Praja Ss:Mujhse Dosti Karogi ;)pt 13 updated on pg 22

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ---Anu---
Nice start Hinu...!!!!🤗🤪
BTW, this is not the sequel to ur previous SS..is it ???
U were to write about post marriage sequence, rite ???
Anywayz, i m loving this modern set up...!!!!

thnks anu jaana 🤗

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Amazing

thnku 😃

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sita_rama
Nice start give english translation also

Thnku 😃 ll try dear 😳

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: whiteprincess
amazing
please update soon

thnku 😃

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja
unressd my post on pg. 1

ha dekh liya 😛

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: _zari_
It was pretty interesting to read, and praja in modern setup I really liked it, nice start to the story 😊

thnku didu 😃

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whiteprincess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

i loved it

thanks for the pm

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Chitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

awesome update loved it thanks for pm 😳

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different

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

love it...😊

update soon...,,,,,,,,,😃

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HinaAdoresPraja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Praja Ss:Mujshe Dosti Karogi ;)
Part-4
The stry starts with pratap parking the car..
P-(talking to himself)Ye chakri bhi na...bhilkul bache k traha dar raha hai boss se..are..boss hai..koi sher nahi jo itna dar raha hai..
C-(Worried)hey bhagwan ye pratap kha reh gaye..khe hume akhela toh chod k nahi chale gaye na..hey bhagwan humari raksha karna..
P-(say's mischievously)Oye !!Chakri kya hua..abh bhagwan ko kyu pareshaan kar raha hai tu..
C-(with worried look)Wo..hum..kuch nahi..pratap..
P-Acha thik hai..abh chale andhar..(nd smiles)
C-ji..chailye..aap aagye chaliye pratap..hum aap k piche hi hai..
P-(in mischievous tone)theek hai charkarpani ji..
(And both of them start's walking And finally reach the entrance of office)
P-Are chakri thoda jaldi chal na..
C-ha pratap..
(And both of them enter the office..)
Venni-Aagaye tum dono..Are chakari tujhe kya hua..itna paseena kyu aa raha hai tujhe..(asks mischievously)
P-(in mischievous look) kuch nahi veeni iski ye halat boss k wajashe hui hai is ki..
V-Are ha boss kabse tum dono ka intezzar kar rahi hai..aur uska dimaag sach m bohot graham hai aaj..
C-(Worriedly)kya..hey bhagwan hume bacha le na plzz..
P-Oye m hu na chakri..(wink)
C-ji pratap..
Peon-Aapko dono ko mam ne kabin m bhulaya hai..(says looking towards pratap nd chakri)
P-thik hai hum aate hai..chal chakri..
(And both of them enter the kabin)
P&C-May i come in mam
B-Come in..aa gaye aap dono..
P&C-Gm mam..
B-gm..hume derse aane wale log bhilkhul bhi pasand nahi..isliye abh ye akhiri warni hai tum dono k liye..kal se want to u see u both on tym..
P&C-ji..mam
B-Abh tum dono ja sakthe ho..
P&C-ji..
(Aur dono kabin se bhar aa jate hai..)
V-(asks curiously)Kya hua andar..kya boli wo kadhus..
P-kuch nahi re..bus warni di hai..k kal se jaldi aana hai..(says looking towards chakri)Mne bola tha na tujhe chakri..mat dar..kuch nahi karegi wo..
C-(in happy tone)ha pratap..aur ye sab aap k wajashe hi hua hai..(says with mischievous look)
P-(confused)matlab
C-Aapne dekha nahi wo kse dekh rahi thi aapko..(says mischievously)
P-Oye..ye kya bol raha hai tu..
C-(in mischievous tone) Sach hi toh khe raha hu pratap..wo toh full toh latoo lag rahi thi aap p..
P-Chakri..tu na..sachi yar..
Venni-Abh tum dono yahase chalo bhi..kahi wo kadhus fir aa gayi toh..
C-Ha..chalo yaha se..
In College,
R-(tirely) Hey bhagwan ye kab katam ho ga..aur hum kab ghar jayengye..
K-(in mischieveous look)Putri Aapki Icha bohut jald puri hogi..kyuki abh bus keval 5 min baki hai class katam hone m..
R-Ha sahi kha krish..bt m kya karu abh ye 5 min bhi mujhe 5 ghante se lag rahe hai..
K-Humara bhi yahi hal hai balik..
(And both of them laugh..)
(After sometime the bell ring nd class gets over..)
R-Sukhr hai bhagwan ka..finally katam ho gaya..nahi toh aaj sona pakka tha mera..
K-ha..yar..sahi kha..acha chal chalthe hai abh..
R-Ha Jija intezzar kar rahi hongi..
(Aur dono class se bahar aate hai..)
After sometime,
(Seeing Ajab..)
R-Jiji..(nd hugs her tightly)
A-Are..kya hua tujhe..kya baat hai..
R-kuch nahi jiji..
A-Are bata na..kya baat hai..tu itni khush kyu hai..jse tujhe koi medal mila ho..
R-Medal ka toh pta nahi..bt ye khushi boring class se chutti ka pratik hai..
A-Ooo..tu bhi ratan..
R-Sach jiji..bohut jayada boring class tha aaj ka..full too paka gayi hu aaj..
