Love Bites (PraAjab FF) UPDATED Chap 6 pg 7

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Hi Guys

I am a big fan of Faisal and Roshni... feeling sad for them leaving the show... I always wanted to write an FF on both ...Finally I have managed to scribble something...

This FF is completely different from the original story..

Love Bites (PraAjab FF)

Chapter 1 -page 1
Chapter 2 - page 1
Chapter 3 -page 1
Chapter 6 Page 7

Chapter 1

Like every day the lovely morning breeze came from the mountains surrounded the small town of Panchgani. The town has few small houses around the path towards the lake, it was a famous spot of the people of Panchgani. Being a small and less populated place people usually knew each other... By the small lake was a cafeteria and few other small shops. People of the place were friendly and helpful...

As usual Ajabde woke up and shouted back "coming mom" and again slept cosily in her bed...

Everyday her mom Sangita had to shout on top of her voice to wake up her darling Daughter...

Ajabde was good in studies... finally she was enjoying her summer holidays and never wanted to get up early and do the household things...

Sangita walked upstairs... the house was small but beautiful... it had small garden in the front, and a small gate... the house was decorated with beautiful plants inside and outside. It had small living room and an open kitchen adjoining small dining area...there were two bedrooms downstairs and one upstairs.

The stairs went upstairs from the kitchen...

"Ajabde...wake up" Sangita kissed her darling daughter who was sleeping peacefully.

"Come one mom... let me enjoy my holidays..." Ajabde replied lazily...

Sangita smiled and patted her back... "Fine... but only today... cause tomorrow you are going to help me in household things."

"Hmmm" Ajabde murmured and went back to sleep...

After sometime

Ajabde heard the loud bell of the phone "mom, please pick up the phone..."

After few rings Ajabde finally got up from the bed... Her long tresses touched her hips... with white shorts and pink top she walked downstairs with half eyes still closed "hello" she answered the phone

Hearing the voice on the other end Ajabde shouted "Dad...it's you... Oh my God... how r u, and when are you coming back?"

Sangita heard Ajabde and walked inside "give it to me Ajabde"

Ajabde had a broad smiled and gave the phone to her Mother ...

She kept looking at her Mom ... all excited she wanted to meet her Father... Ajabde knew her Father's work... it wasn't easy for him to come home soon... after all he was a Doctor in Merchant Navy...

The moment Sangita kept the phone Ajabde clinched to her mother "when is Dad coming home?"

Sangita smiled "Siddharth is not coming ... But"

Ajabde frowned "but?"

"He is sending a big birthday gift for you" Sangita hugged her.

Ajabde smiled but she still missed her Father...

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Next Day

Ishita was still waiting for her best friend ... she knew Ajabde never comes on time and she always has to wait for her. Ishita and Ajabde were childhood friends. They were in the same school and both shared same things. Ajabde would do anything to make Ishita happy and Ishita would do anything for Ajabde. It was already half an hour since Ishita was waiting...

"Ishita" Ajabde waived her hand and came running towards the lake...

Ishita smiled back but then realised that she was waiting for her from half an hour...

"Hi Ishi" Ajabde said while running out of breath...

Ishita did not respond...

Ajabde pulled her ears "fine, I am sorry... I got up late and then had shower and then mom told to help with dishes..."

Ishita frowned "you should have told me that you were coming late, why you want me to wait every time for you"

Ajabde smiled and again pulled her ears "ok, I am sorry Ishi... please"

Ishita got up from the chair and walked towards the lake "ok... promise me next time you won't make me wait so long"

Ajabde gave a broad smile "promise"

Both friends smiled and laughed ...

After some time

Ishita saw Ajabde going in the rush to look at different flavours of the ice cream...

"Which one do you want?" Ajabde looked back at Ishita

Ishita thought for a while "chocolate"

Ajabde smiled "ok"

Both were sitting near the lake with an ice cream cones in their hands...

"Why don't you like chocolate?" Ishita asked while looking at Ajabde

"Don't know... I like strawberry" Ajabde replied...

