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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 18

The black eyes narrowed at the familiar man in front of him.

The man bit back a sigh and shaking his head stepped closer.

The stallion gave a mutinous glare, his head rolling giving glimpses of the tethering ring it was bound to.

Unperturbed by it the man gently began arranging the stirrups.

The stallion stamped his legs, his tail swishing furiously.

The man adjusted the saddle, tightening it on his back. Giving a pat the man walked right in front of the horse.

A clash of dark gazes ensued.

"We are going for a ride."

The horse gave a disagreeing neigh jerking his head sideways, eyes rolling.

The man followed his gaze to the nearby stable his eyes spying a white mare.

"So that's what has you refusing a stroll is it?"

The horse lowered his head, blinked and then adopted his patented glare.

Suppressing a smile the man reached closer running a hand through his dense mane.

The stallion moved back sidling around trying to jerk loose from the ring, refusing his touch.

The man gently untied him, holding him by his bridle.

The horse stilled, his nostrils flaring ominously.

The very next second without warning the man swung himself onto the saddle.

Immediately the powerful muscles bunched and with a squeal of annoyance the stallion wheeled and reared up in an attempt to throw the man from his back.

The man showed no panic and simply tightened his grip.

With a rush of sudden fervor the stallion in a bid to be free of his baggage reared and shoved forwards. Free of the oppressive walls of the stable he galloped in a dizzying circle.

The man clung to the saddle and laid himself flat on it pressing his legs tightly against the clenching muscles.

Not giving up the stallion then went into a series of fierce bucks.

The man now felt a jolt of irritation.

The fierce wind ate at his eyes, half-deafened he already was with the relentless clattering of hooves.

Pursing his lips he ran his hand forward winding his hand onto the mane and unlike the previous time gave a tight jerk.

The horse paused in mid-gallop.

"Do we have to go through taming ritual every time?"

The next second was a flurry of activity.

The man slammed his legs onto the sides causing the horse to neigh and simultaneously pulled on the reins.

The horse stumbled back losing his own momentum.

That was enough for his rider.

Pulling on the straps he purposefully wheeled the massive stallion towards the trodden tracks and jerked the reins.

The horse whinnied in protest, trying to fight against the onslaught.

The struggle went on.

Finally the horse steered into a stop his hooves clattering mindlessly.

He lowered his head subserviently, but eyes defiant.

Immediately the man put a hand on the triangular head.

Beastly black eyes peered into human ones.

"Never bow down before me Chetak." His voice was stern holding clandestine feelings buried underneath.

The horse blinked.

The man gave him a soft look. "You are my equal, my partner, my soul-friend. It doesn't matter that you lost. You are with me is what matters as with you I am myself again. Don't ever bow to me, get it?"

The horse stared at his rider and then gave a soft neigh of understanding.

The rider smiled.

"Shall we race against time my friend?"

The horse reared back and next moment the pair screeched through the cool wind galloping towards the woods.

Chakrapani Mishra stared at the massive castle as he drove through the driveway.

He parked his latest fancy by the pavilion and stepped out.

Adopting a brisk pace, he sauntered towards the huge double - doors.

Unlike normal high profile buildings or homes there were no security guards or police for surveillance.

But that didn't mean that the castle was not secure.

For Chakrapani knew that Songara Castle was one of the safest unplottable locations in India.

And for someone as well informed as him the truth was that the castle was no home.

For it was a fortress.

A fortified battle fortress.

The doors were mundane and plain cut.

Smooth and normal.

Chakrapani smirked and raised his right hand placing his palm on the brown wood.

Immediately the doors opened and he stepped into the castle.

The living room was decorated with darker hues. Two huge L-shaped black leather sofas dominated the setting coupled with a diamond shaped glass table.

Ornate vases, both antique and modern coupled with the shimmering light of the chandeliers gave a mystic air to the environment.

Various paintings dominated the walls, and he believed, some of Vikram's were there too.

The twin winding staircases lead up to the upper floors.

A normal outlook.

Ignoring the stairs he walked towards the outlandish ornate ostentatious mirror hanging on the wall.

The best place to hide something was to not hide it at all.

He stood in front of the mirror staring at his reflection and gently brushed his fingers against the glass.

Nothing happened for a moment.

Time passed.

And then a thin beam of red ray erupted from the mirror.

Chakrapani stood still.

