Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)pt 13 updated on pg 22

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Hello Shello Peepz..here i am with my nw Ss..hope u guys ll like..plz do share views.. 😳
Praja Ss :Mujshe Dosti Karoge ;)
Part-1
Its Morning tym jb doing arathi in temple..nd hereing d aarthi everyone is gathered in temple..
Jb-(After Aarthi)Are wha aaj toh bhagwanji bhi khush hongye aap sabko subha subha yaha dekh k..(nd smiles)
Us-bhilkhul sahi kha jaiwanta..(nd smiles)
P-Acha ma hum chalthe hai...
Jb-kya..itni jaldi pratap..phele breakfast to karlo..
P-Nahi ma abhi tym nahi hai..aaj office ka phela din hai aur aaj hi m late nahi hona chatha..
Dadi-Rukho pratap..bahu ise dudh( milk) do..yeh dudh p k hi jayega..
P-Dadi..meri pyaari dadi..(nd hugs her tightly)
Dadi-oye chal abh jayada maska na mar..tu dudh p k hi jayega..
P-theek hai dadi..
Jb-ji ma abhi dete hai..(nd gives glass filled with milk)..ye lo pratap..
P-ji ma..(nd drinks milk)
Dadi-(seeing pratap in mischievous tone)good boy..
P-Acha dadi..ma hum chalthe hai..
Jb-Are rukhiye pratap..hum bhi tumhare saath chalthe hai..hume shivji k mandir chodthe hue jaana..
P-theek hai ma..hum aapko mandir chod dengye..
In Ajab's House,
A-Are Ratan abh uth bhi ja..aaj college ka phela din hai...aur m late nahi hona chati..
R-hmm..jiji..sone do na yar...bus 5 min..plz..
A-Nahi ratan..uth ja yar..jara tym dekh 7:30 ho gaye hai..khe humari bus na chut jaye..uthna yar..(says shaking her)
R-haila kya 7:30 ho gaye..aap bhi na jiji..(nd runs to bcom ready)
After sometime,
R-jiji chaliye hum tyaar hai..
Hb-Are Are..Rukho ajab..ratan..itni bhi kya jaldi hai..phele bf toh karlo..
A&R-ji ma..
R-Chaliye jiji..
A-Rukho ratan..nikalne se phele ma aur datta ka ashirwad to le le..
R-ji jiji..
(nd both of dem take blessing frm hb nd mm)
(Pratap reaches d temple with his mother)
P-li jiye ma..mandir aa gaya..
Jb-Are Are aap kha ja rahe ho..aap bhi chal rahe ho humare saath pratap..
P-kya..kintu..
Jb-(wid emotional arthayachar look)kya tum apni ma ki manat puri nahi karogye pratap..
P-Acha theek hai ma..aap hume esa na dekho hum chalengye aap k saath ..aap chailye hum abhi car park kar k aathe hai..
Jb-theek hai pratap..jaldi aana..
P-ji ma..
At Bus stand,
R-phew..finally poch gaye bus stand..
A-ha finally (nd both of dem look @each other nd laugh 2gether nd give hi5)
(Aftersometime ajab hears d bell of temple..)
A-Ratan chaliye mandir chalthe hai..
R-kya..jiji..par humari bus chuth jayegi..
A-Nahi chuthe gi ratan abhi tym hai bus m..chal na yar..
R-ok jiji..chaliye..
(aur dono mandir k yaha jate hai..jabthak pratap bhi apne car ko park kar mandir ki chidyo p chadne lagtha hai..)
P-(talking to himself)Are Ye chakri kha reh gaya..use call kar k dekhtha hu..
A-Ratanji sirg chaliye..hume aaj hi aarthi m poch na hai..
R-(in tied look) jiji..
(nd finally ajab nd pratap ka aamna samna hotha hai..bt dono ek dusre ki trafh nahi dekthe..)
Aftersometym,
R-jiji jaldi..
A-ha ratan bus aa rahi hu..puja ki thaal leke..
(hereing d ajab voice pratap turns bk..bt tabhi chakri ka call aatha hai..nd he again turn bks to his original position to receive d call..nd tab thak ajab pratap se aagye chali jati hai..)
P-Ha chakri kha hai re tu..yar tu aaj paka phele hi din galliya padvayega boss se..
C-Sry yar kya karu saubhagayawati k saath hu..bus aahi raha hu..
P-Thik hai m shivji k mandir m hu wahi aaja tu..
(hereing d pratap voice ajab looks bk bt couldn't see him..nd turns bk to original position..)
A-pta nahi kyu esa laga jse koi aapna ho wha..
R-Are jiji kya sochne lagi aap..
A-kuch nahi yar..chal aarthi m chalthe hai..
After sometime,
(Pratap again looks bk as he feeled somone was der bt use koi nahi dikhtha waha..so again he turns to his original postion nd says..)
P-na jaane kyu esa laga jse wha koi apna tha..
Jb-(calling pratap)Pratap kha reh gaye aap..
P-Aaya Ma..(aur jb k yaha jata hai..)
R-jiji hum aathe hai..
A-theek hai ratan..
Jb-pratap hum abhi aathe hai..
P-theek hai ma..
(nd both of dem leave pratap nd ajab 2gether..aur dono hi prathna kar rahe hoth hai..)
After Sometime,
(pratap aur ajab dono mandir k phero k liye jate hai..bt thisre phere m ekdusre se takra jate hai..aur puja k thali ka sinhoor ajab k sir p gir tha hai..nd praja eyelock)
(bg music jane dil mein kab se hai tu
Jab se main hoon tab se hai tu
Mujhko mere rab ki kasam
Yaara rab se pehle hai tu...)
Edited by HinaAdoresPraja - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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no matter wat..i'm always d frst 1 2 read ur stories 😃
ab ye stry..it came like a surprise to me.. 😃
superb di..
bt me shuru me full confuse thi coz of der names ye modern h ki poranik stry h 😛 coz d language dey wer using was mixture purana + naya zamana😆..bt jho b tha maza aa gya stry pad k..aise hhi update krte rho aur mujhe khush kro 😆..Nanhi si jaan khush hui 😆😃😉
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amazing start...plz pm me when u update
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Dear, plezzz translate in English language too...plezzz
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wow...nice plot ...loved how they takrofaying each other ...lol
reminded me of the scene jab Ajabdeh galti se Pratap se takra gayi n the water fell on his feet ... 😳 good old days



plz update soon
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I will RES otherwise I will forget to read it 😆
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wow hina.nice staRt dear. hey please update soon.
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Hindu re hinuu 🤗
Mush mush for your SS 😳
Kya likha h bygawd so funny 😆 21st century mein 19the century jaisa baat 🤣
Dadi also here 😛 mujhe CNWK ki dadi yaad aagayi 😆
Coming to story.amazing start 👏
Koi apna ho I loved this.

Who Rat an here ? You replaced phool kya ? 😆
Last part of this update 🤪
Sindoir bahri maang 🤪
Update next part soon.
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Hona lovely start loved it...keep up dating fast
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awesome update


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