Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)pt 13 updated on pg 22 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yayy!! first to comment... now coming to update,. as chand says.. super duper ..." !! it was really awesome.. waiting for praja nok jok.. do update soon.. 😃
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awesome update
loved it
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Thanks for the Pm..Nyc story plzz continue
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Awesome story..Waiting 4 the nxt..
Loved thge precap..
Do PM plzz
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finally its updated...it was interesting...eagerly waiting for next update...plz update soon!
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Awesome update...please PM me for the next one😊...
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Pm me when you update. It is interesting
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it is fabulous
i love your story as i always does
waiting for the next update please update fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii frnd's!
Thnks so much for lovely comments..
Well i'm bk with nxt update.. 😉
i hope u all ll enjoy reading it 😊

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Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)
Part-5
The story starts with pratap and his sisters reaching the college and pratap and ajab both are stunned to see eachother..
K-"Ajab jiji..Ratan..ye mere badhe bhai pratap hai.."
C-"Aur bhai ye ajab jiji aur ratan hai.."
R-(with smile)"Hi!"
(in mind) "Humne pratap khe toh dekha hai ..but kha..??"
(Ajab aur pratap ek dusreko dekh ashcharychakit ho jate hai..)
A&P-(both together) "Tum..??"Yaha..??"
K-(Suprised)"Bhai aap dono ek dusre ko jante ho..??"
A-(angrily) "Tum humara picha karthe karthe yaha bhi poch gaye..sharam nahi aati ache ghar se hothe hue ye sab karthe ho.."
R-(in mind)"Are ye di ko kya hua..ye achnak itna gussa kyu kar rahi hain.."
P-(in irritated look)"O hello..!!ek min..mujhe koi shock wock nahi hai tumhara picha karne ka..m toh bus apne beheno ko unke college chodne aaya hu..so plz apne dimag k godhe (horse) jayada mat dhodao.."
A-(angrily)"Kitna juth bologye..hum jante hai tum jse ladhko ko.."
P-"Excuse me..what do u mean by tum jse ladko ko ha..??Aur m juth kyu bolunga..??"
(Isse phele ajab apni baat puri karthi krishna ki awaz use rokh leti hai..)
K-(confused)"Are..are..wait guys..kya hua hai aap dono ko..??Aap dono ek dusre se is traha lad kyu rahe ho..??Aur kya aap dono ek dusre ko jante ho..??"
A-(in angrly look)"Ha krishna hum jante hai inko..ye wahi hai jo kal mandir m humara picha kar rahe the.."
R-(tubelight jali)"Are ha jiji..ye toh wahi hai..tabhi m sochu humne pratap ko kha dekha tha.."
K-(shocked)"Kya..?picha..?bhai aapka picha kar rahe the..??but kyu..??"
A-"Abh ye toh aap apne bhaishab se hi pucho ki ye humara picha kyu kar rahe the..akhir inki mansha kya thi.."
P-"What..??Mansha..??Ek..ek..min..tum hume galat samaj rahi ho..tumhe kuch misunderstanding hui hai..m toh bus tumhara.."
A-"Ha ha har ladka pakade jane par yahi boltha hai..aur herani ki baat hai ki khe bar ladkiya tum jse ladko ki baato m aa jati hai..but hum baki ladkio ki traha nahi hai samjhe.."(says in sherni mode)
P-"Are..meri ma..meri baat toh sun m toh bus tumhara lo.."
(ise phele pratap aur ajab apni baat puri kar pa the chand une rokh deti hai..)
C-(excitedly)"Ice cream..bhai chaliye na ice cream kha the hai.."
P-"What..??But..tumhara coll start hone wala hai..aur mujhe bhi toh office jana hai.."
C-(in innocent look)"Kya bhai abh aap apni princess ki itni choti si baat bhi nahi manogye bhai..aur waise bhi abhi 15 min baki hai.."
P-"Acha thik hai meri princess..bt ye meri treat hogi.."(wrink)
C-"Ye hui na baat..loveu bhai.."(and hugs him)
P-(in mischievous tone) "Bus abh jayada maska mat mar varna mujhe diabetes ho jayega.."
K-"Chale bhai fir.."(wrink)
P-"Nahii wait krishna..phele mujhe ajab ko meri puri baat samjhane do..fir chalengye.."
C-"Nahii bhai..aap apni baat ice-cream khathe kha the samjha dena.."
P-"Chand..!!"
K-"Ha bhai chand thik khe rahi hai..plz chalo na.."
P-"Ok..guys..thik hai chalo.."
(Pratap,krishna aur chand aagye badthe hai kintu ajab aur ratan ko dekh rukh jate hai..)
C-(with smile)"Are ratan..ajab jiji aap dono bhi chaliye na humare saath.."
A-"Nahi chand u guys enjoy..hume kuch kaam hai.."
R-"Ya guys jiji sahi khe rahi hai..u guys enjoy.."
