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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
awww sho cute... i am so glad you decided to continue the story... please do update more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
aawww...how sweet..☺️😳
very well done
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LuVed al ur update 👏gud job 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanku guys for all your comments and likes...they mean a lot!
Note- ss's name has been changed from my imaginings on what should have happened when ajabde and pratap met to HEART TO HEART!

Note-ajabdeh and pratap have already reached mewaad and the next happenings were same as in serial. So basically I am continuing from yesterday's episode where ajabdeh apologized to dheerbai. I know I an fast forwarding but I really wanted to write on this sooo pls bear with me :D

Here u go!

Ajabdeh was somewhat hurt by pratap's behaviour she got it that he respected his chotimaa or should she say raanimaa like no one else but does she not deserve respect. Why was she to be always blamed in everything. Be it raanimaa's departure from the mehal or chotimaa getting hurt she was always wrong. For him but crying here would not get her what she wants. She wants chotimaa's true face to get revealed in front of everyone and for that she'd have to do some proper planning.

Unknowingly some tears had skipped out of her eyes falling on her cheeks. Just then pratap came and ajabdeh quickly turned the other way trying to hide her tears.

Then not really facing him she pretended to tidy up the room.

"a..aap aa gaye aapko pata hai humne aaj pura mehal dekha. S..sab kuch kitna badal gaya haina" she blabbered trying to hide her pain.

Pratap came closer to her and taking her elbow turned her towards him. His eyes bored into her while she looked anywhere but him. He put a hand under her chin forcing her to look into his eyes. Pain was evident in her eyes which made him feel guilty.

"humne phirse chot pahuchadi na aapko" he said

"n..nahi aap kya kehre hai" she said giving him a fake smile, not really able to look into his eyes!

"ajabdeh hum jaante hain aapko bhaut bura laga ki hum aap par sabke saamne chilaaye par aapko ranima ko uss sab ke baare meh nahi batana chaheeye tha, unhe kitna dukh pahucha hoga"

"h..haa hum jaante hai humari galti hai hum to kuch keh he nahi rahe" she said coming out of his hold again tidying the room

Pratap sighed and holding her hand made her sit on the bed.

"aapko samajhna hoga ki iss baar galti aapki hai ajabdeh" he said

"kyo? Or kese? Hum chaate the ki chhoti maa ko pata chale ki kon kya sochta hai unke baare meh taaki wo sabki galat fehmi ko dur karde isme galat kya hai" she asked not able to take this anymore!

" lekin ye jaan kar unhe kitna dukh pahucha hoga" pratap countered her

"kabhi kabhi zaruri hota hai dukh ka ehsaas karna ye jaan na ki logo ki kya raaye hai aapke baare meh, hamesha toh galat fehmi meh nahi jee sakte na aap" she said now full on angry

"aur humne toh kaha bhi tha chhoti maa se ki hum maan ki ek bhi baat par vishwas nahi karte ye janke toh unhe khushi he hui hogi na"

"par unhe ye jaanke kitna dukh hua hoga ki unki apni beti unke baare meh aisa sochti hai" he said a little loudly

"hume bhi dukh hua tha ye jaankar ki humare apne pati hume galat maante hai or abhi bhi hora hai" she said getting up now crying

Pratap grasped her hand stopping her from leaving. Then coming behind her he put his head on her shoulder

"mat jaaiye, itne saal aapse door rehne ke baad ab doori bardash nhi kar sakte hum"

Ajabdeh turned around entwining their forheads.

"toh kyo karte hai aap aise kyo baar baar hume galat samajhte hai"

"hume shama kardijiye" he said pleadingly

"or koi sankalp bhi toh nai hai aapse zyada der krodhit nahi reh sakte hum"

"jaante hai or isilie baar baar galti kar dete hain, bigaad dia hai aapne hume"

Ajabdeh chuckled lightly!

After a long time they understood their position while pratap's both hands were on her waist sending tingles down her spine, ajabde's both hands were tightly holding his shoulders.

Pratap came closer almost touching her lips...

