An AdiYa OS- Together...Forever! - Page 3

Originally posted by: monikagdd

It was so beautiful..I was actually imagining that happening in real..and it wasn't a long story. I wish it was longer

Originally posted by: Sovereign_K

This is the best os I read in recent times. So beautiful and intense. I would love to see this once in the show.

Keep writing on Adiya, please.

Originally posted by: Luv_PaRiAnSh

That was so damn beautiful. Absolutely loved reading it

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Such a wonderfully written OS, i actually felt every emotion while reading it :) Loved it

Originally posted by: cloudcaverns

The emotional rollercoaster was overwhelming. You have penned down everything that is Adiya❤️

Originally posted by: Flame.

That warmed my heart. Sighhh

Please write more on Adiya ❤️

Originally posted by: dart4

Just Amazing!! beautifully written narrative...just loved reading the way the writer injects her pathos and love into both the roles! Please write more.

I agree, this forum has some unbelievably talented writers!

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

BROOO 🤗 🤗 🤗
Surpriseee!!! 😛 😆

Heyyy janeman brooo!!!!! 🤗🤗❤️

What an amazing surprise bro! Love you for this... I am soo happy! Feels like mehnat safal hogai! 😆😆❤️

So this is just for you, this mini comeback and coming on this forum for the first time, all just for your wonderful and addictive writing talent!! ❤️

I am honored bro...really... 😳😳❤️

Since you know I have been follwing bits and bytes of this show and you are my main source of all information so I was really pumped up after reading it! I could connect easily to all the characters and I loved how you penned it with such an ease bro 👏

Bro, aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki mien kuch accha dekhun aur tum se shar na kerun? 😃 So its a given... Bepannaah ki official reporter bann gayee hun mien! 😎

You are a powerhouse of talent truly and I am blessed to have read almost all of your writeups! And I can't wait to read more of them ;D

Brooo! 😳 I am just learning to write abhi... kahan ka powerhouse yar! 😳😳 Iss forum per itne acchay writers hain ke unke aagay tou mien kuch bhi nahi... 😳😊😊

But buttt
Coming to this one! Hayyeee matlab kaatil bro!
Kya likha hai
Zoya's heart was almost lost in the pool of ocean when she saw aditya in that situation, her impatience towards noor's phone call and the way she snatched it, every minute detail could be felt the way you wrote everything, I am so impressed.
Arjun is such a sweetheart, he led zoya inside the house and then came the epic scene of all. The ambience of the room could be imagined and when zoya saw aditya curled up, all her emotions came through, and I so loved it when she herself analyzed his expressions and his reactions on the earlier situations and concluded that indeed she is the one whom he needs badly! It was an amazing moment!
Loved how you wrote the whole amalgamation of zoya's feelings!

Haan yar... Mujhe pata nahi kyun Zoya kafi misunderstood lagg rahy hai aj kal... Aditya ki feelings tou cvs ne acchay se dikhaya..lekin Zoya ka abhi nahi dikhaya hai... And you know me... If you remember, I used to write about Ratan's feelings too when the cvs hadnt shown his side of story! 😉😃😃 So usi terha se I am trying to guage Zoya's feelings and as per my own perception, I just wrote this all... 😳

Then that cuddling moment between the both was super adorable and treat to my imagination!! Bro bahut pyaara scene tha yeh toh yaar ❤️

I knowww right! 😳😳 It was such a blissful moment...I also felt peace! 😆😆

Then the morning cute conversation between them was superb yaar!
The lines like cupboard khaali hai kapde rkhlo kuch apne and bathroom mein jaake shower mat on krdena galti se warna main iss baar control nahi kr paunga hahahaha just adorable man! Too good that you gave them such a beautiful closure in this one shot!!
Loved it bro ❤️ really really loved it dil se! 😳

Thank you sooo much bro... I love how you analyze my write ups! Thats such a sweet thing to do... Love you bro!

Ps. Happy friendship day bro :* ❤️

OF COURSEEE BROOO! HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY!!!!! ❤️🤗

And thanks for coming to the forum for me... 😳😃

Originally posted by: .MooN.

One of the best OS' I have read in a long time. WELL DONE 👏

Beautifully Written ..words are not enough to praise you.

Keep writing more..