go after him...I've always love the flirtatious side of Armaan is BB and in your FF i can see about the same thing going on..!
Yep i also luved that side of his he is just too cute n hot lol

The way you described him clad in that red shirt got me feeling all excited for some reason...😆 I can ONLY imagine how uberly cute he must be looking or should i Say HOT and Sexy too like what Bharti felt....😳..
Yeh he is such a cutie pie i know wat u mean but at the same times he is too cute lol he is mixture of both perfect person for that line.. lol yep make me blush too just thinking abt it...

Love the naughty side of him..How immdiately changed "Anu" to "Darling" only to make Bharti all confused and ponder whether this Anu is his wife or Girlfriend..😆 Very mischevious and i LOVE IT!...

well u will get to see more naughty mischeviouse frm him lol which will be like a toture to bharti...

Great going!

Loving your storyline and the flasback thing now..

Can't wait to see what happens during Bharti's Birthday..:)
well its not written in flashback but if u want u can imagine it in flashback but i will cover the scene in intro again... lots of things will be happening on her bday

Oh yes i also love the fact that Armaan invited himself to the Bdae party..😆 😆..So cute! and that WHOLE car incident scene was 👍🏼....
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