A-Acha chal abh jaldi chalthe hai..nahi toh bus chut jayegi...
R-Ha jiji..chaliye..bye krish kal milengye abh..
K-Bye ratu...
In Evening,
In Office,
Venni-(in happy tone)Finally its evening..abh bus ye 7 kab bajenye..
C-Ha yar..
V-(Seeing pratap)inhe kya hua..
C-Pta nahi yar..
V-(asks mischievously) bhaujiraj kha kho gaye aap..
P-(lost in his world)Wo mandir...aur wo..
V-(with mischievous look)kya mandir..kounsa mandir..aur wo koun..
P-kuch nahi..ghar nahi jaana kya tum dono ko..7 baj gaye..
V-(with bright smile)kya 7 baj gaye..
P-m car le ke aata hu..
V&C-ji pratap..
(Kuch der baad pratap car leke aata hai aur chakri aur venni car m betthe hai..aur v sab ghar k nikal jate hai..)
Venni-(in mischieous look)Bhaujiraj aap kis ki baat kar rahe the..batayeyana..
P-(irritated look)Kha na kisi ki nahi..
C-Acha chodiye ye sab baate..chalo anthakshari khel the hai..
V-kya sahi idea diya hai..
P-m nahi khel raha ..tum dono hi khelo..
C-bt pratap ..
V-rehende chakri..hum dono hi khafi hai..
C-Chal theek hai..toh kha se suru kare..
V-Mera fav wrd P hai toh..tu P se ga..
C-P se..thik hai..
V-(aftersometime)Oye ga na..
C-ha ga raha hu yar..soch m tym lagtha hai..
Venni-Acha abh soch liya na toh ga na..
C-Jab pyaar kiya toh darna kya..
V-Oye hello ye kya ga raha hai tu..mne p se kha tha j se nahi..
C-Ha toh p toh aaya hai na us m..
V-ye cheating hai..
P-Guys..kya kar rahe ho tum dono..bache ho kya..
V-Wo..sry yar..
P-its ok..(nd on's radio) abh tum dono apna radio off karo aur ye radio suno..)
(After sometimes dey reach home)
At Night,
In Pratap's house,
In Gardan,
(Pratap seating on swing was lost in his on world..)
Dadi-Kya baat hai..aaj humara pota kha khoya hai..
P-Are dadi aap..
D-(mischievous look)koun hai wo..apne dadi se share nahi karega kya..
P-(worried look)kya..koun wo..dadi..m nahi samajha..aap kis ki baat kar rahe ho..
Dadi-Oye chal abh jyada bola mat ban..m teri dadi hu samjha..chal jaldi bata wo ladki koun hai jo meri bahu banene wali hai..
P-(worriedly)Dadi aap bhi na..kabhi kabhi toh kuch bhi khe the ho..aap jante ho na m ladkiyo se kitna dur reh tha hu..
Dadi-Acha bachu..tu bata raha hai k nahi..
P-Dadi aap jse soch rahe ho waise kuch nahi hai..mujhe neend aa rahi hai..m chal tha hu..
Dadi-ha beta..mujhe pta hai koi toh aayi hai teri zindagi m..tera chera bata raha hai..aur ha ye jo mere bal hai na wo dhup m safad nahi hue hai..pakka koi toh hai..
P-Dadi aap bhi na..Good night dadi..
D-Good night..Have A Sweet Wale Dreams
P-O dadi..(pratap hugs her nd leaves from there)
In Ajab's House,
(Ajab Seating on the bed was lost in her own world..)
A-Wo koun tha..use dekh k kyu esa laga jse apna ho..
R-(ask mischievously) Kya..ye kya khe rahi ho jiji..aap kis ki baat kar rahi ho..
A-(worriedly)Wo..hum..kuch nahi..tu na ratan aaj kal bohot jasusi karne lagi hai..
R-hum jante hai jiji..aap us ladk ki baat kar rahi ho..jo..
A-kounsa ladhka..hum kisiko nahi jante..samji tu..
R-Ha toh mne kab kha aap use janti ho..
A-Kya..tu..na..Mujhe neend aa rahi hai..m sone ja rahi hu..bye..
R-Are bt jiji..(nd smiles)
A-Good night ratan..
R-ok good night jiji..
Nxt Morning,
In Pratap's House,
Chand-Dadabhai..kya aap hume aur jiji ko aaj college chod do gaye..
P-theek hai meri pyaari behna..aap ye bhai aapki har wish puri karega..bt phele bata hw r u feeling nw..
Chand-Ekdum super duper fine bro..
P-Good!chalo abh jaldi tum dono apna breakfast complete karo..nahi toh late ho jayengye..
K-Ok bro..
Aftersometime ,
P-chaand ..krishna..abh chalo bhi tum dono..
Chand-Aagye bhai bus 2 min..
P-ok sis..
(After sometime)
Chand-chaliye dadabhai..
P-thnk god finally tum dono ka ho gaya..
(And dey leave for college)
In Ajabde House,
A-Ratan ki bachi jaldi chal..nahi toh bus chut jayegi..
R-Aa gayi jiji..
A-Ma..datta hum chalthe hai...
R-chaliye jiji..
A-ha chal..
(Aur dono College k liye nikal jate the hai..)
After sometime,
(Ajab nd ratan bus m bet college poch the hai..)
R-Are ye ladkiya kha reh gayi..
A-kounsi ladkiya ratan..
R-Uff aap bhi na jiji..hum krishna aur chand ki baat kar rahe hai..
A-o acha..ha kha hai wo dono..
R-patta nahi jiji..
(khuch der baad ajab ko ek car deikh thi hai aur wo khethi hai..)
A-Are wo dekho aa gayi wo dono..
R-kha jiji..
A-Are wha dekh na us car m..
R-Are ha jiji..
(After sometime pratap nd his sisters get down frm the car nd ajab nd pratap are stunned to see eachother..)
Precap-praja nok jok..nd pratap ki treat) 😉
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Heya Lovely Ppls!
First of all really thnk u soo much for lovely comment's🤗
Here's the nxt pt 😉
Hope u all ll like it
Will update the nxt pt after 20+ likes 😉
Plz do share ur views
Thnkyou!

Edited by HinaAdoresPraja - 10 years ago

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