"I feel we should have long holidays, and never go back to school." Ishita said

Ajabde smiled "I know you never like going to school but don't worry it's still three weeks holidays left"

Both had ice cream and played around the lake... finally Ajabde went to drop Ishita...it was late and Ishita lived far from her house...

Both friends walked towards the narrow path when they finally reached a big house...

"I will leave now ... mom will worry" said Ajabde...

Ishita smiled "alright... I will meet you tomorrow... same time, bye"

Both friends hugged each other...

After some time...

Is was almost dark, people in the town usually slept early... Ajabde walked quicker... cold wind was blowing... she wasn't wearing anything warm... she wanted to reach home quickly but the weather was getting worse... soon it started raining... she had no choice but to stand under the huge tree by the roadside... "Oh my God... this rain" she said to herself...

She was all wet from top to bottom... Her shirt was now all transparent, her shorts were wet... water was dripping from her long black hair... she couldn't see anyone around for help...

After few minutes she started walking towards her house...when she saw a car coming her way...

To be cont...

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Chapter 2


After few minutes she started walking towards her house...when she saw a car coming her way...
Ajabde could hardly make out anything in the strong beam lights... she covered her face with her hand to avoid the strong lights ...

After few seconds the car stopped right in front of her and the lights were off... she looked at the white car... then saw someone stepping out of the car... the first thing her eyes fell on was his curly hair...slowly her eyes met his... She did not blink, though a few rain drops did fall on her cheeks from her wet eyes...
her silk trends covered her right eye and cheeks... he gazed at her lovely features... for a moment everything was freezing... he saw her dripping from top to bottom...

She never knew when he stepped closer, she couldn't figure out when his hands reached for his cheeks.. and he stroked her hair away from her eyes... she wanted to run... but she felt as if the wind has stopped, as if the time had come to halt... and as if the universe has stopped..

Was she dreaming or someone was standing right in front of her gazing in her eyes... she felt attracted to the brown eyes...there was silence except for the sound of the blowing wind that past between them...

After few seconds she heard someone... "are you ok?"

He said ... Ajabde did not say anything but simply nodded her head and started walking towards her house...

She did not turn behind... As if someone threw a magical spell around her...

After walking few steps she heard the car going away... she turned around to see there wasn't anyone...

Her heart was still beating faster... she had never felt like this before... this was the first time her heart skipped several beats.. who was he... she never saw him before in the town... her mind and heart were revolving together with the same question... why did she felt so numb in front of him, she doesn't know him and neither she has ever met him before. Soon she opened the gates and walked inside...

She walked to her room and changed her clothes... she lost the power to think anything else besides him. She could still feel him around her. As if his deep brown eyes were gazing at her.
Why was she thinking about him... she jumped on to her bed and closed her eyes... she could still see him...

After a long time...

Ajabde got up and walked downstairs to get some water...

Her heart and mind were busy thinking about the boy whom she met hours back only for few minutes... was she counting the time... it seemed like ages... like she knows him from centuries...
She gulped the whole glass of water down her throat... and tried to relax herself...

He managed to create several waves in her heart that made her unsettled throughout the night.. she wanted to see him again but why... she didn't had any answer..

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Next Day

Ranvir singh came with a big glass of milk for his Grandson...


"Pratap, here beta, drink this"

Pratap happily took the glass in his hands... he was excited to see his Grandfather after so many years.

"it's a nice place Grandpa. And this house is right on the top of the hill..." said Pratap

"yes... it is far from the town but very peaceful. We don't have much people around" Ranvir picked up the newspaper and started flipping through the pages...

Pratap finished his milk and stood at the backyard of the house...it was indeed like heaven. Born and brought in London, he still had enormous love for his Grandparents.

"Grandpa ... can I go and see the town?" he raised the question quickly...
Ranvir while still reading the news looked at him "ofcourse you can"

Geeta shouted from the kitchen "let Pratap have his breakfast now"
Ranvir smiled "coming"

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Ajabde was in the bed, but for the first time she failed to understand why did sleep went out of her eyes... she used to sleep a lot and now since last night she did not sleep at all...


