ArBi One Shot - Once Upon a Time in Rain - Page 3

Originally posted by: freezinme

wow zoya.. its soo magical and amazing..
u noe wen u started to tell about his past.. hw he loved rain
i ws soo much lost in it that i forgot it ws a story he ws telling..
and then wen u wrote the driver told him the destination ws here.. i ws like.. damnnn.... it ws all a dream??/ 😆... n den after a while i realized.. oh noo.. that ws the story 😆 but it hapnd in real.. wooww that ws really cuuuteeee
lovelyy
muwahhh
tiya

Originally posted by: violet_231

nice short story zoya... ive heard that falling in love makes poets out of people..but arbi's love is making quite a few of us write stories and screenplays ;-))) long live arbi's love!!!!

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

lovely one shot Zoya👏
it was too cute😛
as cute as ArBi😳
loved the "stupid" part.😊
BTW what happened in between? I mean why Armaan was going to meet an unknown girl?
Kanu Di

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Thanx Di

Glad that you liked it

Well his mother persuaded him

I have written that

May be it did not came in your sight

Take Care

Zoya

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

I have seen it dear. Actaully I wanted to say, if he loved Bharti why he listened to his mother? is it because he didn't want to make his mother sad?

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Absolutely love it! so romantic and the rain scenes are always lovely. you really write beautifully. intense at times and subtle at other times. its perfect.can not wait to read more of your ff and other scenes.