Cute Family(Pratap, Ajabde and Amar) Diary Complete part 6 update pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Such a nice update re

Amar is smart
He got a horse
Yayyy
Pratu in majnu mode

Nice one re

Update more parts

thanx
he is Amar
thanx
will update more parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Annei123

Awww... Such cute update😳

Loved our little Amar and Praja
Do update more
Waiting for the next 😃

tthanx
yeah will update more
will give it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: aditi_angel

Humara matlab hai jab aap humari sahayatha karenge toh hogo na, hum uss bacche ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai this line ☺️i was left all blushing...

and the ridlles was superb even i too time to think...😆😆
it was an amazing update with cute amar scene and pratap teasing
awesome update...😃

thanx
my intention was to make all think about the answer
thanx
thanx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Fabulous update Rosh! It was damn cute and Pratu!!!!! So so naughty!! Making me blush!!
It was creative of you to add a riddle game and do things so beautifully!!
Give us lots more like this as this is a real treat to read!!
Also...please edit the title stating that the third part is out 😊

thanx natasha
he is naughty
thanx
yeah that will surely be given
yeah completety forgot about that
will do that now
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Hey guys. I am sorry for the delay but here is the fourth update. Do read and review

Fourth part

Dear Diary,

Today was the worst day, all just because I did not have food for past 2 days. No one is ready to listen, not even my Amar. I was all fit and perfect but no, Amar doesn't want to listen. I had just kept a fast for last few days without water for Amar but he is not were hearing me out fully. And ranimaa toh don't ask only she was supporting Amar that I was not well. Vaid ji joined the prince's team and told that I was not well.

All this started in the kitchen when I was busy cooking the lunch.

Ma sa

Arey aaj Amar humse milne yaha aaye hai

Ji ma sa

Toh batayiye na kyu aaye hai??

Hum hain na...

Ma sa kya hua

Dhajiraj... (Running in the whole palace)

Dhajiraj...

Dhajiraj...

Dhajiraj kaha hai aap??

Dhajiraj...

Arey yeh toh Amar hai

Aur yeh chilla kyu rahe hai??

Amar...(Coming out of the court)

Amar kaha hai aap??

Dhajiraj...

Dhajiraj...

Amar...

Dhajiraj...

Amar...

Dhajiraj... m...

Pehle saans lijiye aur phir kahiye

Dhajiraj woh ma sa ko

Kya ma sa kya hua

Ma sa waha acheth padi hai

Waha kaha??

Waha rasoi ghar mein

Chaliye

Ji dhajiraj chaliye

Ajabde (Running towards her)

Ajabde

Dhajiraj dekhiye na ma sa ko kya hua hai

Amar aap jayiye aur vaid ji ko kaksh mein leke ayiye.

Ji dhajiraj hum abhi laye

(Carrying her in his arms)

Ajabde apko kya ho gaya hai??

Kya hua hai apko??

Vaid ji humare saath chaliye...woh humari maa

Chaliye chaliye chote Kunwar

Ji

Dhajiraj vaid ji

Kambha gani

Gani kambha

Dekhiye na vaid ji Ajabde ko kya hua

Ji dekhte hai

He checks me and find out a reason

Kunwarsa gabrane ki baat nahi hai bas inhone bhojan thik se nahi kiya hai aur shayad isi kaaran ve acheth ho gayi

Dhayawad vaid ji

Dhajiraj ma ko kuch nahi hua hai na??

Haan amar kuch nahi bas unhe bhojan aur vishram chahiye.

Waise dhajiraj humare paas hai na ek yojna hai ma ko swasth banane ka

Kya hai

Batate hai hum

He tells the idea in his ears and both say yes and get going. Meanwhile I gain my conscious just to find me on my bed and nobody around. I come out of the room and search the whole palace for Amar and Kunwar Pratap. I had made out that I fainted and Kunwar Pratap brought me to my room and I could also make out that both have joined their hands and are up to something which will turn out to be disastrous like always.

