FF~*Tera hone laga hoon *~ Part 19 on pg 29 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Awesome part...
Loved it to bits...
NOW I REALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
wow.....awsome going.love it
keep it up
feb... the way the are coming closer and that kiss give me gosebamse......plzzz continue soon....cant wait now
Edited by ghazal_naz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Sohana...dear....🤗 luv u ...luv u ...luv u ...luv u...luv u...luv u......
AWESOME...super BLOCKBUSTER....ROCKING Epi....👏
ArBi KISSEDDDDDD.....wooooooowwwwwww soooooo roooomantic!! i hv gone...crazy....total nuts....
Gosh i can actually visualise the entire 'Kiss' part with the 'Pehli Baar Mohabbat' song playing in the Background....!! ❤️m sooo happy!! 🤪
n girl..luvd the entire ' Stealing Glances ' part....Beautiful..!!
Write the next one soon...pls... cant wait...gone wacko..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
hey !! great update ... loved every part of it ... it was very romantic .😛
the last scene was awesome ... can't wait for the next part ...
please continue soon . :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Hello everyone😊

Glad all of you liked part 7, epecially all the romance/flirting/kiss😳 I thought the end might have been too much, I was going to edit the kiss, but I'm glad to see that it was accepted....
Thank you for all the lovely comments.😛 Thanks Humera, Noorie, Nehanne, Jassie, Kaninika, Naley, Vini, Zoya, Ghazal, Tanu, Arpita, Nikitaira and Love_ya(sorry don't know your name). The comments and constant encourage means a lot🤗
@ Humera Welcome😊 Thanks for reading my FF and I'm glad to hear that you like the FF and are enjoying it. I will try to keep the characters as the show as much as possible. I was also sad when it ended, still am, but by writing this, I feel like they are still alive, if you know what I mean...I hope the upcoming parts live up to your expectations😊
@Jassie. I will add more of Jiya in soon. Here's a hug back to you🤗Thanks for all the encouragement.😊
@Vini I was smiling the whole time I was writing it😳😊 and yup, we all love Armaan the flirt😊 Thanks so much for the birthday wishes, really made my day😊 Hope you enjoy the next parts...
@Tanu Thanks for the sweet comments. Luv you too🤗Glad you could visualise it all😳
Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

~*~* Tera hone laga hoon *~*~

PART 7

Bharti: "Well... I'm not sleepy anymore..."

Armaan just looked down at her and was smiling. Bharti smiled back at him, but started getting a little uncomfortable. Armaan was just gazing at her and smiling and this made Bharti blush.

Bharti: "Armaan...Jiya's forms.."

Armaan suddenly came back to reality and loosened his grip on her, before taking a step backwards.

Armaan: "Oh yes...the coffee?"

Bharti: "Um, I'll make it."

Armaan went to sit at the table and looked at the forms, but he couldn't concentrate. His mind kept on replaying the moment that had just happened. He couldn't believe that they had kissed, well more than anything, he was surprised that Bharti had responded to the kiss and kissed him back. Before this Bharti had always kept herself distant from him and he wondered what had changed. How he wished he could know what was going through Bharti's mind, what she was feeling...

On the other hand, Bharti made the coffee and while she was stirring she got lost in her thoughts. She didn't know what just happened. She didn't feel like herself, well she didn't feel like Bhaskar. So who was she right now? Bharti? All she knew is that she didn't mind what just happened.

Armaan: "Bharti?"

Armaan had come back to the kitchen and was standing next to her watching her intently.

Bharti: "Huh? Oh here's the coffee..."

Armaan and Bharti had their coffee and completed the forms. When Bharti was filling in the forms, Armaan couldn't help but just watch her. She really was beautiful. Bharti looked up at him and caught him watching her. She raised her eyebrows at him and he just shook his head.

Bharti: "You should probably get some sleep, you've got to drop Jiya at school early in the morning"

Both of them got ready for bed and Bharti fell asleep quickly. It took Armaan a while to fall asleep, as he was still thinking about how things had suddenly changed between him and Bharti. He wondered what the future held in store for them. All of these thoughts swirled around in his mind before he finally fell asleep.

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The next morning Bharti awoke to a beautiful sunny morning. She stretched in bed and woke up with a smile. She hadn't slept that well in a while. The clock said that it was 9 am. Now that's more like it she thought to herself. The house was still, so she knew she was alone. Bharti looked over to Armaan's side of the bed and found a note on his pillow. It read:

Good morning Beautiful

Hope you slept well. I'm going to leave Jiya at school and then stop by MU to see if anything important is going on. I'll come pick you up around midday. Breakfast is in the kitchen.

