An AdiYa OS- Together...Forever! - Page 2

The emotional rollercoaster was overwhelming. You have penned down everything that is Adiya❤️

That warmed my heart. Sighhh

Just Amazing!! beautifully written narrative...just loved reading the way the writer injects her pathos and love into both the roles! Please write more.

BROOO 🤗 🤗 🤗
Surpriseee!!! 😛 😆
So this is just for you, this mini comeback and coming on this forum for the first time, all just for your wonderful and addictive writing talent!! ❤️
Since you know I have been follwing bits and bytes of this show and you are my main source of all information so I was really pumped up after reading it! I could connect easily to all the characters and I loved how you penned it with such an ease bro 👏
You are a powerhouse of talent truly and I am blessed to have read almost all of your writeups! And I can't wait to read more of them ;D
But buttt
Coming to this one! Hayyeee matlab kaatil bro!
Kya likha hai
Zoya's heart was almost lost in the pool of ocean when she saw aditya in that situation, her impatience towards noor's phone call and the way she snatched it, every minute detail could be felt the way you wrote everything, I am so impressed.
Arjun is such a sweetheart, he led zoya inside the house and then came the epic scene of all. The ambience of the room could be imagined and when zoya saw aditya curled up, all her emotions came through, and I so loved it when she herself analyzed his expressions and his reactions on the earlier situations and concluded that indeed she is the one whom he needs badly! It was an amazing moment!
Loved how you wrote the whole amalgamation of zoya's feelings!
Then that cuddling moment between the both was super adorable and treat to my imagination!! Bro bahut pyaara scene tha yeh toh yaar ❤️
Then the morning cute conversation between them was superb yaar!
The lines like cupboard khaali hai kapde rkhlo kuch apne and bathroom mein jaake shower mat on krdena galti se warna main iss baar control nahi kr paunga hahahaha just adorable man! Too good that you gave them such a beautiful closure in this one shot!!
Loved it bro ❤️ really really loved it dil se! 😳

Ps. Happy friendship day bro :* ❤️

One of the best OS' I have read in a long time. WELL DONE 👏

Originally posted by: jumz86

Sooo good!! I loved reading it! People in this forum are so talented. I feel like after reading these amazing OSes, the CVs may not matchup and I'm going to end up getting dissapointed by whatever track the CVs chooses to go.

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

I keep getting hit by amazing writers and their stories one after another

That was a beautiful OS ❤️

AdiYa finally found the peace and love they were looking for 😳

Keep writing...looking forward to more stories from you

Originally posted by: AbnerFernandes

I think this might be one of the best one shots i read on this forum.

Originally posted by: geet0910

This os was so bful n so intense. Made me mood better. Thanks for that. Loved it so much. Please do write more. 😃

Originally posted by: FaizaAndalibC

SUCH A NICE OS...👍🏼I WISH KE SHOW MAIN BHI AISA HI HOTA...