Searching here and there and everywhere from the practice area to the library but no they were not there. Only few room were there to be seen which included Ranima's room, kanha ji ka mandir and our room. One after the other I went to see. In ranima's kaksh she was also not there nor were these two. Then I thought they would be praying but no I was wrong, they were not there too. Last room left was our room. When I reached there they weren't there also. Where would they be and what they will be doing I was thinking and then something struck me, the kheer I was making. I ran to the kitchen.

The scene in front of me was like I was in a jungle. Two people were there, one tall and the other one short. Both were men for sure which could be identified by their outfit. They were fully smeared with floor and grains were fallen here and there. I understood every single thing that was taking place there.

The anger that came pulled me even though I was not willing to do this action. I went and turned my son's ears which made him scream. And I started shouting.

Aap dono kya sochte hai apne aap ko?

Hum...

Kuch na bole aap! Dekhiye kya kar dala hai rasoi ghar ko

Ji...

Yaha waha dana aur apko dekhiye puree

Hum jante hai ma sa

Kshama kar dijiye Ajabde

Kyu kare hum kshama

Kar dijiye na ma sa hume kshama

Nahi karenge hum

Kyu ma sa

Aap jaake snaan kar dijiye aur yeh rasoi ko shud kar dijiye

Ji kar denge

Hum jaa rahe hai apne kaksh mein

Arey Ajabde ruqiye

Suniye na ma sa

I was very angry so I went to my room and slept because of my head ache. When I woke up I saw two people, a father and a son sitting beside me with a face of apology.

Aap dono??

Ajabde ek baar sun toh lijiye hume kya kehna hai

Toh kahiye

Woh ma sa humne yeh sab apke liye kiya

Humare liye??

Haan Ajabde, humne apko swasth banane ke liye bhojan banana chaha

Bhojan banana ke liye aur bhi toh log hai??

Haan hai lekin ma sa hume apne hatho se bhojan banana chahte the

Toh yeh baat hai

Kar diya humne aapko kshama

Dhanyawad

Lekin aap bhi hume kshama kar dijiye

Par kis liye

Woh humne aap par chilaya isliye

Arey arey who toh hona hi tha

Kariye na

Thik hai kar diya kshama

Dhanyawad Kunwar pratap.

Amar ran away from there.

Arey amar kaha jaa rahe hai?

Ajabde unhe chodiye

Lekin

Ajabde hum hai na apke saath toh Amar ko chodiye

(She places her head on his shoulders)

Ma sa, dhajiraj!!

(She moves away from him)

Ma sa, dhajiraj bhojan karte hai na.

Ji Ajabde hume bhi bukh lagi hai

Thik hai karte hai

Suniye

Ji chote Kunwarsa

Who hume theen taal mein bhojan layiye

Jo aagya hukum

Ma sa aaj hum chahte hai ki aap hume kilaye.

Jo aagya hukum

Hahaha (all three together.)

Aur amar aap hume bhojan kilayenge. Dekhiye na humara haath

Ji ji dhajiraj

Toh ma sa kaise bhojan karenge??

Arey haan

Dhajiraj ma sa ko aap kilyiye na

Thik hai Amar jo aap kahe.

Three of them fed each other and enjoyed their company with each other.

This is it for this part. Leave lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wow! Such a nice and cute part.😳I am still laughing at the way kp and amar tried making the food and then the kitchen's state!😆Please update soon.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome parts Roshni
loved father- mother and son moments ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
So cute!!
Wish the serial showed these cute scenes where there is family fun and laughter
Never mind...I'm enjoying all that through your and Aditi's stories!
Thank you for this lovely update ❤️
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Wow! Such a nice and cute part.😳I am still laughing at the way kp and amar tried making the food and then the kitchen's state!😆Please update soon.😃
I am your firstie!


thanx ramya
Thanx
yea will update soon

yes u r my firstie
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="4">Awesome parts Roshni</font>
<font size="4">loved father- mother and son moments</font> ❤️


thanx nonie

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