Don't miss me too much 😉

Armaan

Bharti smiled upon reading the note and went to freshen up a bit. After brushing her teeth she got herself a cup of coffee, which made her smile as she remembered all that happened the previous night. She made her way to the balcony and was enjoying the warm sun rays on her face while sipping her coffee. All of a sudden the mug was not there when she raised it to her lips. She opened her eyes and looked around and that's when she saw him...

Bharti: "Aaargh KK!? What are you doing here?"

KK: "Bhaskar, where are your manners?"

Bharti: "Oh I'm sorry. Hello KK, how are you? How's the family? Would you like a cup of tea?!"

KK: "All that sarcasm...I thought you would be glad to see me..."

Bharti: "Have I ever been glad to see you? I was having such a good morning and then you had to show up."

KK: " Oh come on Bhaskar, now my feelings are hurt."

Bharti: "Then why are you smiling."

KK:(smiling wider) "It's a beautiful day"

Bharti: "Yeah, it was..So what's going to happen now, what is the new problem going to be or are you just going to let me find out myself?"

KK: "Why are you always so negative Bhaskar? I just dropped by to see how things are going."

Bharti(raising eyebrows): "Well, ever since you changed me from a man to a woman and then made me face problem upon problem after that, I tend to expect the worst from you."

KK:(laughing) "Well, it's all the result of your own doings..So how is married life and everything well with the husband?"

Bharti: "As if you don't know..."

KK: " You are quite fortunate to have a husband like Armaan, I can see that he loves you very much. That little angel Jiya too."

Bharti:(looking at him seriously) "KK, what's going to happen to them when this is all over?"

KK: "That's all up to you"

Bharti: "Do you ever give straight answers!?"

KK: "I don't think you need to worry about that now, you still have a long journey ahead. Bhaskar, I don't know if you know this, but it's going to take you nine months to have a baby. At the rate you're going, you're going to be a woman for years."

Bharti just got so irritated with KK that she picked up the vase on the table to throw at him. But like the mug of coffee, that too disappeared.

KK: (raising his palm to Bharti)"Shanti Bharti...""

KK turned around to go, but before leaving he turned to Bharti and smiled.

KK: "By the way, I'm going to let you find out your next problem all by yourself"

And with that he disappeared.

Bharti: (shouting at the sky)"Yes, go! Go and spoil someone else's morning."

Sulkingly Bharti went inside to shower and get ready. Her mood lifted slightly when she saw the breakfast Armaan had left for her accompanied by a single red rose. She thought to herself that she'll be fine and her day will definitely improve once she sees Armaan and goes to work. She put the trouble that KK had warned her about out of her mind. She finished up her late breakfast and went to look through some of her files. A few minutes later the doorbell rang.

Bharti: "That better not be you KK!"

She opened the door to find a young pretty looking woman. Behind her stood a stern-looking old man and an large old woman with a very irritated look on her face.

Young woman: (smiling) "Hello"

Bharti: "Hello, how can I help you?"

The large woman looked like she took offence by this for some reason.

Large woman: "You can let us in and give us something to drink. It's so hot! And then you can get our bags."

Bharti: "Excuse me? Look, what ever you're selling, I don't want to buy."

Bharti started to close the door and the young woman held the door.

Young woman: "Relax Mama. Um, is this Mr. Armaan Sinha's house."

Bharti: "Yes, it is..."

Young woman: "Um, who are you?"

Bharti:"Who are you?"

Young woman: "I'm Tamanna. Armaan is my brother. These are our parents(gesturing to the man and woman)"

Bharti looked at them in shock.

Bharti: "Um, come in."

Tamanna: "May I now ask who you are?"

Bharti: "I'm...Armaan's wife."

Armaan's mother: "What!? He remarried and he didn't even tell us!? I'm going to kill him!"

Bharti: (taken aback) "Um, just excuse me."

Bharti went to her room and closed the door.

Bharti: "KK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
aaawww scho cute yaar esp the letter on pillow cont soon xx
Edited by BlessedCuteOne - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Hahahah Armaan is too cute!!! " Don't miss me too much" Love it when he says such things!..

The lil' note he wrote was so sweet and YES!! Bharti feeling more like a woman!! Love the whole KK entry! It's so like how it is whenever KK appears in BB..Funny..:) Woah a new twist huh!! Armaan's parents coming into the pict!! I likeeee so bharti meets her sasural..Will be fun!!
Waiting for the next update!!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Armaan's parents....That's going to be reallie interesting.....
Sohana can't wait for your next part...KK up to some mischief in Bhaskar's life...
Bharti loves the way things are going and so does Armaan...Reallie lurve how he called her beautiful and was thinking about her before sleeping...The note was so cute and sho shweet!!!!!Awwwww
Keep writing more....
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Lovely Sohana👏
Loved Armaan's letter.😊
KK is back, I am so happy.😊
Bharti's saas sasur and sis in law
Can't wait for the next part.😍

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