TO BE CONTINUED 😆
Chappals jutaas all are welcome since I know I left all of u hanging 😛

Pls lev ur feedback :)



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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
It was superb.. I seriously want ajabde to tell prtap that his behaviour hurts her sometime though she knew that he loves him but trust is something that she wanted from him... Nice one..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
hey its very nice pratap should now realise ajabde needs all his love care n trusts!! n now the blind love of his choti maa must start declining !!
do continue ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Good part loved how pratap apologised a swell as stopped her from going away

But it was a horrible place to stop
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Nice update .. Just my opinion, MU must clear before ajab reach chittor. Nobody take any efficient to get to know the truth and they just forget jaiwanta bai. Respect is important for ajab.

Edited by sweetmogini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATED!!!
Thankuuu for all your likes and comments 😳

When there came a voice
Tunggg

Ajabde and pratap jumped hearing the voice then chuckled.

"hume abhi jana hoga, darbar meh bethak ka samay hogaya hai"

Ajabdeh nodded with understanding and pratap left.

Ajabdeh started preparing for the night, decorating the room with flowers and diyas as it was the night when they'll finally become one.

Ajabdeh smiled at the thought then got to work.
2 hours later...

It was almost time and she was waiting for him dressed up quite attractively for the night when she saw him coming towards their room through the window.

Just then she saw chotti ma or raanimaa coming in between asking something from pratap.

She instantly stood worried that dheerbai would again do something and sabotage their plans for the night.

She went outside right in time to hear her say

"ranaji intezaar kar rahe hai aapka bhojan ke lie"

"lekin raanimaa humne toh unhe pehle ki bata diya tha ki hum aaj nahi aayenge"

"haa kuwar pratap magar hume unka man kuch vichlit lag raha hai toh socha aapko aake bata den"

"ji, agar aap chaahti hai toh chalte hai hum aapke saath"

She nodded and they both started leaving when ajabdeh called him

"kuwar pratap"

Pratap turned around to look at her then said "ajabdeh, wo dajiraj ka man kuch vichlit shayad koi baat unhe pareshan kar rahi hai islie hum unse baat karke aate hai"

What could ajabdeh say to that so she just nodded disappointment written on her face.

While dheerbai smirked and went away.

Ajabdeh angrily came inside her room and started removing all the flowers throwing them on the floor.

Pratap was very wise but when it came to dheerbai he always ignored whatever the hell she did. Always agreeing to whatever she said. At this point they'll have children at the age of 50 she thought furious.

"dasi" she shouted angrily

"ji rajkumarisa" dasi said

"jaldi se ye saare phool hathaiye yaha se hume humaare kaksh meh ek bhi phool nahi dikhna chaheeye" she ordered

Dasi nodded and started cleaning and within 10 min she had removed all the flowers from the room.

On the other hand pratap went to rana uday singh and on finding him happy and without any tension he decided to head to his and ajabdeh's kaksh.

As he was about to enter he saw a daasi taking some flowers out of his kaksh. On enquiring he got to know that ajabdeh had decorated their room for the night but removed it all 15-20 min back.

Pratap sighed she must be angry.

Here ajabdeh's heart sank seeing the plain boring room. Half an hour back she was so happy and now she sighed. Never mind staying awake now, she should sleep she thought or she would release all her anger on kuwar pratap. It's not like it was his mistake this time chotimaa is just too smart.

As she was heading towards her bed a hand came from behind holding her from her waist causing her back to collide with someone's chest.she was about to shout when another hand came on her mouth stopping her from doing so.

"pure mehal ko jagayengi kya" he whispered in her ear.

Ajabdeh calmed down listening to the familiar voice of kuwar pratap but then whimpered asking him to release her.

Pratap removed his hand from her mouth with his other hand still intact on her waist.

"kya hua aap toh ranaji ke paas gaye the na" she asked not able to take out the sourness from her voice.

"han, gaye the lekin phir humne socha ki unse to hum kabhi bhi baat kar sakte hai, lekin humari patni ko zyada zarurat hai humaari, par dekhiye na unhone toh gusse meh kaksh se saare phool he phik waadiye"

Ajabdeh blushed a bright red she is not going to spare that dasi for revealing her deeds like that!

"wo nahi, humne socha ki aap nahi aayenge toh..." she breathed but pratap had already started placing kisses on her neck causing her take shallow breaths.

"ku..war pr..ta..p" she whispered nervous and turned around hugging him not able to take this sweet torture anymore

Thats it! Sorry I had full on intention of writing the whole scene but then it was getting too long 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Its supernnn owwe ajabde is so angry...

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