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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hey Ladioos

Nice FF..i love the characters..! I was so dying to c more of Bhaskar in d show...but atleast ur FF has him..😉

Bharti as a tomboy is cool..it relates to her image on d show..!..would love seeing Bhaskar hit on Bharti...😆

Do cont soon

-Aish

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Dying to read an ArBi ff

pm me when u updt

lekha

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Ladioos

@Ladioos

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Hi Thanks for waiting, havent been online for a while - but i am really happy that you liked it. Let me begin :)

Every caracter are like the same like in Bhaskar bharti. But in this Fanfic is Payal and Bharti Friends! And they live together in Mumbai

We see a girl sleeping, and she is snorning. while another girl knocks on her door - the girl whos sleeping takes the pillow on her head and says 5 min more!!

And than we see a girl opening the door it is Payal - she comes with a water of glass, and throws it on the sleeping beauty. The Girl really panicly wakes up - and we see a beautifull girl, wearing her pyjamas and her hair all wet it is none other than BHARTI !

Bharti : Kyaa yaaar abhi jaghana tha, lemme sleep its saturday. Eik hi din hota hai sone keh liye our tu hai jo mujhe uthane pe tulli hoyi hai.

Payal: ULLUUUUUUU ! Look at the time, its 1 o'clock humney shopping kerne jani hai

Bharti : Payaaal tu bhi na, let me sleep okay?

Payal: Noooo get up, or else im comming with another glass of cold water!!

Bharti : Achaaa meri maa, tu jaa mein tayaar ho ker aati hoon.

Payal : GOOD! and if you dont come thaaaan .. and points at bharti ..

Bharti looks at her and says : Haaaan patah haaai, main aati hoon.

i have to go for emergency sorry guys

bye

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

pm me when u updt

lekha

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Kaushik Basu

@kaushikbasu

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Hi Ladioos are you open for inputs from others?

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Delcy

@Delishus

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

sorry but it is a "glass of water" not a "water f glass" and kindly paste the links for each page in which you post updates at the main page so ita easier to fins them. On the brighter side, u r doin gr8, keep it up gal !!!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

thnx for the update..........it was short but sweet.um though can u put english in subtitles if possible? cuz itz easier to read that way

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Nice part

Continue soon

PM me if you can

Take Care

Zoya

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Ladioos

@Ladioos

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Thanks guys i m really happy for your guys reply, i will try my best..

Bharti goes from her room to shower, and comes out with jeans and t-shirt. And is ready to go with Payal, when they go out payal says to Bharti

Payal: This time plzz dont fall to sleep - i want to do a makeover on you

Bharti: Noooo way, heell noo - listen payal i m the way i am , like it or leave it. I m not changing for anyone, plus i m not intressted in any guys whisteling from aside like a subject.

Payal: Uffffffoooo - you dont walk like a girl, you dont talk like a girl, atleast be like one?

Bharti: I DONT CARE, come lets stop talking and go and shoop for you..

She tryes to ignore the subject, in the shop is Bhaskar there aswell with his friend Gyaan. Bharti sees Bhaskar and runs towards him.

Bharti: Heeeeeeeeeeey!! Looong time, why you havent been at work and hugs Bhaskar

Bhaskar: Heeey - yaar had this assignment that is why have worked at home

Gyaan: Haaan haan bhartii you know what he is working with

Bharti: Oyeeee hoyeee, what kindda work is that ;) ( and winks at him)

(and Bharti and Gyaan laughs)

Bhaskar: Shuut upp yaar, ( And than he sees Payal and smiles)

Bhaskar: Who is shee ;) .. im Bhaskar

Bharti: Heeey Away from her, she isnt ur type of girl

Payal thinks whats happening