MISTAKE [ArBi & BP] - PART 01 PG 3 {20/02}

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M I S T A K E

C R E D I T T O T H E M A K E R O F T H I S S I G N A T U R E

It's always a dream to find the true love. Love is a four letter word which means a lot than its length, it is something which can change a life forever, for good or for bad. Love is beautiful but at the same time it got another side. A side which can lead it way to the misunderstandings, a side that always steal one away from another. Some are fortunate to face these and still be together and some are unfortunate to get a partner who won't be with them. But every love story has an ending and only leaves behind the memories. The ending can be happy, wanting to always bring back those memories or sad, with a huge pain cause of that Mistake'

:..Characters..:

Armaan Sinha

Bharti Bhatia

Bhaskar Garewal

Payal Mehera

Nanneh

Anu Sinha

Gyaan Gupta

Vineeta Lamba

:..
Introduction..:

The bird flew across the sky thrashing against the light wind. The sound of their twitter was filling everywhere but also mixing with the populated pollution town. A girl was seating on the couch hugging her legs, flicking through the channel with no interest at all. She had one hand on her head as she held her forehead. Her eyes started to watering up as she just pressed the buttons on the remote control aimlessly, she was paying no attention but was lost in her own world staring into space she continues to press the buttons.

Her smooth milky skin was turned to a pale weak body. She let her free hand run quickly through her silk, straight long hair. Her almond eyes, which were compared to diamonds, which made many people to loose their sense now hiding from everyone. Scared and loneliness was clearly visible on her eyes. Tear drops fall on to her rosy cheeks which lost their glow. She slowly brought her feet down and stood up. Straighten the wrinkled sari which was hugging her beautiful tall body. The tears haven't disappeared but endlessly fall down

Boy ' Bharti

As soon as she heard the husky voice of the boy, her body react quickly, wiping away the tears and becoming the strong woman which she tries to fool everyone with

As her hair fly to the wind she turned around to find the person who she sees as the angel for her life standing in front of her, he had concern written all over his face. His grey eye has turned moisture with a hint of guilt hidden. He tried to bring up a smile on his face but it didn't reach much far

Boy ' Bharti he said again walking toward her until when' until when would you lie to yourself and the rest of the world? He questioned sternly. Embarrassed Bharti look down unable to make eye contact Bharti look at me dame it he shook her holding on to her arm Bharti ' just because of you I have a meaning of my life' you and Jia are the world to me' the promise I made few years ago..

Bharti ' BHASKAR! She shouts furiously pulling away his hand which held her securely promise, promise, promise! Its all because of this bloody promise she shriek if you haven't made that promise to my dad then I wont be here would I!? Bhaskar tried to calm her down but she didn't stopped and cried her heart out, slowly dragging herself on to the ground why can't you just let me die'! She said choking on her own tears then I wont see this day' when I try to suicide why did you stopped me!!

Bhaskar ' Bharti!! His arm rose to slap her but immediately stopped when he noticed the watery eyes looking back at him innocently. He falls on his knees next to Bharti and hold her face in his hand just think about Jia, that girl needs you Bharti.. She needs her mother; you are the world to her... Would you just leave her in this cruel world? Answer me he asked gently as he wiped the tears away which were on her cheek

Girl (Kid) ' Mama!!

They turned around to find a 7 year old girl dressed in white frock with matching headband standing in front of them holding onto a news paper which was crumpling under her small hands and flicking in the air to get Bharti's attention

Bharti immediately wiped the tears away while a huge smile appeared on Bhaskar's face which reached from one side to another. He held his arms wide; the girl at once took the advantage and ran toward him crashing on to a tight hug

Girl ' Bhaskar Chachu!!

Bharti ' Jia... tum itni subha suba she asked confusedly

Jia ' mama' she showed the crumpled news paper mama yeh dekho Armaan uncle or Payal chachi ki engagement'

Bharti instantly snatched the paper away from Jia and looked at the front cover, trying to stop the flood of tears which were in an urged to burst out.

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.lali. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first of all hi guys... i am lali i am a big fan of ArBi but sadly i didnt visit the forum till BB ended, still upset over the fact that BB has ended but still hoping for BB2 anyway i hope u like my FF...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG
this is awsome dude
i loved it
fantabulas
i am waiting for next part
loved it
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Girl Well come to the number 1 rocking coolest BB forum & always will be in Indian forums like for ever 😎 🤗😳
WOW man your FF is sooooooo need know like mystery thing is going on here girl i love the true love interdiction fabulous
man this is sooooooooo cool awesome girl !!!!👏 love ur FF
Armaan payal
engagement bhaskar bharti ok ok need to know badly the reason behind this like our dream couples with opposite persons NOOOOO 😭 🥺man sooooooooo need know ............. please waiting dying to find out continue sooooooooooon !!!!
take care
naley!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome concept...
Loved it...
Its quite different from the other FFs...
Please add me to your PM list

Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I think i hav read this sumwhere ....
Yh ..got it ...!


Gr8 start Lali ....do continue ..!
👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello Lali!