After some time...

Pratap was still driving towards the town when he saw some small shops and a beautiful lake... he stopped. He scanned the whole place...he stepped towards the lake when his eyes fell on a boy playing football ... Pratap smiled "Chetan" he shouted

The boy turned around and gave a broad smile "is that you..." and came running to embrace his dear friend..

"when did you come Pratap?" Chetan queried

"yesterday.." Pratap replied...

"I am so happy Pratap...its so good to see you after so many years.."

"come lets play..." Chetan asked Pratap who joined him...

It was late afternoon...


Ishita reached near the lake and waited for Ajabde "this girl will never come on time"
She looked at her watch again and again... "this time I will not wait for her..." angrily Ishita left from there...

After few minutes Ajabde reached ...she was quiet and her eyes were searching for Ishita...
"I am late again" she said to herself... "but it seems Ishi hasn't come yet" Ajabde went near the lake, she carefully adjusted her long hair from the blowing wind...


Ajabde would never go without meeting Ishita, she knew Ishita would definitely come...

It was more than an hour now... she thought of going to her house but then she will get late again..
She was still thinking when her eyes fell on the boy who seemed busy playing football...
she remembered last night...how could she forget him... her heart skipped a beat... she fidgeted with her hands... she wanted to gaze at him continuously... she was nervous even though he didn't even look at her...

Her mind was now completely lost in him, she did not see anyone nor she was bothered to look at anyone...

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I've read ur other wrotings...u r a good writer...loved this one like the others too...plz pm me when u update.
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ooo...its lovely !!!! Wonderful! Please continue soon!

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Chapter 3

Ajabde had smile on her lips while she still watched the handsome boy playing football...her mind and heart had already stopped thinking a long time back. What was happening to her, why was she looking at him and only him among so many people...

Her deep thoughts were interrupted by an old lady "Ajabde"

Ajabde turned around and glanced at her Mother's friend and her neighbour Suhasni "oh hi Aunty" said Ajabde

"How are you my child, and where is your friend today?" queried Suhasni

"I am waiting for her Aunty" smiled Ajabde

"Oh ... Anyways I will continue with my evening walk" said Suhasni and left

Ajabde looked back but this time she couldn't see him anywhere... it seemed the boys must have left...

Ajabde was wondering about the boy whom she saw yesterday and then now... why was she gazing at him... instead of thinking about her friend her eyes were searching the boy who was a stranger for her.

It was late evening, people from evening walk were going back home... and the weather as usual changed during the evenings... Ajabde was still waiting for Ishita... she now thought of going to her house. But then another thought clicked her mind... Ishita must be annoyed with her, she must talk to her.

Sometime later

"Ok fine... I am sorry" Ajabde was repeating herself

Ishita was super annoyed at Ajabde "I know you will repeat again"

"No, I won't" said Ajabde

Finally after an hour long conversation Ishita finally gave up and started laughing...

Both friends hugged each other...

Suddenly the door opened and Ishita saw her elder Brother Chetan storming into the room and searching for something...

Ishita frowned "what are you doing...it's my room"

Chetan did not look at two girls sitting on the bed. Instead opened the wardrobes "where are my gloves?"

Ishita was now getting furious "this is a girl's room ...and please I will never keep your gloves in my room"

Chetan threw most of the things around and walked out of the room ...

Ajabde looked at Ishita who was angry at her elder brother "don't know why boys have no brains?"

Ajabde smiled "I know... ok Ishita I have to go home now... Mom must be waiting"

"Wait... Chetan can drop you" Ishita said

"No that's fine... I will go" replied Ajabde

Ishita wasn't convinced... "Its late now... don't go by road and it's so cold outside"

"Chetan" Ishita called out...

Chetan was standing near the car at the gate "yes."

"Can you drop Ajabde home?" Ishita asked

Chetan looked at Pratap "you are going that side...can you please drop her. I don't want miss my match"

Pratap smiled "you and your football... ok I will drop"

Chetan looked back "my friend can drop Ajabde"

Ishita looked at Ajabde "go, Pratap will drop you"

Ajabde frowned but then she looked at the boy sitting in the car... she was now nervous... "No Ishita...I, I will go myself"

"No, look at the weather Ajabde..." Ishita forced Ajabde to sit in the car...

