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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wow
so emotional
but loved it
plz continue soon
BTW what is your name?
LOVE❤️
RADHI😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
hey friends i am soo sorry for my too late update actually i was really busy in my school sorry
and here the next update goes
us calls everyone in the mehal for a meeting
mm:ranaji aapne hum sab ko kyu bulaya kuch kass vishye hai kya
us:haan mamrikhji yeh sach me bahut hi khass baat hai yeh hamara kunwar pratap ki vivah ki naare main hai
pratap and ajabde give each other a sad look
us notices this
us:mamrukhji aur hansabaiji hum aapdono se apke beti ka haath apne kunwar pratap ke liye maangna chahte hai
everyone are shocked
mm:ranaji yeh nirnayi mathlab aisi
us:ab hume der nahi karna chahiye humare bache to ek dursre ko man hi man pathi patni maan chuke hai ab hume der nahi karna chahiye
mm:ranaji bilkul
for ajab abd pratap it was like a dream
ajabde runs inside the room blushing
pratap too shyly moves from there
us:mamrukhji hum abhi chittord jayegi aur pura shagun lekar aayege
hb:toh hum kunwar pratap ko bulale jaane ki taiyaari karne ke liye
us:nahi hansabaiji hum unhe thodi wakt dena chahteh hai
there pratap was just restless and he decided to make ajabde express her feeling
and ajabde was too happy that nothing came to her mind but suddenly something came to her mind about her friend phool how much she wanted pratap and decided not to accept this proposal
pratap knows that ajabde will think about that phool and changed so he went to her room but ajab was avoiding him
pt:ajabde hum aapse bqs ek sawal puchna chahte hai
kya aap humse prem karti hai ya nahi
aj:nahi
he asked the same question again and she says the same answer
by asking this he comes one one step forward she goes backward
and now she is in the wall she cant move back anymore pratap keeps his hand on both sided of ajab
now he asked very slowly she refused and now pratap attaches his head with her head and his nose with her nose and closes his eyes she too closes her eyes he whishpers
pt:kya aap karti hai humse prem
this time ajabde was not able to refuse
aj:hum aapse bohut zyada prem karte hai
tears comes from both thier eyes they are in the same position
precap:phool on chittord

gase dt


guys i hope this part was good and hope you like it please do coment guys please
Edited by whiteprincess - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Woww... Nyc Update Dear... Keep Going.. Continue Soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
wow
that was beautiful
loved the confession
plz update soon
LOVE❤️
RADHI😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
sorry for the late update guys
had a lot of work in school

part : 3

pratap says to everyone that ajabde has accepted for the marriage
everyone gets happy and hugs each other

us: kunwar pratap aap aur hum kal chittod ke liye nikal rahe hai

pratap cant believe what he is hearing ,he suddenly gets afraid

pt: kya!! hum chittod ke liye nikal rahe hai..par kyu daajiraaj aur koi appathi tho nahi kya aap iss vivah se prassanna nahi hai ya phir raja maldev ji ne sandesha bijhwaya hai
par aap toh abhi kush te toh phir kyu...

pratap was restless thinking why he is going back and now who has opposed his marriage

us: shaant ho jaiyiye kunwar pratap hum aapka vivah ko rok nahi rahe hai
hum pure parivaar ke saath yaha rithi riwaz se aayengi aapka vivah pakka karne ke liye

everyone are laughing at pratap as of how much he is afraid of losing ajab
even though pratap was embrassed he had a relief inside his heart
uday singh teasingly says to pratap

us: dekhiye tho kunwar pratap ko
yeh poore sansar se nahi darthe par jab ajabde ko khone ka sawaal aaya yeh toh darr ke mare pagal hogaye
bhohut zyada prem karte hai aap ajabde se
aur ek kushi ki baat kehne hai aapse hum dono kal nahi parso jaarahein hai
kya pata agar aap kal jaakar apne raani maa se yeh keh diya ki hum aapko apne prem se theek se bath karne nahi toh hamari toh kheir nahi