The ray ran through him from his head to his toes. Finally it fixated on his eyes.

The ray vanished and a screeching sound came from his right. The staircase right in front of literally folded itself revealing a small doorway.

Chakrapani swiftly strode towards the door and with a backward glance ducked in.

The door closed. The palatial stairs unfolded itself and with a thump landed on its place.

The whole setting looked normal again.

Pratap Songara leaned back into his chair as he surveyed his long time companion and friend.

For some time the silence continued to leave its mark.

"Go on Chakrapani. What happened next?"

Chakrapani took in a deep breath and started speaking. He spoke and spoke, paying no heed to the travelling hands of the clock.

Finally he finished his tale.

Pratap was silent again. Without another word he got up from his seat and reached to the by-side table and poured a glass of water. Silently he handed it to his friend.

Chakrapani stared at him. It had been years to their acquaintance and yet every time he would do something to surprise him, and make him wonder about how well Pratap knew him.

He had been quite thirsty after the long report he had given and without him even voicing it Pratap had known what he wanted.

He felt a warm feeling rise up in his chest. A feeling of love and respect rose in him. A sense of brotherhood. A smile broke through his face as he took the glass of water. Pratap's face softened and he made his way to his seat.

Chakrapani gulped down the cool liquid. These tiny acts of his Baujiraj were the reason that so many people loved him, cared for him, adored him, and even worshipped him something none of his opponents and even family had been able to understand.

He sat down the glass and cleared his throat.

Pratap looked at him. "So PhoolKanwar is alive."

Chakrapani nodded. "Yes. Shobha is looking into her case."

Pratap twirled the glass weight.

"What about the accident investigation?"

"Vyeni and Som have gone there. Apparently the investigator is not one of ours. So it will take a bit of time, but they are positive that they will do it."

Pratap appeared in deep thought. "Who's the there from RBSI?"

Chakrapani frowned. "Some woman. Apparently senior of Forensics, along with her assistant, something Dude... no wait,,,, Dunar...no, no,, u-m-m-m-m...Doral...no wait got it, Dudarmal Chauhan, that Surtan Singh's step nephew. And the woman is... something with K..."

"Krishnaa Vaibhavi Mourya."

Chakrapani nodded vigorously. "Yeah that's it." He suddenly stopped short as his brain caught up with the events.

"How do you know her?" he asked bewildered.

Pratap gave a deadpanned look. "She was one of the Bundi rebels. I told you about her remember."

Chakrapani shook his head in negative.

Pratap leaned closer to him. "Surtan's Singh headache before I came to the picture. Remember?"he prodded.

Chakrapani sifted through years worth of memories and a blurred face came to his mind. The dots connected and a jolt fired through him.

He turned his half- horrified, half- awestruck face to his friend.

"You mean Chirchiri?"

Pratap had to bite down the sudden spurt of amusement rising up in him. Even years later his friend hadn't been able to forget the wild child she had once been.

"Yes. Chirchiri."

Chakrapani punctured down, when all of a sudden he stood up from his seat.

"Oh shit!!"

Pratap got up instantly reacting to the look of alarm on Chakrapani's face. "What happened?"

Chakrapani actually looked tearful. "Not all of us met her."

Pratap looked at him in apparent confusion.

"Yes I guess. I met her, you and Maan met her but" a thought struck him, "Som and Vyeni didn't" he concluded.

Chakrapani face palmed. "I sent Vyeni and Som to their early deaths" and saying so without a proper goodbye rushed out of the study.

Pratap stood still at that sudden departure. The very next second a smile spread across his face as a new conclusion hit him.

"Well Vyeni, get ready. You're finally going to meet your match."

Edited by mistofshadows - 10 years ago
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Niki...such a long wait for the update. ...loved it ...but please update soon..it has been ages. ...
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Finally...!!!! đŸ€ȘI am already waiting for the next update of urs...!!!! 😆
Update soon...!!!!
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Amazing ff u wrote here...totally enchanting... Just wanting keep on ready.. .plzz add me and pm me too if u do...cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

AN- All right people, here's the new chapter and an important announcement.

The next chapter will be the last one in 2014.

After chapter 20th the next ones will be updated from January 2015 onwards that too in a new thread because I find that the index page has expanded quite a lot.

This thread will be open and comments and reviews till chapter 20 are encouraged.

