PrAja FF - Pyar da Dabba ( Part 13,14 page 31)

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Mano

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Plz update I am really fond of ur story plz plz plz update
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Aru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

matlab...

bas m kya kahu...

ek to mere paas vaise hi time ki kami hai isliye lamba comment nhi kar sakti...

kintu bas ye kehne aayi hu...

"This is a typical Kamu di story!!"

matlab sachchi me...padke pata chal jata hai...style, format, scenes, language, story...everything adds up to Kamya di...

aur ye itni zyada sweeettt thi...diabetes hi ho jayega mujhe :P

itni cuuutteee estory!!!

lag rahooo :*

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Mirage09

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Kammuu...!!!!

Index aur title update karna...!!! Muje toh pata hi nahi chala ki 3rd aur 4th part update ho gaya tha...!!!! 😡

I was just waiting for ur pm...but thankfully was going through the forum and so I saw this...!!!!! 🤔

Anywayz...!!!!!

Jaldi update kar...me waiting...!!!!!! 🤗

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sita_rama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Awesome update

please pm ur update

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Hello Lovely Peoples 🤗
How's you all 😳

I m extremely sorry to all of you n especially roshu for not updating it 😭
Plzzz forgive me 😊

Hope you all like this cute updateupdate

Recap : PrAja hugg.

It was PrAja first hug. They were loving to be in each other arms. A magical smile was on there face. A magical moment it was.
M : ajabbb..
and they broked the hug.
M : ajabb..
and here enters Maa.
M : ajab Pratap chalo have Breakfast.
A : jii Maa ( moving her hair at backside)
Phone rings n Ajab mother goes from there.
P : ummm I sorry.
A : nhi nhi I m sorry. hug toh ma...
P : ummm.
they both looked to each other n then burst out into laugh.
P : toh chale .
A : kaha ?
P : chole bhature remember.
A : aree haa. chalo chalo.
P : ek hug mein ye haal h toh aage
A : pratap :x and she hit him.on hand. I m sorry baba let's go.
they move ahead to dinning table.
Ajab mother serve Chole bhature to both of them.
P : ummm aunty aapko toh batana hi bhul gaye.
M : kya ?
P : Maine Jo.
interuppted by ajab " humne "
P : ha ha OK Humne Jo project banaya tha wo select hogaya n hume contract mil gaya.
M : that's ausme. congratulation.
A : ummm toh pratap contract mill gaya toh mujhe gift tho milna chahiye.
P : gift ? kiss khusi mein.
A : ooo hello tumne bas thodi si help karii thi pura kaam kiya Maine.
P : OK OK .. toh bolo kya chahiye..
A : ummm shopping.
P : kya ? shopping how boring.
A : no kya wya shopping toh bas shopping. Tum rajput hona. toh usmein kya kehte h " pran jaaye par vachan na jaaye "
Ajab mother was just watching them fighting n she was smiling.
P : acha meri Maa thik h we will go to shopping. tum ready hojao main ghar jaake change karke aata hun.
A : smiles n say OK.
Pratap go to house n Ajab gets ready. Some hours she heard the horn sound. she ran down.
A : Maa I m.going.
Pratap was standing out was talking on phone.
Ajab was Hawww " he looks smashing "
Pratap was wearing brown Jeans and Dark blue shirt with Gray shades. he was looking hawt ( I m not saying Ajab saying it)..
Pratap turns around n found Ajab standing near to him Staring him n smiling at him.
P : handsome lag raha hun na. Pata h mujhe. ab taarna band karo aur gaadi mein baitho. and he sits in car smiling.
Ajab back in senses. hit her head.
" kaisa ladka h bola v nhi how I m looking " and go n sit in car..
Pratap smiles seeing her murmuring.
goes near her ear " Achii lag rahi ho"
Ajab turns toward him smiling.
P : Purple suits you n wink.
Ajabb blushes n say Thank you.
P : ohh hoo someone is blushing.
starts the car n head to mall.
P : ye lo maidam mall aagaya. Chale..
A : shopping yayyy ( is this same girls react listening name of shopping) and she n pratap head to mall.
P : toh khareedna kya h..
A : suit
P : kya ? tum office ki shopping karne laayi ho mujhe.
A : nhi toh meri Friend ki shaadi h toh uski shopping. Ab chalo v. She grabs her hand n took him to Diva Showroom.
Owner : Are Mr. pratap welcome. kahiye kya lijiyega.
P : actually lena mujhe nhi inhe h.
O : kahiye maidam
A : mujhe acha sa Anarkali suite dhikayega.
shopkeeper show her there many collection. but she didn't find them appropriate ... Pratap was roaming in Shop seeing the collection
A : nhi utna acha nhi h. Pratap help me na yaar.
P : ajabb try this.
A : wait wait. ooteriii wat a choice. main abhi try karti hun.
she go in trial room to try it.
O : sir ye aapki wi..
P : friend h yaar.
A : Pratap.
Pratap turn round n he was just mesmerised by the beauty of ajab.
she was looking damm gaejuss in Red piece.
(lemme describe lill about the attire. Red color, neck par net n deep back neck, hand full net and last mein jaake it becomes churidaar type. hope you all got it.)
A : how's it.
P : Beautiful just beautiful.
A : done bhai sahab aap iska bill banaa dijiye.
she goes in trial room n change.
A : kitna hua.
P : wait main pay karunga.
A : are par kyun.n
P : gift remember.
A : par pratap.
P : shhh. n he pays the money.
chale ?
A : yes.
A : tum ice cream khate ho.
P : kyun main insaan nhi hunn.
A : ohh hoo seedha jawaab dene nhi aata. Chalo let's have ice cream.n iska pay main karungi.
P : OK n smiles
PrAja together " Blind love "
sees each other n laugh.
While having Ice cream.
pratap started laughing seeing ajabb.
A : daura utha kya y you laughing.
P : tumhara nose.
A : kya hua ??
P : khud ko v khilati ho aur naak ko v 😆
A ; very funny 😡 she wipes but still it was there.
P : wait ,, he wipes it off.
It starred raining n they both ran to car
P : aaj barish much jsida hi horahi h
Just then ajab phone rang n it was her Mon.
A : hello.
M : I m sowie beta I m out n I forgot to give you the keys n its raining heavily all roads are blocked. For today you stay on your friends house.
A : OK mom you take care.
She called her friend but there was no response.
A : uff ab main kya Karin.
P : kya hua ?
Ajab explained her the situation ..
P : hmmm. Come to my home.
A : wat your home.
P : don't worry mom dad nhi h main akela hoon.
A : kyaa.
P : main ksuch aisa waisa nhi karunga
Ajab hit him.
A : par.
P : chill tyaar. Come to home. Masti karngein
A : ummm OK