kunwar pratap feels shy and leaves with a big smile on his face
everyone laughs and prays to god that this couple must be happy like this always

ajabde is flying in the sky she dont know what is happening around her
only one thing she knows that she will be with pratap always in her life no one could seperate them
she thinks all the moment with pratap their first meet in cowshed
rain of flowers on them
each and every moment

thinking everything she is just rounding in her room suddenly something dashes her leg and she falls on someone's arm
the one who had always understood her the one who had loved her like something
it was none other then pratap
he was staring into those innocent eyes which had always shown him the right
which had always given him strength

it was a evening time a cool breeze was blowing as if for them
ajabde's hair comes and falls on her face
pratap slows puts her hair properly
the touch of his fingers where more enough for ajabde to shiver

they dont know how time went engrossing on each others eyes
outside it was getting dark as if to rain
the drastic thunder made them to come out from each other
he made her stand straight

there was an awkward silence there
that silence was broken by the voice of daasi

da: baujiraaj , baisa aap dono ko bulaya gaya hai
pt: hum aarahe hai

they both went to meet everyone

pt: aapne hume bulaya daajiraaj
us: haan kunwar pratap hum sab ne appko yeh kehne ke liye bulaya ki hum sab kuldevi ki darshan ke liye jaa rahein
pt: abhi!! par kyu daajiraaj kal chale jaate abhi tho kafi dher ho chuki hai aur shayad baarish bhi aane waali hai
us: par kehte hai ki vivah ki baat karne ki thuranth baath agar kuldevi ki dharshan huyi toh sab ke liye acha hoga
rm: aur jahan thak baath baarish ki tho humne puri vivasta karli hai
humari putri ke liye hum itna tho kar hi sakthe hai
us: toh phir hum sab nikal the hai kunwar pratap
pt: ji daajiraaj
hb: ajabde apna aur kunwar pratap ka khayal rakhiyega
aj:ji maa

they both get blessings from everyone and they leave
pratap and ajabde are walking in the corridor

aj: hum bahar chale hawa bahut achhi hai
pt: ji bilkul

every daasi are sent off by leave no one except these two souls are there in the palace
they totally dint go out they are just walking in the corridor where one side is garden (i think u guys get me)

it rains suddenly rains
ajabde is overjoyed seeing the rain she puts her hand out and is playing with water
pratap had no time for playing in rain as he was busy in seeing ajabde's innocent and beautiful face that had drops of water on them

pratap slowly puts his hand under ajabde's hand as if giving support to her hand
thay wre seeing each others eye continousely

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai
Mohabbat barsa dena tu, saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai

Kyun ek pal ki bhi judaai sahi jaaye na
Kyun har subah tu meri sanson me samaye na
Aaja na tu mere paas, dunga itna pyar main
Kitni raat guzaari hai, tere intezar mein

suddenly a big slash of lightning and a thunder making sound drastically came making ajabde shiver and she putted her face in the chest of pratap
that time she felt the warmth in him
comfortable there as if she was for this place
pratap could feel her body in him as if attached to his body
he dint want to let her away
he wrapped his one hand around her
they cherish that beatiful moment together and with together
ajabde slowly moves her head up to see pratap's eyes
pratap puts his other hand on her face cupping her
they are lost into their intense eyes which promised that whoever come and oppose them they will fight back together
they were drowned in each other's eyes


Sabse chhupa ke tujhe seene se lagaana hai
Pyar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyar kisi pe, pehli baar aaya hai

Mohabbat barsa dena tu, sawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka, mausam aaya hai



i hope it was not worse
if u like this a bit please like and comment
and say whether i should continue this to part5,6
or i have to stop this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesomeee too good lovelyyy part waitting for next asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww...it was so sweet...nd u ought to continue this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

Awesomeee too good lovelyyy part waitting for next asap


thanks dear😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ridionasis-

awww...it was so sweet...nd u ought to continue this!


sure dear😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
lovely update
waiting for the next one

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