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Posted: 15 years ago
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Finally sonali and Pushpak sorted out theyr differences that decided that they should rehearse at sonali's house ...
Vineeta and Gyan brought their files and necessary things and decided to go to vineeta's house for the rehearsal ....
Armaan and Bharti were standing near the reception and discussing about the rehearsal ...
Suddenly Armaan saw all 4 of them coming towards the reception..
Armaan: arre , yeh log toh iss taraf e aa rahe hai ... ab humlog kahan jaye ?
Bharti : arre yeh toh achi baat hai ... unse hi pooch lete hai ke humlogo ko kaunsa gaana gaana chahiye..
Armaan: iss poore bhramand mein tuhein saalah dene ke liye bahut saare log mil jayenge, in logo ko bulane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ...
Bharti couldn't manage to comprehend the entire statement that Armaan said, so she tried calling them but the moment she opened her mouth to call them,Armaan closed her mouth with his hand and dragged her behind Jenny's desk and he sat down and pulled Bharti down too and told her in her ears not to say a word as they are hiding from them....
Bharti: (in a whisper)par humlog aise choro ki tarah kyun chhup rahe hai ? Aisa lag raha hai jaise humlog koi daku hai ...
Armaan: haan... par tum toh daku ki tarah hi dikhti ho aur harkat bhi unke jaise hi karte ho ..
Bharti: tum achanak se mera itna tarif kyun kar rahe ho ??
Armaan: ab chup karogi daku mangal singh... nahi toh chhupne ka koi faida nahi reh jayega...
Bharti and Armaan then silently watched them getting into the elevator ...
Bharti: ab toh woh log chale gaye... kam se kam ab toh humlog chuhe se insan ban sakte hai ...
and she stood up .... : main aur zyada der tak aise niche nahi baith sakti ...
Armaan: Bharti... tumhare nakhre kabhi khatam nahi hota hai na..? pata nahi tum badi kab hogi ??
Bharti: tumhe kya apne samne ek bachi dikhayi de rahi hai ..?
Armaan: tum bhi kisi bachi se kam nahi ho ...
Bharti: okkk Armaan papa.( she said in a childish tone).. ab rehearsal ke baare main soche ?
Armaan: tumhe nahi lagta ke office ke log iss competition ko kaafi seriously le rahe hai ...?
Bharti: haan yaar... mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai .. jaise humlog koi American idol ya Indian idol jeetne wale hai ...
Armaan: par humlog kaun sa gaana gayenge ..?
Bharti: gaa toh humlog bahut kuch sakte hai , par ....
suddenly heerabai and Narain came and asked them which song should they sing ...
Bharti and Armaan were shocked initially but they sweetly replied that they should sing some romantic song ...
Heerabai ... : jamaila !!! romantic gaana toh tum logo ko gaana chahiye , jaise 'pehli baar mohabbat ki hai'... tumlogo pe bahut suit karega ... tum dono ki jodi bahut achi hai ....
humlog ko kuch aur gaana sochna padega....and they both left from there....
Bharti looked completely baffled and asked Armaan: office mein sab ko competition ka bhoot chara hai, isiliye itna ajeeb baatien kar rahe hai ...
Armaan: baatein ajeeb ho sakte hain par idea nahi ... yeh gaana acha hai .... kya kehti ho ?
Bharti: gaana acha hai par mera abhi tak first love hua hi nahi ....
Armaan: tum toh aj tak baaton ko lekar serious nahi the toh achanak se ek gaane ko lekar itna seriously kyun soch rahe hai .... yeh bas ek gaana hai ...
Bharti: par main iss gaane ke saath connect nahi kar payungi...
Armaan: okk... thik hai .... hum log kisi aur gaana select karenge ...
Bharti: thik hai .... sab ko office se chale jaane do ... uske baad humlog rehearse karenge .....
slowly sunny, jenny, heerabai, narain and everyone else left from the office..... Armaan and Bharti were alone now.... they both went to Bharti's cabin.... Bharti called up her bauji and told him that she will be late ... Bauji told her to came as soon as she can sfter finishing her work and also asked her about the 'Haveli' file... Bharti checked on her table and saw the file and told him not to worry as she will bring it along with her when she will go home.... and then she hung up ...
Bharti: so .... Mr. Armaan... ab rehearse kare ??
Edited by BUBLAI - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
Loved both the parts Arpita👏

I am really happy to read about Gyaneeta, I am really missing them😭

loved the funny Men's Universe parts😛

ArBi tooooo cuteeee😛

Continue soon dear, and add more cute ArBi scenes.

