Your Choice..Adiya FF COMPLETE [Promo Inspired] update pg6-dec12

Priyanka

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

interesting dear
cont soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This is just amazing write up yaar. So very heart wrenching.. Your details were just so in depth and does not look like u don't watch the show much.. . Just waiting for the rest of the write up... .Write soon ...

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Kiki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow, you write so beautifully. My heart ached for Aditya! Would love to read more 😊

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Dinali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This is amazing.please update soon dear.can't wait to see what happens next...

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hi Jess, welcome to Bepannaah forum first thing 😃

Secondly, I can't believe you're not a constant follower with the way you've written down situations & specially the ending paragraphs, where you've written about Waseem's undeniable hatred towards Adi. I felt pissed when he didn't even care to ask how is Aditya LOL

You'll be continuing this aren't you? One thing I specially liked in your OS is the fact that Zoya's concern for Arshad was literally burning Adi & you had written it so beautifully 😊

Do write more too! Waiting for the next part Jess..

P.S I had tears in my eyes because of how similar this is gonna be in the show & how Adi is gonna breakdown yet again 🥱 You've penned the emotions so aptly

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Jessie92

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Meeph
This is a great start.
Update soon

Thank you so much!! I did update soon...a month later :P

Sorry, but kinda of unpredictable when I write. I am sorry, but will try to update sooner next time.

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Jessie92

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: aditi_jain
Update soon the rest😭

Sorry!!!! Did not update soon!!! 😭😭

Will try next time

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Jessie92

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: deeps07
This is so good...u say u r not a regular watcher..but ur detailed expressions regarding each character and their current feeling is so relatable..it is almost as if i can feel it..be it aditya..or zoya..or even the.panicked people hiding..its really beautifully written..cant wait to read more..its so heartbreaking..plz more dear...soon..

Thank you so much for your comment and for reading. I do not watch the regularly and haven't had a chance to catch up as of yet. I think one day I will just binge watch it. But I am glad that you felt as if I captured the characters!!

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Jessie92

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: CaramelCritters
This is so painfully beautiful. The way you have penned down Aditya's emotion is so apt. Please continue this FF Dear.

Thank you!!! Sorry did not update soon.

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Jessie92

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: ikhtiyar
Wow. Please continue this! Waiting to read more from you in the forum. For the suggestions though you can try Inveigle by kashishsr. I don't have the link but you can Google it.

Hi,

thank you for the recommendation. I tried googling it, but couldn't find it. Will try to look again for it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It encourages me to write and continue with this FF!!

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