Also after the last chapter, I will be posting a summary of these twenty chapters.

If anyone has any queries regarding the plot, please mention it in a review or PM me.

A treat for you all the twentieth chapter will give a partial view of the incident that made Pratap what he is.

Till then adieu!!!!!


CHAPTER 19

Krishnaa surveyed the crime scene with careful concentration. The car, a Jaguar, if she guessed right, after all Rao Maldev would never have his grand-daughter drive something less ostentatious; stood firmly plastered to the tree trunk, its hood smashed and tweezed, twisted to an ugly macabre of the beauty it once was.

A flash of a camera went behind her, the sound of the shutters breaking her train of thought.

She turned to look at her wayward friend.

"What?" he asked defensibly, answering to her glare, "I am doing my work. Just like you said."

"Really?"Krishnaa echoed. "And what may happen to be your work. Remind me."

"Umm, I am supposed to take the photos" he answered abruptly.

Krishnaa gave him a sweet smile. "And where in thrice damned hell did your job description include disturbing my investigation by the awful noise you are making?"

Duda shrinked back a little. "You weren't doing anything. Just standing and staring. And I needed this angle for the photograph."

Krishnaa raised her eyebrows. "You could have done than from the other side too. Don't bother selling me half-baked lies about angles," she warned as he tried to protest, "I had done a course on photography too. As for standing still I was thinking Duda, which I am sure is a concept alien to you."

Duda gave her a sheepish look.

"Alright I lied. So what? This is boring than any other case we have been in. I mean there is no thrill in this, you know, like that trafficking case and the serial murder one we worked on. This one's just bland."

Krishnaa gave him an exasperated look.

"No its not. This is interesting. Far more than any other case we have been in."

Duda felt like hitting his head onto something hard.

"Krishnaa" he began in a plaintive voice, "in this very interesting case' we have so far a car, quite a beauty no doubt, rammed to a tree. There is no sign of sabotage in the brakes, the steering works perfectly, oil tank is three quarters full, and tires are in proportional pressure. The back side of the car is unharmed and the front is slammed to the tree. A perfect case of accident due to carelessness and driving in high speed at a turning. Now please explain to me what is interesting in this."

Krishnaa opened her mouth to retort when a voice stopped her short.

"Yes, yes, please tell us what is interesting Madamji."

Krishnaa turned to look in the direction the voice came from.

Two men stood by a police jeep, just outside the taped RBSI border restricting entry, one in civilian dress up and the other wearing police uniform.

Narrowing her eyes at the unwanted interruption, she swiftly made her way towards them, Duda following at her heels.

She stepped in front of the police man who had addressed her earlier her eyes spying a third man in the jeep sitting in the driver's seat.

"Hello Madamji. So what have you..."

"Who are you? What do you want? How did you reach here? Who gave you the permission to interrupt my work? Do you have an official license? Where is it? Which police station you work in? Who is your superior? Where is the signed letter of authority from them?"

The police man looked at her askance. He then gave her a charming grin.

"Whoa, whoa! Hold your fire, Madamji. No need to get worked up. I am Paras Dixit." He waited for an answer from the petite scowling woman in front of him.

He waited and waited and finally his smile slipped down.

Krishnaa glared at him. She stepped closer to him and pointed towards some other RBSI officials working under her lead.

"He is Shubham. Next to him Karthik. The woman in goggles is Nidhi. But" her voice hardened, "in our field of work that doesn't suffice. Currently it doesn't matter if they are Tom, Dick or Harry or even George Bush or Salman Khan either. What matters is their profession and whether it gives them the right to cross the boundary. Likewise I am Krishnaa, which is secondary. Important thing is I am a senior in RBSI Forensic Dept. due to which I head this team. So I repeat who the hell are you?"

Paras stared at the minuscule woman in horrified silence. He had always felt himself to be smooth with woman but then again he had never met a woman with a tongue as sharp as the swords his ancestors used to cut the heads of their enemies. She could honestly bring one down to their knees with a few choicest arrows of her icy remarks. He suddenly felt that agreeing to Som was a very bad idea.

"Ummm...," he cleared his throat, "I am the DSP of Kherwa branch. And the SP assigned me to this case, I mean" he backtracked at the look on her face, "to assist you in the investigation."

Krishnaa looked at him from head to toe.