Welcome to the BB Forum and most importantly to writing BB FFs..:)
Okay your FF..My god reading every word is so full of suspense!..Like first you said "Boy" then i thought it was a young Boy but then it turned to be Bhaskar....😆
Love the suspense thing that is going on..Liking the way you started off..! But Payal and Armaan's engagement..?...🥺......😆.......and why is Bharti appearing
so drain/worn out..?..😭........😆
Well do carry on yea..It's looking good! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: LaLi17

<div align="center"><font size="7" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#996666">M</font> <font color="#0099ff">I</font> <font color="#996666">S</font> <font color="#0099ff">T</font> <font color="#996666">A</font> <font color="#0099ff">K</font> <font color="#996666">E</font></font>

<font size="1">C R E D I T T O T H E M A K E R O F T H I S S I G N A T U R E</font>


<font size="2" color="#666666" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">It's always a dream to find the true love. Love is a four letter
word which means a lot than its length, it is something which can change a life
forever, for good or for bad. Love is beautiful but at the same time it got
another side. A side which can lead it way to the misunderstandings, a side
that always steal one away from another. Some are fortunate to face these and
still be together and some are unfortunate to get a partner who won't be with
them. But every love story has an ending and only leaves behind the memories.
The ending can be happy, wanting to always bring back those memories or sad,
with a huge pain cause of that Mistake…
</font>


<p align="center"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><font color="#0099ff">:..</font><font color="#996666">Characters</font><font color="#0099ff">..:</font>



<font color="#999999">Armaan Sinha



Bharti Bhatia



Bhaskar Garewal



Payal Mehera



Nanneh



Anu Sinha



Gyaan Gupta



</font><font color="#999999">Vineeta Lamba</font>



<font color="#0099ff">:..</font>
<font color="#996666">Introduction</font><font color="#0099ff">..:</font></font></p>
<p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The bird flew across the sky thrashing
against the light wind. The sound of their twitter was filling everywhere but
also mixing with the populated pollution town. A girl was seating on the couch
hugging her legs, flicking through the channel with no interest at all. She had
one hand on her head as she held her forehead. Her eyes started to watering up
as she just pressed the buttons on the remote control aimlessly, she was paying
no attention but was lost in her own world staring into space she continues to
press the buttons.</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Her smooth milky skin was turned to a pale
weak body. She let her free hand run quickly through her silk, straight long
hair. Her almond eyes, which were compared to diamonds, which made many people
to loose their sense now hiding from everyone. Scared and loneliness was
clearly visible on her eyes. Tear drops fall on to her rosy cheeks which lost
their glow. She slowly brought her feet down and stood up. Straighten the
wrinkled sari which was hugging her beautiful tall body. The tears haven't
disappeared but endlessly fall down</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Boy – Bharti </font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">As soon as she heard the husky voice of the
boy, her body react quickly, wiping away the tears and becoming the strong
woman which she tries to fool everyone with</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">As her hair fly to the wind she turned around
to find the person who she sees as the angel for her life standing in front of
her, he had concern written all over his face. His grey eye has turned moisture
with a hint of guilt hidden. He tried to bring up a smile on his face but it
didn't reach much far</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Boy – Bharti he said again walking toward
her
until when… until when would you lie to yourself and the rest of the
world? He questioned sternly. Embarrassed Bharti look down unable to make eye contact Bharti look at
me dame it he shook her holding on to her arm Bharti … just because of
you I have a meaning of my life… you and Jia are the world to me… the promise I
made few years ago..</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Bharti – BHASKAR! She shouts furiously
pulling away his hand which held her securely
promise, promise, promise!
Its all because of this bloody promise she shriek if you haven't made
that promise to my dad then I wont be here would I!? Bhaskar tried to calm
her down but she didn't stopped and cried her heart out, slowly dragging
herself on to the ground
why can't you just let me die…! She said
choking on her own tears
then I wont see this day… when I try to suicide
why did you stopped me!!</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Bhaskar
Bharti!! His arm rose to slap her but immediately stopped when he noticed
the watery eyes looking back at him innocently. He falls on his knees next to
Bharti and hold her face in his hand
just think about Jia, that girl needs you Bharti.. She needs her mother;
you are the world to her... Would you just leave her in this cruel world?
Answer me he asked gently as he wiped the tears away which were on her cheek</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Girl (Kid) – Mama!!</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">They turned around to find a 7 year old girl
dressed in white frock with matching headband standing in front of them holding
onto a news paper which was crumpling under her small hands and flicking in the
air to get Bharti's attention</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Bharti immediately wiped the tears away while
a huge smile appeared on Bhaskar's
face which reached from one side to another. He held his arms wide; the girl at
once took the advantage and ran toward him crashing on to a tight hug</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Girl – Bhaskar Chachu!!</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Bharti – Jia... tum itni subha suba she
asked confusedly
</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Jia – mama… she showed the crumpled news
paper
mama yeh dekho Armaan uncle or Payal chachi ki engagement…</font></p><div align="left">
</div><p align="left"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Bharti instantly snatched
the paper away from Jia and looked at the front cover, trying to stop the flood
of tears which were in an urged to burst out.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font size="2" face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif"><font size="3" color="#996666">* * * * * * * * * *</font></font></p>

</div>



welcomee new member wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww & waiting for next part:)
.lali. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

OMG

this is awsome dude
i loved it
fantabulas
i am waiting for next part
loved it
do write more


hey thank u soo much lol thanks yaar
will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey !!! welcome to BB forum 🤗
What a start dear !! It's freaking awesome 👏 loved every bit of it .... It's completely different ...
really looking forward to your next update...
really want to know what actually happened ...
Please continue soon ...😛
Arpita ....

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