praja pyar ho toh dard bhi hai PART 6 ON PAGE 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Nice.. Nice.. update whenever you find time .. but do include me in your pm list so that will know once you post the next update :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No worries. Please continue to do with your important work. Whenever you're free please do the updates as they are very nice. I will wait for your updates though.
Edited by arpit2525 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey i just read ur story in one go its fab...👏...wating for next update plzz update soon.
Edited by Pawarneha13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all i am sorry to hell for my delay
but dont worry here after i can give stories time to time

part 6:

''ajabdeee''
a voice thundered into the room with a furious phool standing at the door

both kuwar pratap anbd ajabde were shocked because of her

ajab:phool aap..

ph:chup ho jayiye ajabde bilkul chup
agar aapne ek aur shabdh nikala apne mooh se toh...

pratap:phool hamare hone waali berani se aise phir kabhi baat mat kijiye

ph:kya!!!! aapke hone wwali biwi aur yeh yeh kya keh rahe hai aap kuwar pratap aap isse iss dhoke baaz se shaadi karna chahthe hai

ajbde was shocked by her harsh words and pratap was furious

ph:kuwar pratap aap jante hai iss ne aap peh jaadu kar rakhi hai jab sab kuch teek chal raha tha tho yeh hum dhono ki beech aagayi aur...

prt;bas aap ko sach sunna hai toh hu8m batate hai haan sab kuch teek chal raha tha par beech main ajabde nahi aap aayithi
hum aur ajabde hamesha ek dusre ke dil main the par aap ki wajah se sirf aur sirf aap ki wajah se sab kuch hua hai

aja:kuwar pratap...

ajabde tries to stop him but he is in no mood to listen to her

prt:hum aapko nahi kabhi chahthe hai naahi chahthe hai aur aapki jaise ladki ko hum kabhi chah bhi nahi sakthe

phool who must be broken was instead furious and burning with anger now at pratap

ph:hamari jaise ladki haan hum samajh gaye aap ko koi aise chahiyatha joh kudki sharir aapko dede haina

prt;kyaa

pratap cant believe what he heard

aj;phool!!! aapko andaza bhi hai ki kya kehrahi hai aap
ayindha aisi shabh mat boliye

ajabde can take anything on her but not on her pratap and now was the limit she dint care that phool was her friend she could see only pratap

ph;sach hamesha kadvi lagthi hai haina ab yeh bhi sacch hai ki yeh mevad ka kuwar pratap sirf ladikiyon ki jism ko cha..

''''ccchhhaaannnttthhh'''''

sound echoed in room from phool's cheek by ajabde

yes ajabde has slapped phool she cant even imagine anyone saying like this about pratap
but she did
she felt as if this slap was less for her

pratap was shocked as ajabde slapped her dearest friend that too for him only for him

phool still cant belive that someone actually slaaped her
now she was even more furious

ph:aapki himmat kaise hui hume...

aj:bas!!!!! aur kuch bolne kui himmat mat kijiyega aur isske baad kuwar pratap ke baare main kuch bolne ki himmat ki toh hum kya karenge wohg hum khud bhi nahi jaante samjeh aap

ph;aap janti bhi hai ki hum koun hai

aj;humme koi farak nahi padtha ki aap kis rajya ki rajkumari hai par itna jaan lijiye ki aap hamari mehel mein hai aur hum aap ko aadesh dete hai ki abhi ke abhi yaha se nikhal jayiyeh warna humme sipayyo ko bulakar aapko dhakke maar kar yaha se bech sakthe hai samjheh

phool left there with no words to utter

pratap was even more shocked and surprised as he has never ever seen her this much angry and has never talked to anyone in such loud voice

pratap knows that even though she talked and shouted this much more than anyone she herself is hurt

pratap goes near ajabde and touches her shoulder

ajabde turns with lots of tears in her eyes

she hugs pratap and starts to cry

aj;[crying]humne kya kiya kuwar pratap kya kiya hum ne
kya hum galath the bathayiyeh na kuwar pratap kya hum galat the

prt:bilkul nahi ajabde aap ab rona band kijiye aur humme dekhiye

after pacifying her a little he removes her from the hug and wipe the tears off her and cups her face

prt:aapne jo bhi kiya teek kiya unke liye hum hain na aapke saath aapko barosa hai na hum par?

aj;khud se bhi zyada

pratap smiles and to make her happy he asks..

prt:waise humme patha nahi ajabde ki aap ko itna gursa bhi aata hai

aj:[confused]kya matlab

prt;[mischievously]matlab yeh ki hammein dar lagtha hai ki agar aapko shaadi ke baath itna gursa aaya tho hum kya karenge

both stare at each other
and after sometime start laughing with forgetting the past

part over
hope you guys liked it
please comment and like
Edited by whiteprincess - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
First one to comment 😊
You know I was hooked to this story and was actually waiting for the update badly and finally you gave it.. 👏
Loved the sherni mode of ajabde finally she got some sense and did something for pratap.
Very nice update hoping for a sooner update now 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Just read the whole story. Very nice. Finally Ajabde stands up to Phool.

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