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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Armaan kept smiling after Bharti left , then he suddenly realised that he should concentrate on the work..
Armaan:(to himself): bahut ho gaya Bharti ke baare mein sochke muskurana... abb kaam pe lag jayo..
and he started checking all the data in Bharti's laptop but he didn't understand the head or tail of it..
Armaan: (again to himself) :mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh main nahi aa raha hai... shuru kahan se karu... bete, tum photowale hi ache the , yeh sab kaam tumhare bas ki nahi hai, aur bolo' Bharti, i can also help you' ... abb help karoge kaise jab kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha...
He atarted reading the data all over again...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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When Bharti reached home, she saw her maa sitting helplessly on the sofa and bauji is going on screaming at nANhe and that too by keeping the door open... she looked at them confusingly...then Nanhe started asking her....
Nanhe: Bhabi , tauji ko samjhayena ki maine woh file nahi khoya hai
Bharti: kaunsi file? mujhe kisi file ke baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata...
Nanhe: aare wohi file jo mein aapke cabin mein rakhke aaya tha, taake aap woh par le...
Bharti: par mujhe toh aisi kisi file ke baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata...
Bauji: dekha, maine kaha tha na ke isne itni important file kho di hai..
Nanhe: arre maine nahi khoyi hai...
Bharti: par kya koi mujhe batayega ke aap log kaunse important file ke baare mein baat kar rahe ho..?
Bauji: arre maine iske haath se tumhare liya haveli ke kuch papers sign karwane ke liye bheja tha... main woh Gwalior ke haweli tumhare naam pe transfer karwana chahta tha.. yeh keh raha hai ki jab woh tumhare cabin gaya tha, toh waha koi nahi tha isiliye usne woh file tumhare table par hi chod ke chala aaya.. aur phir jab ghar wapas aate waqt gaya tha tabhi bhi koi nahi tha ,,,,,, isi laga ke tumne padke sign kar diya hai aur usne file uthakar kar le aaya.. par woh galat file uthakar le aaya hai,,, yeh toh kisi aur cheez ka file hai...
Bharti: mujhe woh file dikhaye jo Nanhe wapas le aaya...
Bauji handed over the file to Bharti... Bharti opened the file and her face lightened up by seeing it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bharti: Nanhe.. thanx yaar ... yeh file tune lekar aaya tha...
she was so happy that she started dancing with maa... everyone was really confused at her behaviour..
maa: aare tumhe kya ho gaya hai, itne khush kyun ho rahi ho ?
Bauji: par beta, tum itne khush kyun ho rahe ho? Nanhe ne toh itna important file kho diya hai...
Bharti:don't worry bauji... woh file mere cabin mein hi hogi, main jaake le aaungi...
Bharti got the file in which she kept the CD... she was very happy...At that moment Armaan called her... Bharti picked up the phone instantly...
Armaan: haan Bharti... tum kab wapas aa rahi ho? mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki main kahan se shuru karu... kya tum thodi jaldi aa sakti ho?
Bharti: ab uski koi zaroorat nahi hai, mujhe woh CD mil gayi hai...
Then she narrated the whole incident to him..
Armaan: chalo yeh toh acha hua ke Nanhe ne woh file utha liya tha... but from next time you should be more careful...
Bharti: haan mere baap ... main dhyaan rakhungi...
Bauji looked at Bharti sharply when she said ' mere baap'... Bharti smiled at him sheepishly...
Armaan: toh phir tum wapas nahi aa rahi ho?
Bharti: nahi , main aa rahi hoon, mujhe waha se apna ek aur file leni hai...
Armaan: ok then see you... I am waiting for you in your cabin only...
Bharti: so sweet Armaan..:)
They hung up the phone...
Bharti told bauji and maa that she is going back to office to bring bauji's file and she left from there...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Awesome dear
Loved it
And please dont feel so sad
You are an awesome writer and the parts are lovely
One suggetion
Just change the title of it and start it as you ff
I am sure more people will come and read it
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
OMG Arpita!!!
Sorry yaar..I didn't knowthat this was a FF....Itz totally brilliant!!!!
Loved every part of it!!!!You should continue writing and like what Zoya said, edit the title and more people will read and comment!!!
Lurved ArBi, Gyaneeta and Amarolla a lot!!!!Keep writing yaar!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Awesome dear

Loved it
And please dont feel so sad
You are an awesome writer and the parts are lovely
One suggetion
Just change the title of it and start it as you ff
I am sure more people will come and read it
Take Care
Zoya

Thanx a lot Zoya for your comments....you are truly a cutiepie.... Actually, no one ever gives their comments, so i was bit sad... but now i am fine... I'll definitely consider your suggestion.... I am thinking of an appropriate title.... As soon as i find one, i'll change the present title...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jassie_17

OMG Arpita!!!

