BitterSweet realization - PrAja OS (2nd PArt updated- page4) - Page 4

Originally posted by: blue_an

Wow girl
U are one awesome writer. And I had no issues reading Hindi :D hehehe
But on a serious note I wish u send this OS to the creatives of MP so. That they can get some inspirations and Also give us a full fledged confession like this. This OS is just awesome and ur writing style is so unique like the way u have combined English with pure Hindi is commendable.
There conversation in the first part made me smile and in the second part all I could say was "aawww" they both love each other so much yet Why are they apart.
I thoroughly enjoyed this OS and I hope this is not the last part. I want to read more. What happens after this.

Originally posted by: RiniRocks

I have just one word for this piece of writing, BRILLIANT! So touching and indeed full of romantic and subtle elements. I absolutely loved the part where Pratap hugs Ajabde, and also Ajabde realising his love for her and hugging him back. This OS just portrayed their love in exactly the way it is! Beautiful.

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana

Ya Allah!
Celu ki itni taarif! Celu toh sharma gayi!😳
Thank you so so so much Ana meri jaana for your compliments and praising. It feels so nice to know that my readers enjoy reading my works. Thank you so much!
You know this comment of yours made my day!
I'm really glad that you liked it.
Ana yaara, aajtak I think main apne e hi OneShot ko ke OneShot rakh paayi hoon. Baaki ka title bhale hi OS ho, they always contain 2 parts.😆 Actually if I update the next part than would become a short story types. Just want to keep it to 2 shots only. But is somethign comes to my mind about what should I write in the 3rd part, I'd surely update!😃

Originally posted by: shanz_sejal

Am i on time??

Beautiful it was !

Oh ! The nightmare and the confession ! Fab !

I so Loved it <3

P.s. - U know i thought u were angry on me and not replying me and that you had forgotten me :P

but u still remember me , i see ;)