BTW missed AJ in these parts😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Nice part dear
Continue soon
I may not be able to comment for a time being as have papers starting
So please dont mind okay
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Nice part dear

Continue soon
I may not be able to comment for a time being as have papers starting
So please dont mind okay
Take Care
Zoya

Thanks dear for commenting .... no,no... i won't mind.... ALL The BESt !!!! for you papers.... Give your best ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Loved both the parts Arpita👏

I am really happy to read about Gyaneeta, I am really missing them😭

loved the funny Men's Universe parts😛

ArBi tooooo cuteeee😛

Continue soon dear, and add more cute ArBi scenes.

BTW missed AJ in these parts😉

Thanks di for such sweet comments... yeah i'll continue soon... and will add more ArBi scenes and AJ too...
Me too missing them all...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

In Amarjeet's house , Amarjeet and Corolla , both were waiting for the singer who will train them ..

Amarjeet: Main tumse kab se pooch raha hoon ke kaun aa raha hai, par tum toh kuch bata hi nahi rahi ho

Corolla: Arre thoda aur sabra karo, jab aayega tab dekh lena..

Amarjeet: woh toh 6:30 baje aanewale the par ab toh 7:30 bajne wala hai, woh kab aayega

Corolla: arre yeh famous log kabhi time pe nahi aata hai, par yeh sab tumhe kaise pata hoga, tumhe toh sirf apne office se matlab hai

Amarjeet: yeh kya gal hui... tum mujhe andar se DEVOUR kar rahe ho ...

Corolla: uff ho !! ab chup bhi karo .. tumhare saath baat karte karte meri saari make-up kharab ho jayegi ...

Amarjeet: mujhe toh intezar karte karte bhook lagna shuru ho gaya ...

Corolla: jao andar jake kitchen se kha lo aur mera sar khana baandh karo ..

AmarjeetLsaying to himself): Chalo bhai, main toh kha leta hoon… pata nahi yeh pagal singer kab ayega…

He goes to the kitchen ans saw tandoori chicken on the table… He saw whether anyone was coming to the kitchen..

Seeing no one ,he started eating it really fast …

AmarjeetLthinking ): shayad yeh who singer ke liye tha… aur mujhe sirf kehti hai diet karo diet karo ..mere liye sandwich aur uske liye tandoori …diet karte karte kya haddi ban jaoon??

Ab mujhe apne hi ghar mein choro ki tarah khana par raha hai … Kya din aa gaye mera…

Ab sochna baandh kar aur jaldi se kha le nahi toh who phir se aa jayegi aur mujhe DEVOUR karegi ….

On the other hand …..

Vineeta and Gyan went to Vineeta's house for rehearsing …

Vineeta opened the door for Gyan and he went inside … then Vineeta switched on the lights and then Gyan saw

the entire house and was amazed by the sight …

gyan: Vinni darling … tum itne bade ghar mein akeli rehti toh ..??

Vineeta: haan… toh kya tumhe bulalu rehne ke liye ..?

Gyan: Idea bura nahi hai … par mera matlab who nahi tha…

Vineeta: toh kya matlab tha Gyan?

Gyan: mera matlab tha ke tum itne bade ghar mein akeli rehti who .. toh tumhe darr nahi lagta..?

Vineeta: oh .. come on Gyan.. main koi chhoti bachi thodi hoon… mujhe apna khayal rakhna aata hai .. aur waise

Bhi main pehle iss ghar main akeli nahi rehti thi …main apne papa aur chacha ke saath rtehti thi … par unke

Death ke baad…………………

Gyan: Oh … vinni darling .. tum upset matt ho .. please… Now cheer up … aur humein ab rehearsal bhi toh karni hai

Vineeta:I am fine Gyan.. thik hai ..tum yahan baitho main zara fresh hoke aati haoon… phir rehearse karenge….

Gyan sat on the sofa downstairs and after 15 mins. Vineeta came down …

Vineeta: ok… chalo ab rehearse karte hai…

Gyan: thik hai … par pehle humein kuch aur gaana sochna padega… mujhse who gaana ho nahi raha hai ..