K-(in mind)"Are abh ajab jiji ko kse manaye..ki wo humare saath chale.."
(Krishna chand aur ratan ko aakhose ishara kar mobile p msg padh ne bolthi hai..aur ajab ko manene k liye khethi hai..)
C-"Common jiji..aap hongi toh aur bhi maza aayega..plz.."
R-"Yes..jiji chaliye na..kaam waam toh hotha rahega..dekhona kitne pyaar se kha hai chand aur krishna ne..chaliye na plz..aapko humari kasam.."
A-(trying to control anger)"Ratan..tum kis ki side ho mere ya.."
R-"Dono k.."(wrink)
A-"What..??"
R-(innocent look)"Aa..umm..mera matlab hai..plz jiji chaliye na.."
A-"Ok..chalo.."
C-(with bright smile)"Abh ye hui na baat..chaliye bhai.."
Aftersome minutes,
(Krishna ajab aur ratan ko alag bethe dekh unke pass jati hai..)
K-(with smile)"Ice-cream mam.."
R-"Thanks yar.."(says with smile)
A- "Thnks krish..but aaj mera mood nahi hai..i'm sry..u guys enjoy.."(says with fake smile)
K-"Not fair jiji.."
P-(talking to ice-cream)"Sry yar lagtha hai aaj tere dost ki kismat m pigalna he likha hai..kuch log hothe he ese hai..jine kisi prava nahi hoti..jo khud ki baat k alawa kisi ki bhi baat nahi sunte..but dnt worry dude m us ki traha selfish nahi hu.."
A-"Kya..hum aur selfish..had hai..tumhari himmat kse hui mujhe selfish khene ki.."
P-"Humne is m kya galat kha.."
A-"You..!!"
K-"Guys..guys shant ho jao..ye runbhoomi nahi ice-cream bhoomi hai..toh plz kya hum ice-cream khaye.."
P-"Acha ek baat batao ratan ye jo tumhari jiji hai wo bachpan se he esi hai ya aaj kuch special khaya tha breakfast m.."(in mischievous look)
R-"Nahi pratap..meri jiji toh bohot jayada pyaari aur shaant sobhav ki hai..unke jse koi nahii.."
K&C-(in mind)"Hey bhagwan hum bhai ka kya kare..bt seriously sochne wali baat hai jo ladka kisi ladki ki traf dekhtha thak nahi wo aaj..seriously kuch gadbad jarur hai..kahi bhai ajab ko pasand..are..nahi..nahi..hum bhi na kuch jayada hi dimaag chala rahe hai.."
P-(mischievously) "Mujhe toh nahi lagtha yar ki tumhari jiji pyaari aur shaant sobhav ki hai..dekha nahi mujhse kse lad rahi thi.."
(Ajab pratap ki baat sun uski traf gusses se dekh thi hai aur khe thi hai..)
A-"O hello..!!What do you mean ha?? tum khena kya chathe ho..kya hum ache nahi hai..khud toh akhdu no 1 ho..aur mujhe khe rahe ho.."
P-(shocked)"Akhdu..??Kya m akhdu hu..??" (shocked)
K-"Are..bhai..bhabhi shaant ho jayeye..aap dono ladna band kar dijiye plz.."
P&A-"What..??Bhaiya...Bhabhi..??"
(Krishna ki baat sun sabhi heran ho jate hai..)
K-(in mind)"Hey bhagwan yeh humne kya bol diya.."
(cuming to sense)"Are Wo..wo..aap dono bhilkhul ek perfect couple ki traha lad rahe the toh humare muh se nikal gaya.."
P-"What..??Couple..??Are u ok na sis..??"
K-"Sorry bhai..jiji..maaf kardo galtise bol diya mne.."
R-"Jiji..shaant ho jayeye na..plz.."
P-"Waise guys aaj gharmi bohot hai na.."
A-(irritated) "Abh bus bohot gaya..ratan hum ja rahe hai..tum humare saath chal rahi ho ya nahi.."
R-"Ji jiji hum chal rahe hai.."
(Ajab wha se jane hi lagthi hai ki tabhi uska dupatta wha rakhi ek bench se adh jata hai aur wo rukh jati hai aur khe thi hai..)
A-"Abh ye kya badtamizi hai..humara duptta chodo.."
(pratap aur baki sab ajab ki baat sun heyran ho jate hai..)
After few seconds,
R-(trying to make ajab aware of situation) "Jiji..aapka duptta..bench.."
A-(turning back)"Tumne suna nahi mr.akdhu humne kya kha.."
R-(says in ajab's ears)"Jiji..aapka duptta bench m fasa hua hai.."
(Ajab feels embarrass seeing her duptta stucked in bench nd she angrily tries to remove it but losses her balance but pratap catches her..nd they have a beautiful eyelock..)
Precap-Praja ki friendship


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So guys this pt ends here..
.i hope u all enjoyed reading it..nxt pt ll b updated soon..
Plz do hit like nd comment if u like it 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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un res 2mnths k baad updating shayad
le is baar aapka surprise k naam pr popat ho gaya mene pehle hi guess kr liya..
chah gaye tussi..
😃 dil khush kr ditta..waise kl mere liye surprise day hi tha..kitna special treatment mila mujhe 😆😛
maza avi gyao di..Kitna jagda i mean kitna jyaada..ajab tho bolne hi nhi de rhi thi..😆
bst line ws dat..runbhoomi nhi icecream bhoomi n n wo Bhaiya Bhabhi 😛..
ab jaldi jaldi update kro..mere jane se pehle ye stry mujhe khtm chaiye
Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago

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