Ajabde was reluctant but she agreed after a while... she has no clue why fate was every time getting her closer to someone she doesn't know and she felt nervous for no reason

She smiled at Ishita as the car started...

"Bye Ajabde... will see you tomorrow" said Ishita

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After few minutes

Ajabde was still not looking at Pratap... While Pratap glanced once at the extremely nervous figure sitting next to him... "We have met before" he said

Ajabde's heart was pounding loud enough now "really?" she said still looking elsewhere

"You don't remember?" queried Pratap...

"No, actually I don't know" she said without even thinking what she was saying...

"Well then I must say you have a poor memory..." he smiled.

Ajabde knew she was lying... but she did not wanted to talk to him... she felt like jumping out of the car... or hiding herself away from him... something was in him that pulled Ajabde towards Pratap...

She was still thinking when his voice reached her ears "where is your house?" he asked twice...

"hmmm... My house." Ajabde said coming out of her thoughts...

"Yes... your house..." he stopped the car and turned around to look at her...

She finally realised he was looking at her... she glanced at first ... He smiled for few seconds... she never knew when the glances and smiles changed to serious gazes... he gazed in her eyes and she could not take off her eyes from him... She hardly knows him, besides his name which she got to know few minutes ago, he was a complete stranger but she gazed at him as if she knows him from a very long time...

Pratap grazed his hand towards her that was enough for Ajabde to get heart attack. Her heart was loud enough to wake up the whole world...she wanted to take her hand away from his...

His fingers grazed her fingers then slowly encircled her fingers with his... She closed her eyes... This was the world to her... she seemed to have lost all her senses and power to think...

Pratap moved closed, his lips very lightly touched her blushing cheeks...

She was jolted when his lips touched hers for a second...

She never knew when he went towards her neck...it was only after few seconds she winced...but still her eyes were closed... she could feel his lips and tongue sucking the soft skin on her neck...

She held his hand tightly... While his other hand reached her nape...

She seemed have died several times in this pleasure...she had lost the capability of thinking rightly...

Pratap was all lost... something attracted him towards Ajabde...

It was only after a long time when he saw some high beam light on the road... he pulled away looking at Ajabde who still had her eyes closed... He caressed her cheeks...

She slowly opened her eyes... Embarrassed she did not even look at him ...

"Ajabde... I am..." He was about to say

"Please don't say anything... It's my fault" she said making him wonder

"Fault?" he repeated...

She was angry at herself for letting him touch her...she even let him kiss her... she felt disgusted and stepped out of the car

Pratap came out of the car to stop Ajabde "where are you going?"

"Leave my way" she said annoyingly...

Pratap failed to understand... he wanted to admit that he likes her but she did not listen to him and walked away...

He followed her until she reached her house... she closed the door and walked to her room...

Pratap was confused ... he did not knew how to convince Ajabde... how to make her understand that he felt the same way as she did... that this was the first time in his life that he was attracted to someone... but Ajabde did not listen at all and asked him to leave...

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She closed the door behind her and started crying... she could not understand the reason why she let him touch her...

After several minutes she finally got up to change... the moment she looked into the mirror she saw a dark spot on her neck... she carefully looked into the mirror, slowly she could feel the sting of the bite... she recalled how Pratap was kissing her madly on the neck and left a love bite.

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Edited by Freethinker - 10 years ago
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I've read ur other wrotings...u r a good writer...loved this one like the others too...plz pm me when u update.

Thank you so much for a lovely comment... :)
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I always loved the mystry in your writings...its so thrilling...loved this update...thnx for the pm.
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wow... lovely story... awsm writing... im waiting plz continue soon
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oh my god😲
it was amazing👏
read three four times the same thing😳
waiting for ur next update
please update soon😊😃
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Hi u r good writer i loved the ff awesome one 😃

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