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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Hey..nice parts..! Bhaskar hittin on Bharti..LOL..!
n yeah PM me when u update if u can..n also edit the title plzz..!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Good work dear,

Please do continue

Kaninika

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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Bhaskar looking at bharti, and he began staring

bharti : Whaaat?
Bhaskar: errmmm .. kyaa?
Bharti: why you staring at me like that, you are scaring me yaar
Bhaskar: No yaar, you seriously luking beautifull, didnt know in this guyish type of clothes, and this type of language you use - you look hoooot and smiles big.
Bharti: Exuse me ? Guyish type of clothes and my language - and what kindda clothes i wear then (a bit angry)
Bhaskar: Noo yaar, dont get offenced - i just meant in a good way, i never thougt you were this type of gal, you know?
Bharti: noo i dont actually tell me what you mean?
Bhaskar: Yaar you behaving like a girl, and hits her on her arm.
Bharti: dont touch me, soo you thougt that... huuh,.. lemme be a better person and leave from here..and she begans walking out of the party
Bhaskar: Bharrtiiii yaaaaaar, and walks after her
Bharti goes to her car, and begins starting the car
Bhaskar outside her car: Yaar listen to me
Bharti looks at him: Daamn .- why isnt the car starting..
Bhaskar: Its an miracle from god, come out - dont be silly
Bharti stands out of the car: So now your calling me silly, our kuch keh do?
Bhaskar starts laghing: 😆
Bharti: why you laughing?
Bhaskar: you should see yourself, - in those clothes your being a girl.. stop this..
Bharti looks herself in the window of her car get embaressed: ermm.. i dont know - and i hate those girls who talks and get offended like this.
Bhaskar hugs bharti: Yaaaaaaar your soo cutee, and kisses her on her cheek
Bharti: whaaat? Looks down cause she is really embaressed of her way of behaving, i think its cause of the clothes!!!! that payal !! I will kill her!!
Bhaskar is still laughing
Bharti: whaaaat? Stoop laughing yaarrr
Bhaskar: Sorry... and puts his hand on his mouth, but then he cant stop and begans laughing
After bharti sees him laughing she begans laughing aswell..
Bhaskar: Want a ride? Your car is broken as we can see
Bharti: That wud b nice, if i could drive ??
Bhaskar: Noooo way i wont let you drive my mercedes, pagal ho gayi ho kya?
Bharti: Achaa achaaa, now lets goo
Bhaskar: Acha, and he starts his car - want icecream?
Bharti: yeaaaaaaaah!! (like an child)
Bhaskar: Sooo lets drive..
i ll update it later... hope you guys like my part..
Edited by Ladioos - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Awesum FF ...luved reading it ..
Plzzzz continue ..
👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Very Good😃😃😃

Waiting for the next part.

Bhaskar Bharti freindship........really cool😛.

Why don't you give a name to your FF?

Take care

Kaninika

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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
pls try to be faster in ur updates cuz i havew been waiting for this for like 2 weeks...........................

anyways gr8 job pls do continue 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
i luv this ff cz evry1 else is duin it as bhaskar n bharti as twins or bro n sis n i wanted them as two ppl likin each ota x plz carry on soon xxxxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Heyy gr8 work...do update soon!!!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Thanks people, sorry for the late updates, its cause of i had work to do. But i will try my best to update as soon as i can.
At the Icecream bar!
Bhaskar > Soo what kindda icecream you want?
Bharti: Hmmmmm - i waaaaant .. (trying to choose a icecream, but there was so many flavors that she couldnt decide)
Bhaskar: It shouldnt take so much time you knw that bharti?
Bharti: haaan - i want extra chocolate flavor! (With a big smile on her face, and when bharti smiles, after bhaskar looks at bharti he begans smiling aswell)
Bhaskar: Achaaa, i want strawberry
Bharti: You gonna pay right? because my purse is in car and you
Bhaskar interups: Yeaaaah i m paying now please shhhh!!
Bharti: Yeah yeaaah ..
After 5 min
They get there icecream, they stand beside Bhaskars car.
Bharti begans eating the icecream: Uhmmmm it taste delicious!!
Bhaskars looks at her and says: Why you not like other girls?
Bharti: Because i m Special 😃
Bhaskar: Yeah you are special and looks deeply in her eyes
Bharti: heeyyy im not like these cheep girls who you tricks!
Bhaskar relises what he was saying: Ohh yeaaah! Haan Haan im just playing with you.
Bharti: I guess and looks wierdly at him.
Beside them there is a couple who sat on a bench eating eachothers icecreams and looking cutely at eachother
Bhaskar looks at them and after bharti sees that bhaskar is looking at them.
Bharti: Oyee i never thougt you like these cheasy stuff?
Bhaskar: Shuut up, im just looking at the hot girl?
Bharti: yeaah riite, you want a girlfriend you want a wiiiiifeeeee, nanananana, and begans teasing him
Bhaskar: you shut up..
Bharti: What will you do? huuuh biig guy?
Bhaskar: Stoop it yaar
Bharti: Okeey - nanananananan!
Bhaskar: Shut up okay?
Bharti : Oki sorry, and looks at him and begans mimming, mmm mmm mmm mmm mmm
Bhaskar: Argghhhh! Your sooo childish and sits on his car
Gotta leave...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

nice job.....bhaskar bharti are very cute....waiting for the next part

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