Sorry yaar..I didn't knowthat this was a FF....Itz totally brilliant!!!!
Loved every part of it!!!!You should continue writing and like what Zoya said, edit the title and more people will read and comment!!!
Lurved ArBi, Gyaneeta and Amarolla a lot!!!!Keep writing yaar!!!
Cheers,
Jassie

thanx for such cute comments dear.... Don't be sorry yaar... It's alright... Yeah i'll edit the title as soon as i find an appropriate title... and i'lll keep writing... you are really sweet... tk cr...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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When Bharti reached office, she saw no one around... When she moved towards her cabin, she could hear loud noises coming from her cabin.... When she stepped into her cabin, she was shocked to see everyone in her cabin and they were creating a racket over there....
Bharti tried talking to Armaan, but she was not being able to see him in the crowd .... Armaan saw Bharti searching for someone, and he tried pushing himself among the crowd to reach Bharti.. but no one was allowing him to do so...
Bharti got fed up by seeing all this and she loudly said: yahan pe ho kya raha hai?
But she got no reply... the others were busy shouting among themselves... Armaan tried calling her, but he couldn't manage to.... then he started waving to her... After sometime Bharti saw him and waved him back..
Bharti, by her actions asked him about what is going on... Armaan showed her to wait and he tried pushing himself out of the crowd.... Bharti, seeing that Armaan is unable to come out, she started going inside the crowd to pull him out... Finally, Bhati managed to reach him and then they both pushed themselves together out of the crowd... After coming out of the crowd they both ran outside to where Jenny sits, and then they both let out a sigh of relief...
Bharti: in logon ko achanak se ho kya gaya hai? itna racket kis wajah se?
Armaan: ( he was still panting badly) : Arre yeh log pagal ho chuke hai...
Bharti: woh toh dikhta hi hai, par hua kya hai?
Armaan: Aare tumse phone pe baat karne ke baad, Gyan mere paas aaya aur uske gaane sunne ke liye kaha... maine socha thik hai, sun leta hoon, par achanak se sunny aa gaya aur kehne laga ke usse abhi iss waqt nanhe ke number chahiye kyunki woh Jenny ke saath gaana nahi gaana chahta, main Nanhe ke number de hi raha tha tab achanak Vineeta aake kehne laga ke mujhe pehle uski gaana sunna padega and Gyan started fighting with her.... then Sonali came in complaining about Pushpak that he is not listening to what she is telling him about singing and Pushpak started defending him, and they both started fighting and then Heera bai came in...
Bharti: bas bas main samajh gayi .... par Amarjeet sir kaha the ??
Armaan: Arre Corolla called him and threatened him that if he do not reach home within half an hour then he will be a dead meat.... so he went home...
Bharti started laughing bacause Armaan looked at her and saying these things very innocently...
Armaan: tumhe haasi aa rahi hai, mera toh jaan nikal raha tha...... and then he too started smiling...
Bharti: toh ab yeh batao ke humlog kab competition ke liye practice karenge ?
Armaan: Arre, yehi poochne ke liye toh main tab tumhare cabin mein aaya tha par tab tum apne CD ko lekar worried the, isiliye maine tumse kuch nahi kaha.... mujhe toh laga tha ke shayad tum nahi gaogi...
Bharti: haan main tab worried thi par ab toh nahi hoon na, so bolo kab practice karna hai?
Armaan: yaha toh filhaal kuch nahi ho sakta... humlog canteen mein chale...?
Bharti: thik hai... aur waise bhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai, apna lunch bhi toh nahi kiya tha na...
Armaan: haan, maine bhi... main toh tumhara hi wait lar raha tha... remember?
Bharti: sorry yaar, main ek dum bhool gayi thi ke mujhe lunch break mein tumse milna tha ....
Armaan: it's okk... abb chale?
Bharti: par mujhe apne cabin se file leni hai..
Armaan: kya ? phir se stampede mein maarne ka iraada hai kya?
Bharti: haan, tum sahi keh rahi ho... main baad mein le lungi... ab chalo...
They both went to the canteen....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Arpita,

I have read it.
Its really lovely.👏
loved the way ArBi came out of the crowd.🤣
Gyan and Vinita...they are so sweet...I just can imagine the scene Gyan singing🤣....he is too cute...😳
The name of the FF is very good.👏
its better if you send the link to Zeustina, I mean Tina, so that she can put it in the media centre.

KaninikaDi

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Arpita,

I have read it.
Its really lovely.👏
loved the way ArBi came out of the crowd.🤣
Gyan and Vinita...they are so sweet...I just can imagine the scene Gyan singing🤣....he is too cute...😳
The name of the FF is very good.👏
its better if you send the link to Zeustina, I mean Tina, so that she can put it in the media centre.

KaninikaDi

How to do that ?

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