Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)pt 13 updated on pg 22 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Hello Guys!
Thnkyou all soo much for lovely comments..
It means a lot to me..😃
And i'm really again sry for late update was busy with my life..
I hope u guys ll understand..
So guys here's the nxt pt.. 😉
I hope u all ll enjoy reading it..

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Praja Ss:Mujshe Dosti Karogi ;)
Part-6
The story starts with pratap saving ajab..nd one of the pratap's friend calls him but both of them are still lost in eachother that they couldn't here the mobile's ring..
(mob ringtone:Aaj fir tum p pyaar aa raha hai..)
K-(coughing)"A..Ummm..bhai.. jiji are you guys ok..?"
"Hearing the krishna's voice both of them come to sense.."
P-"O shit phone.."
"Ise phele ajab apne aapko sambal pati pratap apne phone ki awaz sun use utha tha hai..aur ajab firse apna balance kho niche gir jati hai.."
A-(angrly in mind)"Had hai jab niche hi girana tha toh phele bachaya kyu..akdhu bandar khe ka.."
P-(seeing ajab on floor)"I'm sorry ..are you ok..?Tum thik ho na..??"
"Ajab itne gusse m hoti hai ki wo pratap ko rply nahi karthi hai..Aur ratan ki aur dekh khe thi hai.."
A-(in angry look)"Ratan i think we should leave now.." (says looking towards ratan)
R-"Ok jiji.."
P-(in mind) "Akdhu khe ki..mne sorry bola toh tha.."
"Ajab aur ratan college k liye nikal the hai.."
P-"Guys i think abh tum dono ko bhi college jana chaiye..mere bhi office ka time ho gaya hai.."(says looking towards his sisters)
K&C-"Ya right bro..aur waise bhi college ka time ho gaya hai.."
P-"Ok then see u guys in evening.. "
K&C-"Bye bhai.."(nd hugs him)
In college..
R-"By god jijz pratap kitna handsome aur hot hai..m toh full toh fida ho gayi hu..kyu jijz aapko pratap kse lage..??"
"Ajabde was lost in her thought that she couldn't here ratan's words.."
A-(in mind)"Pta nahi kya samjtha hai apne aapko..akhdu khe ka..God plz aapse ek request hai plzz us akdhu se phirse kabhi mat milana.."
R-"Helloo...jiji...kha kho gaye aap.."
A-(Cuming to sense)"Ha..kahi nahi..tum bolo na.."
R-"Waise jiji pratap itne bhi bure nahi hai..hai na..??"(wrink)
A-"Kya Bura..??Are nahi..nahi..beta m ne kab kha pratap bura hai actually na wo bohot bura hai ..aur sunliyo abh tu us pratap ka naam jaap band kar..nahii toh.."
R-(in mind)"Lagtha hai jiji abhi bhi gusse m hai..beta ya se kiskna hi acha hoga tere liye..
A-Hello..abh tu kha kho gayi.."
R-(cuming to sense)"ha..khe nahi jijz..Acha jiji aaj sham hum shopping karne chale..mujhe apne project k liye kuch chize leni hai.."
A-"Hmm..ok.."
R-"Okk jijz..chalo i'm gng meri class aa gayi..
A-hmm..thik hai...meet u after coll.."
"Aur dono apne apne class m jate hai.."
(ok i'm skipping the coll and office part..)
In evening..
After shopping..
"After shopping ajab and ratan were so tied and hungry that they decided to take some rest nd eat.."
R-"Jiji..chaliye kuch kha lete hai..i'm so hungry.."
A-"Hmm..thik hai chal..waise bhi m bhi tak gai hu.."
Waiter-"Welcome to hotel sun shine..What would you like to order mam.."(nd gives booklet)
R-"Hmm..phele ek bottle pani k le aao.."
W-"Ok mam.."
"Wha bethe kuch ladko ki nazar ajab aur ratan ki aur jati hai..aur wo unhe gurne lagthe hai..kintu ajab aur ratan is baat se ajan hothe hai.."
A-"Are rattan ye tere dress p kya laga hai.."
R-"Are ha jiji..ye kse laga..uff..had hai..mera new dress karab ho gaya.."
A-"Are yar dnt worry..washroom chal ll make it proper.."
R-"Jiji..aap yahi rahiyeye..m karlungi.."
A-"Are u sure..??"
R-"Yeah..!!"
A-"Ok jao..nd come fast ok..!!"
R-"Ok jiz.."
(Ratan ko jata dekh wha bethe charo ladkhe mauka dekh ajab ki table ki aur jate hai..)
1st boy-"Lagtha hai aap yaha akeli hai.."
2nd boy-"Kya yar tu bhi na..akeli hai toh kya hua hum saath de dethe hai inka.."
A-(in sherni mode)"Ye kya badtamizi hai..sharm nahi aati ladkio ko chethe ho.."
1st boy-(moving towards ajab)"Oye jayada abh nakre na dikha.."
A-(seeing the boy moves back)"Dekho wahi rukh jao..hume khe rahe hai wahi rukh jao..nahi toh.."
2nd boy-"Nahi toh kya ji..hume marogi.."
(ye bol k wo ladka ajab ki aur apna haat badatha hai kintu pratap sahi samaye poch k ajab ko bacha leta hai..)
P-"Tumhari himmat kse hui inse badtamizi karni ki.."
"Ajabde seeing pratap hugs him.."
P-(calming ajab)"Shant ho jao ajab...m hu na..dnt wry..tume kuch nahi hoga.."
Boy-"Oye hero..chal side hat..nahi toh.."(says looking towards pratap)
P-"Nahi toh kya ha.."
B-"Lagtha hai tujhe dikhana hi padega ki hum kya kar sakthe hai.."
(Aur wo ladka apne zeb se chaku nikal tha hai aur pratap ki aur badtha hai..)
A-(in mind)"Chaku..pratap.."
P-(trying to calm)"Shant ajab..kuch nahi hoga mujhe..ok...dnt worry..tum shaant ho jao.."
"Pratap aur un ladko k bich ladai arambh hoti hai..Ek ladka pratap ko piche se mar tha hai aur pratap niche gir jata hai..aur pratap ko dekh ajab zor se chilathi hai.."
A-(Screams)"Pratap..!!"(nd runs twrds him)
3rd boy-(trying to stop ajab)"Kha ja rahi ho tum.."
A-"Pratap..!!Utho plz..pratap.."
"Ajab ki awaz sun pratap uth jata hai..aur pratap aur ajab ek dusre ko dekh mushkhurate hai..aur pratap un ladko ki dulahi kar tha hai.."
After few min..
"Pratap un ladko ko hara deta hai aur wo ladke wha se bhaag jate hai.."
A&P-"Tum thik ho.."
A&P-"Yes..!!"(nd both of them smile looking at eachother)
P-"Waise aap yaha..aur wo bhi akele..?"
A-"(with smile)Ji..nahi ratan bhi hai humare saath.."
P-"O acha.."(nd smiles)
A-(in mind)"Bole k nahi bole..uff..bol hi deti hu.."
P-(innocently) "Kuch khena hai.."
A-(Cuming to sense)"Ji..ha..thanks.."
P-"Thanks..??"kyu..??"
A-"Wo..tumne hume un ladko se bachaya isliye.."
P-(Smiles)"O acha..!!"
(in mind)"Toh madam thnks bolna bhi janti hai..not bad hai..(smiles)
A-"Kuch kha tumne..??"
P-(mischievously)"Nahi toh..!!Kyu kuch khene chaiye mujhe..??"
A-"Ji..nahi..hume esa laga ki u said something..btw tum yaha kse..?? God khe tum firse humara picha toh.."
P-(irritated)"Hang on yar..m kyu tumhara picha karunga..mere pass aur bhi kaam hai..m yaha ek meeting k liye aaya tha..aur kuch ladko ko tumhare saath badtamizi kartha dekha toh tumari help karne chala aaya..aur tum..aajkal toh balahi ka jamana hi nahi raha..ek toh help karo uparse m hi galat hu..had hai.."
A-"Acha thik hai thik hai..abh jayada akhdo mat tum.."
P-(in mind)"Khud miss akdhu hai..ek sorry bol nahi sakthi..aur mujhe akdhu khe rahi hai.."
A-"Kuch..kuch kha tumne..??
P-"Ji nahi..!!"
A-(in mind)"Akdhu bandar khe kha.."
P-(in mind)"Nakchadi chipkali khe ki.."



