FF~*Tera hone laga hoon *~ Part 19 on pg 29 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it Sohana😃
Can't wait to know what will happen on Bharti's birthday.
Possibly Armaan will do something naughty😆 I love the flirty Armaan😳

But KK?😲 I am really worried about Bharti😒



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey girl love it 🤗 simply love mother daughter parts just awesome very sweet jiya deserves a mother like bharti all soooooo much

girl wow Armaan bharti all alone me will definitely need extra like loadz of oxygen 🤪or very hotsexy life guard ☺️ 😆
bharti's B'day nice wow super sexy armaan by her side
girl please continue sooon just thinking about it making me all go crazy/nuts
loving it soooooooooooooo much
take care
Naley

Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part dear 👏 but what is KK's plan ??
eagerly waiting to know what will happen on Bharti's birthday ...
loved reading this part ...
Bharti-jia moments were awesome .. loved the poem written by jia ..
please continue soon ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello!! okay so I just started reading your ff and i'm totally in love with it... i stayed up all night to read all the part..its just too good..too cute...too awesome!! oh my god I wished this had happened in the show ..that would've been just great!!!! so basically i'm in love wit this story and eagerly waiting for the next part!! great job 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you so so very much everyone, both active and silent readers!😊 Thank you Sejal, Mahnaz, Tanu, Vini, Ghazal,Kaninika, Naley, Arpita, Humera...all of you...I always read of of your comments and they always bring a smile onto my face! 😃

I'm really happy that all of you are taking the time to read my FF and are enjoying it...sorry about the short and infrequent updates...please bear with me.

Sohana😊

Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

~*~* Tera hone laga hoon *~*~

PART 18

Bharti woke up to the sound of the birds and wondered when she had fallen asleep....She had spent a while just laying in bed and thinking about what KK had said. She had no idea what he had meant and decided to push it out of her mind. Today was her birthday and she wanted to enjoy it, she would deal with the new problem when it comes. She looked around the empty room and wondered where Armaan could be, she hadn't seen him since he disappeared last night. Bharti got out of bed and stretched walking towards the bathroom....she suddenly stopped in front of the mirror, she was very shocked with what she saw....Staring back at her from the mirror was a man...she was completely still for a moment. She spun around, but saw no-one else in the room. She faced the mirror again, the man was still there. She reached foward to touch the image and all she felt was the cold glass of the mirror.

Bharti: "BHASKAR!?!?!"

She screamed, then she screamed some more because her voice was just like Bhaskar's. He looked down at himself and then back at the mirror. He touched his face and his chest and was trying to believe what he saw before his eyes...Suddenly he started to scream again.(imagine scene when Bhaskar has just seen that he is a woman)

Bhaskar: "Wait! Why am I screaming?! I'm Bhaskar...hahaha, I'm Bhaskar-the-man again! "

Bhaskar started doing he a little victory dance, air punches and all. He was jumping around and then abruptly stopped. He went closer to the mirror again and pinched himself hard.

Bhaskar: "Ouch! Okay, okay, well this is definitely real....(turning and viewing himself from the front, side and behind) Hmm...KK?! What sort of cruel joke is this?"

Bhaskar stood waiting, but neither did KK appear, nor did he get any sort of reply.

Bhaskar: "KK? Is this for real now, am I really myself again? But what is this? Why do I have a beard? I didn't have one when I became Bharti....Oh well, who cares! I'm Bhaskar again! Woohooo."

Bhaskar started dancing around again and was jumping up and down when he heard his phone ring, he looked down and saw that it was Tamanna's call and his smile immediately faded.

Bhaskar: "Oh no, Tamanna....wait, even worse, that must be Jiya's call for me. What must I do now? How can I speak to her like this? She would want to speak with Bharti...KK....? I need your help, please! What must I do, please help me!"

Now KK appeared smiling his usual serene smile, which irritated Bhaskar so much.

KK: "Bhaskar....happy birthday...do you like my gift?"

Bhaskar: "Yes KK, thank you, thank you so much, but this must be Jiya's call, what must I do? How do I talk to her like this?"

KK: "Well, I don't know, you're Bhaskar now, that's what you've always wanted. You always wanted to get away from all this and continue your life as Bhaskar, so now here's your chance."

