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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Guys, initially i started this topic as ' Dialogue chains' where everyone can write two or three dialogues and someone else will continue from where the previous person ended... but now i changed it to a FF.... Hope you guys will like it !!!

Bharti did not know who kidnapped Jiya and Jiya seriously got kidnapped by someone else... It is 6 in the evening... Bharti was sitting in her cabin preparing for the presentation that she is supposed to present the next day... Armaan rushes into her cabin...

Armaan: Bharti,Did Jiya called u up ?

Bharti: No .. but why ?

Armaan: it is 6 in the evening and Jiya has still nt returned home... so i thought may be she told something about it to u ...

now someone else plz continue...

Edited by BUBLAI - 15 years ago

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Bharti:She is not at home since 3pm and you come to know about this now for God's sake Armaan she is your daughter How can you be so careless???

Armaan:But Bharti.....

But to late Bharti already left

Take Care

Zoya

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Armaan: What's wrong with her now ? I think i should call at home one more time....

while Armaan was trying his land line, Jenny came and informed him that Amarjeet sir is calling him

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Amarjeet:Kya baat hai bhai Armaan aaj photshoot thi aur tu wahan nahin gaya kya ye teri office hai jo sab teri marzi se hoga aakhir tu kis DILEMMA mein that jo tu nahin gaya??

Armaan:Sir wo meri beti mil nahin rahi hai

Amarjeet:Bhai yeh tou waqai ik Dilemma hai tune uske doston ke ghar phone kiya???

Armaan:Woh kahin nahin hai

Armaan:Sir main usse dhoondne jaa raha hoon

On the otherhand Bharti was in her car driving when she recieves a call

Take Care

Zoya

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Bharti: Hello... who is it ?

From the other end: Bharti aunty .... main Jiya bol rahi hoon

There was a lot of disturbances so Bharti was unable to hear anything properly ...

Bharti: Jiya ... jiya... hello jiya.. can u hear me? Where are u Jiya ?

But Bharti could no longer hear Jiya's voice... the line got disconnected

Bharti immediately called Armaan but his cell was busy.... she then tried calling back the unknown number but it was unreachable.... she wondered where Jiya could be ???

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Bharti again tries Armaan number and this time she succeeds

Armaan:Hello

Bharti:Armaan abhi mujhe kissi unknown number se Jiya ka phone aaya tha wahan per peeche bahut shor tha is liye main theek se sun nahin saki ke Jiya kya kehna chahti thi and the phone diconnected

Armaan:Bharti koi clue hai kaisi awaazein

Bharti:Armaan kuch logon ke zor zor se bolne ki awaazein thi aur haan wahan per paani ki awaaz aa rahi thi jaise ke wo log samander ke paas hon

Armaan:Bharti aisa karo tum beach per pohancho main bhi aata hoon

Both hung up the call and made their way tothe beach

Take Care

Zoya

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

After Armaan and Bharti met on the beach....

Armaan: Bharti.. are u sure ke tumhe aise kuch awazein sunai de rahi thi

Bharti: lagta toh aisa hi hai par main completely sure nahi hoon

Armaan: thik hai Bharti humlog yahan ke logon se poochke dekhte hai... nahi toh ...

Bharti : Nahi toh kya armaan ?

Armaan: i think after that we should inform the police...

Bharti: yeah Armaan ... i also think so ... kyunki mujhe lag raha hai ki kuch garbar hai

armaan: aisa kyun keh rahi hon..?

Bharti : of ho Armaan... Tumhe aisa nahi lagta ki agar woh kidnap ho gayi hoti toh tumhe ransom maangne ke liye koi kidnapper ka phone a jana chahiye tha...

Armaan: Bharti .... toh phir meri Jiya kaha hogi ? mujhe toh kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha....

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Bharti : Dnt worry Armaan ,,, Jiya is definitely fine... bharti tried consoling Armaan.... they asked nearly everyone who were present on the beach showing Jiya's photograph ... but everyone said they have no clue about the child...

Bharti : toh kya kehte ho Armaan ... police ke paas chale ?

Armaan was not paying attention to what Bharti was saying ... Bharti noticed that and asked him about it ..

Bharti : kya hua Armaan ? tum kya soch rahe hon ..?

Armaan : pata nahi Bharti ... par mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ke kahin jiya ko kuch ho toh nahi gaya ...

Bharti : Armaan, tum yeh kya keh rahe hon ? jiya ko kuch nahi ho sakta .. chalo , humlog police ke paas chalte hain .. everything will be fine ...

Armaan : i hope so too... they both headed towards the police station .. just then Armaan receives a phone call .... it was from an unknown number ...

Armaan : hello , kaun hain ..? Jiya , kya tum ho ? please kuch bolo toh sahi ?

from the other end : tum itne jaldi mujhe bhul gaye? Tum mere awaz tak pehchan nahi paa rahe hon ..

Armaan : i am really sorry ... par mujhe sach mein nahi pata ke aap kaun hain ?

from the other end : kya tumhe sach mein nahi pata ke main kaun hoon ?

Armaan : nahi ... aur please .. main abhi bohut pareshan hoon ... toh accha rahega agar aap pls pahelia bujhana baand karengi aur saaf saaf bataye ke aap kaun hain aur apko mujhse kya kaam hain ..?

Armaan said it a bit loudly ... Bharti thought with whom is he speaking ...

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Kahani mein twist😉, I don't want that lady to be Jia's mom, I hate her😡

Arpita:

Armaan : nahi ... aur please .. main abhi bohut pareshan hoon ... toh accha rahega agar aap pls pahelia bujhana baand karengi aur saaf saaf batayengi ke aap kaun hain aur apko mujhse kya kaam hain ..?

Armaan said it a bit loudly ... Bharti thought with whom is he speaking ...

Kaninika:

The lady: Hahahahaha, itne bechain kyon ho rahe ho? tumhari beti mere paas hi hai. Main Mumbai ke sabse bari don Mohini Amma bol rahi hun

Armaan: aap...aur meri Jia.....aap usse kyon....he sat down on the beach, he couldn't talk. Bharti took the mobile from Armaan.

Bharti: hello

Mohini Ammaa: are itna dar gaya, tumhari awaz to bilkul larkiyon ki tarah ho gayi hai😆

Bharti: aap kaun bol rahi hai? (she was literally very angry)😡

Mohini Amma: o, papa dar gaya to ab ma a gayi? ha teri beti mere paas hai, sun, mere bete Mohan Baba ko pehle jail se nikal, phir teri beti tujhe wapas mil jaegi

and she hang up the phone.

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#10

i also didn't want it to be Armaan's wife ... I wanted it to be Anu or someone else..but the idea of Mohini amma is simply superb😆 never thought about it ...

Bharti : par humlog kaise apke bete ko jail se chhura sakte hain? hum toh usse jante bhi nahin ...

Mohini amma: Tujhe nahi pata toh kya hua .. tera pati janta hai usse ...

Bharti : ab mera pati kaha se paida ho gaya ? Main thodi na koi larke se shaadi karungi ...😆

Mohini amma : kya...?