"DSP huh?" she pinned him with her eyes, "where's your badge?"

"Huh, what?" Paras asked nonplussed.

"Your badge. The one mentioning your name and designation" she bit out already annoyed at the bumbling man.

"Oh that badge!" he finally figured out and immediately reached to his pockets and began digging them. A short struggle ensued.

Finally after the appearance of a toothpick, a chewing gum, a pair of burnt matchsticks, toffee wrappers, and many more, a rectangular steel badge emerged quite worn out.

Paras looked at his weathered badge and then at the woman in front of him whose face was clouding with anger.

He gulped and repeated the cycle again.

Without haste he quickly pinned the badge on his uniform and presented an innocent smile to her.

He then reached into the car and took out a sheaf of papers which he handed to her.

Krishnaa surveyed those items with a mutinous scowl, none to happy at seeing the official proofs.

With a harrumph she handed them back to the man and spit out in barely suppressed frustration.

"Fine. Get in then."

Paras gave a cheeky smile and ducked inside the tape and turned around only to find himself leaning back as the petite woman stalked closer to him.

"Listen and listen well. If you disturb me whatever the reason might be, I will castrate you with a blunt knife and through you to the Bhil jungles in your barely clothed state. Got it?"

Paras felt a shiver race up his spine. His head nodded automatically as his mind cursed Som repeatedly.

"Yes Madamji. As you wish Madamji."

Krishnaa sniffed and turned around. However before she moved ahead she heard the rustle of the tape as if someone was trying to get in or out.

Paras was already in as she could spy his shadow and her other team members were right in her linesight. That meant...

"What do you think you are doing?"

Paras jumped at the shrill voice breaking on them and Vyeni froze in the middle of ducking into the taped area.

Vyeni Das Vaishistha used to being catered to his every need and listened to, straightened up still holding the tape as he stood outside do it. The woman he had been halfway ignoring stalked towards him.

He watched her petite frame bouncing in the long strides she took, her lips pressed in a line of disapproval.

But what caught him were her eyes. They were unlike any he had ever seen.

The colour hazel wasn't uncommon but it were the feelings brewing in them that stopped him short.

She was a tiny little thing but by word, she could get angry.

Her eyes blazed thunders, those hazel orbs swirling with anger and irritation. Her curly hair tightly tied back now slowly ventured out of their bindings, finally winning their ongoing struggle.

"What were you doing?" she asked furious.

Vyeni broke out from his contemplation and fell into his usual pattern of behavior.

"Getting in, Head Investigator. Any problems with that?" he queried carelessly and reached the tape to duck in.

A hand clamped on his wrist.

"Yes."

Vyeni straightened losing all the little playfulness he had adopted.

"You can't come in."

"Look..."

"Don't waste your breath. You don't have any license to go in. Kindly please leave."

Vyeni took in a deep breath. Remember Vyeni, he gathered himself together, be polite.

"I am a lawyer and..."

"Not good enough buddy" Krishnaa cut him off. She stepped closer and flipped him off. "Go away. While yours may not be, my time is quite precious."

Vyeni felt the thin hold on his temper shake, as a sudden spurt of rage erupted in him. No one in his whole life had talked to him this rudely. And that little chit of a girl!

He had, had enough. Time for business now.

He too stepped closer.

"According to Rajputana Law 4, Amendment 13, a person of law may enter any prevalent crime scene with the express permission of the investigation centered, authority branch." He gave her a little smirk. "Paras as you are the representative of the authority control out here, may I enter?"

Paras looked at his companion, and then his soon to be boss. Which side to choose? One side full of prickly needles and the other side sure to be full of unholy pranks and nightmares. One truly said the innocents are always the first ones to be sacrificed.

"Of c-course Vyeni. I-If y-you are s-sure" he replied wincing at the heated glare Krishnaa threw at him.

Vyeni gave her a superior smirk. He gestured towards her hands clamped down on his.

Krishnaa stared at him for some time and then threw him an identical smirk. Vyeni flustered, confused.

"According to Rajputana Law 4, Amendment 13, Subclause 1, a person of law may enter a crime scene only if he/she is responsible for the legal assistance provided to the involved parties." Her smile widened. "So tell me whose lawyer are you?"

Vyeni swore under his breath. It was then when his eyes fell on a rotund personality.

"And whose lawyer is he?" Vyeni asked aggressively.

