praja pyar ho toh dard bhi hai PART 6 ON PAGE 13

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hey guys this is the story i am writing after watching the precap
here it goes

us:kya vichaar hai aap dono ka iss patra ko sunkar
mm:shama ranaji par yeh aapki vyagtigat baat hai hum issme dakal nahi daal sakte
saying the this he leaves uday singh turna to see pratap but he had already left to see ajab
but before pratap reach even ajab got the news of pratap marriage and has tears in her eyes
pt:ajabde...
aj:(wipes he tears and turns)humne suna hai ki aapke vivah phool se haraha hai
pt:nahi ajab hamare baat...
aj:badai ho aapke vivah ke liye
pt:(in a shocked state)bas itna kehna tha aapko
aj:ji haan
pratap leaves the room and finds uday singh in front
us:aapne hamare prashna ka uttar nahi diya hai kunwar pratap kya nirnaye liya hai aapne ratputana ke liye
pt:(he remembers his first meet with ajab in the cowshed and how much she was happy to see him in the morning but heard the word 'rajputane ke liye' again and again)daajiraaj aap jis ke saath bhi hamare vivah karna chahte hai yadhi phool ho ya koyi aur ...kariye
us was shocked and confused because of his harsh behavior and an answer without interest
us:iss tarah se kyun kaha unhone!!!!!!!
pratap goes to his room
pt:(to all servents)aap sab jayiye
ser:par hukum...
pt:humne kaha na jayiye
everyone left he closes the door of his room uday singh is seeing pratap from the window
he sits down
pt:yeh sab kyun horaha hai hamare saath
hume yaha aana hi nahi chahiyeta jab daajiraaj puchrahathe toh hame mana kar dene chahiye tha kyunki hum jab bhi aate hai toh aapko sirf dukh dete hai ajab
paranthu hum bhi kya karte taras gayethe aapko dekne ke liye taras gayethe aapki aanko ko dekne ke liye
kitne badi mushkil hi kyu na ho jab hum aapko dekhte hai toh sab kuch bhool jate hai
jaanti hai aap jab chittor main hum aapko apne dil ki baat batane aaye the toh kya socha humne humne socha ki aapke aanko se ek aur aansu ki boond nikalne nahi denge aur aapko hamare ajab banayenge par ulta hum hi the jo aapko sabse bada dukh diya
aur aapko kya lagta hai ki hum nahi dek paarahein hain aapki peeda ko aur kya hum nahi jaante ki subah aap itne kush kyu thi
aapka woh jadui muskaan aapke mukh par bewaja toh nahi aayengene ajabde
humne apne zindagi main bahut logo ko koya hai hai jinse hum prem karte the par aapko kone ka dard nahi horaha hai humse sehen ajab
saying this he started crying as if he would bare if someone pork knife into his heart but not the pain of losing ajab
us was speechless by this he went to his room in the way he saw ajabde and start to see her secretly from the window
aj:hey kanaji kyu kar raha hai aap hamare saath aisa
jabse hum paidha hue hai tabse hum sirf dukh hi sehte aaye hai kunwar pratap ne hume jeena sikaaya par ab aap hamare saath aisa kyu kar rahe hai
hum itne dini se swayum ko baand kar rakatha par ab aisa lag raha hai ki hum toot jayenge aur agar iss baar hum bikar gaye toh nahi jod paayenge apne aap ko
saying this she cried so bitterly that even shaitaan would pity on her
us went to his room
us:eklinji yeh kaisa paap hogaya humse hum apne putra ko itna dard de rahe the
aur ajbde jaise bali ladki ka apmaan hone diya
marvar ke sena ki chakkar main hum pyaar ki thaakath bhool gaye the
jo shakti kunwar pratap ko marvar ki vishal sene se nahi milenga woh ajbde ki ek shabdh se mil saktha hai
humene in dono ko alag kiya aur ab hum hi milwaenge bhi

i hope it was not worse i will write the next part if i receive like and hit and if i write second part it will be a happy one so please hit like and do coment



THE INDEX

PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2 - PAGE 2
PART 3 - PAGE 3
PART 4 - PAGE 5
PART 5 - PAGE 8
PART 6 - PAGE 13

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it was amazing...could u plz write the next part before tomorrows epi. i want to read it before watching the epi. so if u can then plzzz update it soon.
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