OS- Tere Saansoin mein mujhe panah mil Jaaye - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
can I pen down my version 😃

After AdiYa marriage, waseem snatches Zosh away it is revealed he made yash financially suffer. AdiYa are building a life for themselves, anjana accepts Zoya for Adi's sake. They return to hooda house, all is well until sakshi re enters exposes anjana. She is found guilty for poosh murder. However HH convientely shifts the entire blame on waseem to save Anjana. Aditya supports his mom, Zoya her dad. This leads to a rift and separation (no leap lol) Arnoor become the medium for them to reunite. anju rotting in jail 😆 later she is released. Still haven't changed much lol. Adi begins hating his mom but Zoya patches their relation up. The torn pages of pooja's diary reveals Aditya to be illegitimate son of HH - Anjana coz HH was still married to his 1st wife. she committed suicide when HH left her. No mention of HH having a son from his previous marriage (that was clearly channel's idea) when Aditya finds out about this, he begins to hate his dad again. Emotional SR, Zoya mends the broken relationship between father and son. Anjana accepts Zoya as her bahu, Arnoor patch up and marry, waseem accepts Aditya. Leap of 2-3 years showing AdiYa moved out of hooda house to live in their own home but still keep in contact with their family and are parents to golu and sweety 😆 last shot shows them laying down together on the bed thinking about the circumstances they met. The ups and downs they faced.
Edited by Cherryfairy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Thanks Soma, cherry, adventure gurl and Deba.

@alanta Adi says hum hamesha saath hain, agar zindagi ke baadh bhi kuch ho wahan bhi 😭

You know di...I have a thing for this kind of stories ...Zindagi k baad v types( not punarjanam) more than happily ever after because i find this kind of stories more intense, passionate and raw with emotions . even Iam writing something on this plot of undying love forever...but I have no idea when will it complete😭😭.11 hr of work then prep for upsc are already taking all of my time and sanity...but I really want to complete my story... hopefully one day...
N the best part is...earlier I have not decided the name of my lead but now it has been decided...one and only Aditya...😉😉may be I will change the title.and earlier it was faceless but now it has got face too...😆😆 again of certain somone...not difficult to guess who...😉😉
N this is first time I am talking about it to someone...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is so heartbreaking painful but hauntingly beautiful 👏 di..i cannot control my tears😭.😭..i can imagine scene by scene..physically she would have left him but emotionally she will be with him always 😒 very soulful di.. i would have loved if they had this kind of ending. This ending justifies ani sir's words it is story about love , not a love story and ur ending proves what zoya's love adiya's love has achieved ❤️

P.S : Di i have a very kind request/wish , if possible can u write an os on ending scene if zoya was alive.

Edit : I loved the cockpit scene and ur last shot ,screen freezing on flight 👏 superb it is!!
Edited by Kiruravi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
How dare you?

You made me cry.

I never do but you did.

Its so nice di. Sad but still a happy ending. Has a deaths but still hope for a new life remains.

Loved the ending di.

I reiterate Krithika's idea.

Please write if Zoya was alive if possible.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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@thanks novemeber rain.
@shabla, kiru, @Mandy this ending actually stemmed from Jenny's words in her opening interview that she had tears in her eyes when she first heart the narrative. Then it was about peace. So I combined both. A happily ever after wouldnt make anyone shed tears.

@ soma u need to take time to write. Even I had many stories running in my head. But only very recently I could complete Seven Vows and publish it because my college life and corporate career didnt give me enough time to pursue my passion. Once I decided to quit job, I turned towards my passion and the fiction Seven Vows happened.

@ cherry that's a nice take. Actually everyone has their view.😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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True Shruthi n to be honest almost all my stories have a bitter sweet end. Barring one story none of mine ever had a happily ever after 😆 so yeah I get it. This end would have given BP a new dimension altogether.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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@Mandy this or something similar would have elevated BP to a different level.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Its really beautiful di.

I hope I didn't offend you with my earlier post.

Sorry if I did.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That's ok sharadi. I had told earlier also my idea of ending is heartbreaking but sukoon wala.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

That's ok sharadi. I had told earlier also my idea of ending is heartbreaking but sukoon wala.



Its Shraddha.

I know. You feel bad that Zoya died but still it is not a sad ending. Zoya lives through Aditya. He is only Zoya's Aditya. The best version that ever lived.

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