Done with update Dont forget to like n give your Feedback :)

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Dear Readers,,
Those who liked the story n want me too PM it whenever in update then Buddy me so That I can send you PM 😊

Edited by ...Kamu... - 10 years ago

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Roshini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

OMG OMG OMG..update kr ditaa..THNK U..chalo gusse ka asar itna axha hota h mujhe nhi pta tha..🤣

superb update kamu maza aa gya pd k..ajab hitting pratap wala scene mast tha..full on masti wala update tha..jaise 2 frnds hote h bestie wale ditto..shopkeeper k muh me ladoo...wifey...pta nhi ab teri stry me ye zamana kab aayega ??

last line..of pratap: cum to my home masti krenge is cracking me up so much..brilliant update Kamu..

oye dat hug ka convo b 😆 shopping is girls birth right us k upar tho kuch bolna b kum hoga dress ka description di 😆😉awesum update kamu

o.k forgot to add tune jho update k liye font color use kiya h wo mera fav. color h😃

P.S.: Aaage se I'm not giving warning/reminder jab update krna h tab kro nhi krna h mat kro its jst f9 from my side nw..( saare mere fav.ss writers k liye note h nt specifying kamu only bt others too)

Edited by RoshiniluvPrAja - 10 years ago

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ShadowHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Pheww...at last u updated 😕 😆
Awessome update...prAja itney jaldi besties ban gaye 😳 loving pratap's attitude here 😎

Pls update soon
I hate cliff hangers...thanks for the pm ! <3

Edited by -zainab - 10 years ago