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Ok guys the pt ends here..
I hope u all enjoyed reading it..
Plz do share ur review nd hit like if u like it..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Pm's done!


P.s Guys if u want pm wenever the stry is update plz do buddy me 😊
Edited by HinaAdoresPraja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Yayyy first one to comment.
Maxaa aavigayo Hindu 😆

I loved the second scene most. Ek dum filmy style.
Smiling hugging 😳 🤪

And last the fight again btwn them 🤣
Akdu chipkili 🤣

Too good update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
loved the awesome update 👏

it was just truly great ⭐️

superbly written

thanks for pm
👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
this story is very nice
plz add me in the buddy list...cos i wanna read the nex part as well !!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
same thng i'm nt gonna repeat again 😛
bas kamu ki cmmnt n ur reminder k wajah se 2 cheez yaad aa gai ..n dat is..donno ka acha naamkaran kiya ..akkdu bandhar n nakchadi chipkali 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
n wo ringtone..hay kya song chuna h..gussa me b ek dusre me dubne me mahir h praja 🤣🤣🤣
aap k writing history ka ab tk ka best prt/update h ye i feel..keep writing aise hi n isse b acha ..nw waitng for nxt prt
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: HinaAdoresPraja

Pm's done!


P.s Guys if u want pm wenever the stry is update plz do buddy me 😊

Mennu PM bhejne ki meharbaani/kasht na kiya kro...😡 overload ho rha h mera inbox wid stry update k PMs
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Just started reading the story di?
finished all parts in a go
it is so cute !
right from first meeting till here <3
loved it !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Funny and cute. Pratap saving Ajabde, and Ajbde hugging Pratap, but they still fight.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Awesome update.
thanks for the pm.

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