Vineeta:Main bhi yehi soch rahi thi … Thik hai .. tum kuch suggest karo ..

Gyan: main toh kabse keh rahi hoon ,, dhan ta na pe gaate hai ..

Vineeta:nahi gyan… plz… yeh gaana nahi .. iss main toh female vocalist hi hain nahi

Gyan: hmmm… maine to iss bare mein socha hi nahi …

Vineeta: isiliye kehti hoon … sochne na kaam mujhpar choda karo ..

Gyan: thik hai .. toh tum hi bolo …

Vineeta: humlog pehla nashe pe gaayenge.. wat say ?

Gyan: gaana toh accha hai … par …

Vineeta: abb koi par war nahi … aise toh humplog do din tak sirk gaane hi select karte reh jayenge…

Gyan: thik hai…

Then they both started rehearsing… After 40 mins..

Gyan: abb bas karo … mujhse aur nahi ho raha hai (and he lied down on the sofa)…mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai

Abb kuch khilao toh atleast ..

Vineeta: ghar pe job hi hain .. who toh tumhe pasand nahi aayega …

Gyan: haan bilkul .. tumhari who green vegetables ka sabzi and low fat and no-oil wala khana mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai

Vineeta: toh phir pizza order karte hai ? wat say ?

Gyan : great idea..

Then he called up Dominoz and ordered pizza for both of them and then rehearsed again until the pizza came..

In the office after everyone left Armaan and Bharti decided to rehearse in Bharti's cabin …But 1 hour passed and still they didn't manage to decide the song …

Bharti: nahi Armaan … tum samajh nahi pa rahe ho … hum iss gaane pe nahi gaa sakte …

Armaan: par kyun … yeh toh best song hai … issmein tumhare liye lines zyada hai ..

Bharti: kahan yaar ??? maximum lines toh ek female vocalist ne gaayi hai …. Male singer ka toh hardly kuch lines hai ….

Armaan gave a confused look …

Bharti: aise kya dekh rahe ho ..???

Armaan: mujha lag raha hai ke tum ulta bol rahi ho ….

Bharti then thought about what she said just now and she realized her mistake …

Bharti: main kuch nahi janti par yeh gaana mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai ..

Armaan: thik hai … toh tum hi bolo ke tumhe kaise gaane pasand hai …

Bharti: kuch rocking gaana… aise boring gaane nahi … aur jisme male version zyada ho …

Armaan: par mujhe itna acha gaana aata hi nahi hai ..

Bharti: tumhe kaun zyada gaane ko keh raha hai …

aRMAAN: toh kya main female version gaungi ..

Bharti: aur nahi toh kya … remember … I am The Man !!!

Armaan: yes miss man … par tum shayad bhool rahi ho ke tum ek larki ho …

Bharti: haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan …. Par yeh yaad dilana zaroori tha kya…???????????

Armaan: matlab???

Bharti: matlab yeh ke agar tum koi dhang ka gaana choose karoge toh hi main female vocalist ke lines gaoongi nahi toh … tum hi soch lo ?????

Armaan stood up from his chair and started moving towards where Bharti was standing … Bharti saw him coming towards her and turned the other side … Armaan went near her and stood behind her and said in her ears …

Armaan: (softly)Bharti…. Nahi toh kya soch loon ..??

Bharti could feel his breath on her shoulders … She started feeling a bit awkward …

Bharti: (turned around facing Armaan): nahi toh ……………………….. Armaan kept looking at her …and she could not look into his eyes …looking down she continued ….

Bharti: nahi toh main nahi gaoongi …simple… and she started walking crossing Armaan…

Armaan held her hand instantly … and he slowly started singing '' kuch khaas hai kuch paas hai''…

Bharti turned towards him and saw that Armaan was looking at her ….

*Sohana*Singh* thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aw, love that song...so romantic. good part =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*


Aw, love that song...so romantic. good part =)

Thanks a lot for appreciating ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
Hey Arpita ..
how cum i never got to know about this FF ..
toooo good yaar ....👏👏
Haven't completely read it ...but very well written ..
& I luved it ...
keep it up ...!!
👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Hey Arpita ..
how cum i never got to know about this FF ..
toooo good yaar ....👏👏
Haven't completely read it ...but very well written ..
& I luved it ...
keep it up ...!!
👍🏼

Thanx a lot for appreciating .... that's really sweet of you 😛

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