PrAja FF - Pyar da Dabba ( Part 13,14 page 31)

CallmeCel

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part2:
ROFL..
Gawd I'm loving this. Pratu is by god the wieredst boss!!! Kamu, manana parega...you have a good sense of humour. I liked all the dialogues of Pratu. LOL
And that part I found realllyy cute where Pratu said you must be smiling looking at my DP.
Ooo, Pratu is...naughty. I like it *evil smile*

P.S. My fav line. Naam bada historic lag raha hai. ROFL

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CallmeCel

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 3:
Kamuuu...*hugs her tight*
It was so so so cuteee...
You know what, when you have such a different concept, you definitely have a fun reading.
And upar se tere one liners.
I mean those funny dialoogues.
That dominoz pizza thing was...ROFL!!!! Kuch bhi...
And my fav part was Pratu going closer to Ajab and telling her in a husky voice...
That was so...so...*blush* *blush*
Flirty Pratp... like it...

Ab agar tune jaldi se 2 dino ke andar update nahin kiya toh dekh liyo!!!

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja

boht h..
pehle tho pizza wala seq..
fir pizza khilane wala..seq..
katti meethi nok jhok..
n abv all most important part is dat precap..hay shopping 2gether n HUG

you almost like all the scenes 🤪

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Tia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Superb part dear plz cont thanks for pm

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@ihureeya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Kamu dear 😆

Ireally like the moments you mentioned in the story

pls update soon 👏

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Jiyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

NIceee👏

please update soon

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SwarSrushti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hello Kamya!!! Srushti here!!! M a newbie here...actually...u r d reason I opened my account here. Wen I ws searching fr new upcoming track of MP... I saw ur FF!!! N I jst luved it!!! U r a fab writer!!!!👏Plzzz let me know wen u r updating next part ok???!! And thank you sooo much fr writing such an awesome FF!!!!!😊 Keep writing!!! Update next part sooon!!!!

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: SwarSrushti
Hello Kamya!!! Srushti here!!! M a newbie here...actually...u r d reason I opened my account here. Wen I ws searching fr new upcoming track of MP... I saw ur FF!!! N I jst luved it!!! U r a fab writer!!!!👏Plzzz let me know wen u r updating next part ok???!! And thank you sooo much fr writing such an awesome FF!!!!!😊Keep writing!!! Update next part sooon!!!!

OMG 😊
Hi srusti 🤗
Itna bad a compliment 😭 khusi kep aansu 😆
Thank you so much for liking g my story I m overwhelmed by your feedback.
Will be updating it by this week ⭐️

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kamu_zainaddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

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