Krishnaa quirked an eyebrow. "I didn't know lawyers used cameras. Are you blind or just impossibly dense?"

Vyeni spluttered. Unused as he was at being declared wrong and incapable at anything, this sudden rebuke made a fist sized hole on his ego.

"Him, a photographer. I can see the standards of RBSI quite clearly," he taunted.

Krishnaa gave him an unimpressed glance. "At least he isn't hard of hearing and, putting two and two together, unlike you who simply cannot get it through your thick skull that you aren't authorized to come here."

She invaded personal space now and pointed a finger at his nose.

"So buddy, I am simply not buying, what you are selling." Saying so she flipped him the bird and without a backward glance sauntered off ignoring the burning glare on her back.

Served him right, jackass.

Edited by mistofshadows - 10 years ago
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Whoa I like this Krishna better. This one has a sharper tongue than the one in show. I enjoyed all her interactions. I will eagerly wait for Vyeni's reaction after all every action has a reaction.
Thanks for PM...Update soon


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brilliant update nikki!! :D thanks for the pm :)
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I loved loved this update...!!!!! Krishna and Vyeni...!!!!! đŸ€Ș
Finally they both met their equals i.e., one another...!!!!! 😆
I m waiting for the next...!!!! So chap 20 will be the end of Obscured Fate Season 1..!!! Hmm... I m longing for the next season now only...!!!!
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hi niki
how are you? đŸ€—
its been long time since i comment here but it doesn't mean that i didn't read your post,,,not even after millions of reason i will miss it,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,, gosh girl,,,,,, every time i convince myself that in the new chapter i will get the cat out of box and every time u manage to amazed me with the twist in story,,,,,,, U HAVE BLOWN AWAY ME,,,, i m just flat ,,,TOTALLY

you are a one hell of a writer who knows how to bound the readers... your work is one of a kind,,,its a key to the treasure for a book worm like me,,,,,, and with every mystery element lead to another ,,its just the roller coaster ride,,,,,,,,, oh my ,,,,,,❀,,,

ok now the confession,,,,,,,,( i m having a big smile while writing this)
i am feeling as if i am living with the characters of your story... ohh gosh i feel if i was the any character in your story ,,,,,,,sharing moments with the historical fictional individuals...,,,,how dreamy it is ,,,,,,, sorry but i couldn't stop myself in self portrayal in your FF,,,,,,😆,,,,but what can i do the adventure crazy me is shooting out everytime i read your work

,every character have its own depth... and kudos to you for maintaining the individuality of each character... every time i read your FF,,,,,,, and every single time i find myself in the story itself,,,,,,,,, the choice of words,,,,, the situations,,,,,,the emotion ,,,,,,,, and not to forget the suspense ,,,,,,,,,its just way beyond the words...

just see you have only posted the initial chapters and you made me this crazy,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i don't know what i will do until your next post,,,,,,,,,,,

i will b more like a headless chicken running in room đŸ€Ł

i know everyone have a life outside IF but still plz give updates ,,😳,,,,,

till your next update ...have a nice time ahead,,,,,,,merry ChristmasđŸ„ł and a very happy new yearđŸ˜łđŸ€—

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So First of all, thanks for the PM Nikki!
Second, I'm so sorry that i couldn't reply to your PM nor didi I comment for the previous part...and...i know I'm late...so sowieee yaara!!!!!

I loved the 18th part and that 'Chirchiri' name...cute!
Pratap planning for KrEyni(Krishna+Vyeni) jodi?! Waise Idea bura nahin hai...I like it hehehehe...

19th part totali dedicated ti KrEyni and Paras...
Achha tell me, isn't paras that prince who gave his balidaan in the show Mughals killed him...that Paras na...
And yes, I love that fiery nature of Krishna...!!!

Love the way you are proceeding. And let me tll you... I'm DAMN EXCITED for the 20th part!!!!!!!!!!! Finally we'll get to know the secret...the reason for such a misterious, dark and intense Pratap which he definitely was not!!!!! GOSH!!1 I'm REALLY EXCITED!!!!!

Update soonish Nikki!!! Will be eagerly waiting for the 20th chapter!!!!!!

P.S. A very happy new year from advance...coz I guess i would be out station for the last 5 days of 2014! And yep, i think i would be reading chapter 20th next year only! LOL

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