Bhaskar: (Looking extremely torn and sad.)"I know, but what about Jiya?!"

KK: "What about Jiya? It's not like she's your daughter...(raising his eyebrows) Why do you care so much now. I thought you'd be so happy to be Bhaskar and you'd be eager to restart your life. "

Bhaskar: (quietly)"I am...but Jiya...."

KK: "Look Bhaskar, you can't have it both ways, you're either Bhaskar or you're going to be Bharti..."

Bhaskar: "Jiya knows Bharti and wants to speak to her..."

KK: "Um, I know that, now what are you going to do?"

Bhaskar: "I don't know...."

KK: "Bhaskar, what do you want to do?"

Bhaskar: "Um...speak to Jiya...."

KK: "Really now....are you sure?"

Bhaskar: (answered wearily, knowing that his answer would lead to some sort of complication)"Yes I'm sure..."

KK: "Okay."

And with that, KK disappeared....

Bhaskar shouted out for KK and realised that his voice now sounded like Bharti's again and he turned back to look at his reflection. There, much as he had expected, he saw Bharti...

Bharti: "Okay, I guess I'm Bharti again...Oh KK, can you find no-one else in this world to mess with besides me!?"

Bharti answered the call, as poor Tamanna had tried calling for the second time.

Bharti: "Hello.."

Tamanna: "Good morning birthday girl...Happy birthday from Aman and I.

Bharti: "Hey Tamz, thanks so much..."

Tamanna: "So...what kept you so very busy early in the morning that you couldn't answer the phone?""

Bharti: "What..oh, um nothing...."

Tamanna: "Oh really?! My bro can be quite, um distracting...I understand..."

Bharti: "No no, it wasn't anything like that, in fact I have no idea where he is, I haven't seen him since last night..."

Tamanna: "What!? He wasn't even with you at the start of your birthday and he isn't even with you on your birthday morning!? Honestly, he can be so silly sometimes, just wait until I speak to him...."

Bharti: "No Tamz, it's alright. I'm sure he has some important work and I'll probably see him in a little while..."

Tamanna: "Wow, defending him like a loyal wife already..huh, not bad...anyway, I wish you all the best, may you forever be surrounded by happiness and success...okay, hold on, little Miss Jiya is very impatient to speak to you...hold on."

Jiya: "Bharti Mama! Happy birthday!"

Bharti: "Thank you my princess."

Jiya: "I hope you have a very special day, I'm sure Dada will make it one to remember...but I can't wait for your next birthday...."

Bharti: "And why is that?"

Jiya: "Because then I'll be able to spend it with you!"

Bharti: (her smile fading)"Awww...I wish you were here now."

Jiya: "Me too, okay, well you enjoy your special day, I miss you, love you Mama."

Bharti: "Love you too Jiya, bye-bye."

Bharti cut the call and sat down on the bed with her head in her hands. She didn't know what was happening..she had been Bhaskar again, but now she was Bharti and she didn't think she would be Bhaskar again for a while....And now she wondered if she really wanted that...She would miss this new life so much, Jiya, Tamanna.....Armaan. What was she thinking?! She was supposed to be Bhaskar-the-man...what was all of this!? She was so confused...and she was all alone, she really wished she had someone here with her...Jiya or Payal or Armaan...

Bharti: "If this was the morning, what was the rest of the day going to be like!?"

And with that she threw herself back on the bed and just lay there.

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part loved it :) plz write more soon :D cant w8 :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part dear...
Loved it
Its great that Bharti is starting to like her new life and is thinking about it
Please continue soon with a longer part

Take Care
Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Nice part dear......
But missed Armaan a lot.........
Cant wait for the nxt one........Continue sooooooon

TC
Mahnaz
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Posted: 15 years ago
well awsome part as always😉
but i think it was a littal sort then usual😭
but still fun..... i like the way bhaskar reacted... just like what he did when he sometimes become in BB.... but now i am really intrested to know what will bharti chose
which life will she want....... i hope she will understand that what armaan and jiya meant to her and she want to live this life😳😳😳
plzzzzz coun sooonnnnn
i reallyy want to know what armaan is up to😉... i know he will do something good😉

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