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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Just pure bliss! First with Zoya not being at ease unable to see Aditya in the middle of the night, getting Arjun's help, advancing towards Adi who had been crying himself to sleep, making him be at ease on her lap, realization dawning upon Zoya it was she herself Aditya found peace with & finally her silent agreement to be with him forever - subtle & smooth detailing about the two 👏

Next morn Adi teasing Zoya about the bathroom accident they had 😆, his comment on keeping her clothes in his cupboard, his sweet & delicate proposal were just amazing to read. One of the most understanding, logical & sensible OS's on AdiYa I've ever read 😃 Love it to bits.. Write more on the two & if there's a possibility hope you'd pm too

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Just pure bliss! First with Zoya not being at ease unable to see Aditya in the middle of the night, getting Arjun's help, advancing towards Adi who had been crying himself to sleep, making him be at ease on her lap, realization dawning upon Zoya it was she herself Aditya found peace with & finally her silent agreement to be with him forever - subtle & smooth detailing about the two 👏
Next morn Adi teasing Zoya about the bathroom accident they had 😆, his comment on keeping her clothes in his cupboard, his sweet & delicate proposal were just amazing to read. One of the most understanding, logical & sensible OS's on AdiYa I've ever read 😃 Love it to bits.. Write more on the two & if there's a possibility hope you'd pm too

Oh my God! Such a sweet analysis of the OS! Thank you soo much for liking it yar... 😳😳😃

I love the fact that you found the subtlety of their scenes so nice... 😊

I will definitely try to write some more on AdiYa... 👍🏼

I will buddy you to send a pm if I write anything else on AdiYa...😊

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mrs_weasley

@mrs_weasley

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Ayesha you should write more often yaar! Your DiRa FFs were magical and now this! wow buddy you just keep surprising me!!!

I looove how how portrayed Zoya in this OS!! Befikri, Bindaas and kinda a chor type dimaag waali chicka!! Kya scheme banayi hai bandi ne! Matlab main toh fan ho gayi iss ladki ke dimaag ki!!! 😆😆

And Adi... I wanted to cry for him... And then blush when he made those innuendos in the last part... Oh Boy he's so perfect...!!!!

please write more often!!! These kind of stories are a treat to read!!!

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: mrs_weasley
Ayesha you should write more often yaar! Your DiRa FFs were magical and now this! wow buddy you just keep surprising me!!!
I looove how how portrayed Zoya in this OS!! Befikri, Bindaas and kinda a chor type dimaag waali chicka!! Kya scheme banayi hai bandi ne! Matlab main toh fan ho gayi iss ladki ke dimaag ki!!! 😆😆
And Adi... I wanted to cry for him... And then blush when he made those innuendos in the last part... Oh Boy he's so perfect...!!!!
please write more often!!! These kind of stories are a treat to read!!!

Areyyy my Angel buddy is here! Yaiyaayy!😃😃 1st of all, I feelll soo awesome to see your comment. You logged in here just for my OS... 😳❤️ Awwwiee.. Thank you so much buddy!😳

Your words are always so precious... ❤️

Secondly, getting such amazing comments from a brilliant writer as yourself, is an honor! 🤗 Shukran jazeelan my lovely friend... 😊

Yeaa... this bindaas Zoya was a treat to write. You know, in the show also, I wanted Zoya to be the 1st one to fall in love and the 1st one to realize. I wanted Adi to oppose actually.. I dont know why but I was really hoping that Zoya will be shown as she had already realized her feelings in those 6 months..and now she is just giving time to Adi to realize too... and when he finally confesses, I wanted Zoya to do a happy dance on finally getting a confession from him! 😃😃 I know this is quite far fetched...but abh banda soch tou sakta hi haina... 😆😆

Kher... now we know that its Adi who has fallen and realized first. According to some spoilers, he will confess and Zoya will get mad at him and will accuse him for crossing lines!😕 Yani jo socha tha uska bilkul ulta hone wala hai as per the spoilers!😭 Maybe isi tashan baazi mien she gets engaged to Arshad and then she realizes her mistake and love for Adi..

Adiii k liye tou mera bhi buht dil dukh raha hai... 😭 Bechara hes totally broken...

I will try to write more on AdiYa... 👍🏼

As of now, I am focussing on editing my English novel and send it to some publishers... and side by side, I started writing an Urdu novel too...tou us per bhi working chalu hai.. 😊 Lets see kab likhty hun next on AdiYa...

I will let you know about it.. 😊

Lastly, love you bro... Thanks for coming here and commenting on my OS... ❤️😃

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Prizi
beautifully written dear

Thank you soo much dear friend... 😊😊⭐️

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desiseriesfan

@desiseriesfan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Ayesha,

First 👏

Fantastic writing my friend. Zoya breaks all boundaries and falls in love with with Adi, more faster than instant coffee 😃 But it was plain and perfect and beautiful..

In serial, Adi is in deep love but in OS Zoya couldn't resist herself to fall, that made the OS more beautiful.

I hope you will write more in Bepannaah.

P.S. Do you know that I forgot my password and only because of your OS i had to recollect it by doing all those procedures that is needed?

Again P.S. Do you know that after reading lots of your 18+ writing I was like " did it end ? "

Again again P.S. It doesn't mean that you have to write 18+ , its like , you know what its like...

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Carry

@Doc.love

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: nancy505
Ayesha,
First 👏
Fantastic writing my friend. Zoya breaks all boundaries and falls in love with with Adi, more faster than instant coffee 😃 But it was plain and perfect and beautiful..

In serial, Adi is in deep love but in OS Zoya couldn't resist herself to fall, that made the OS more beautiful.

I hope you will write more in Bepannaah.

P.S. Do you know that I forgot my password and only because of your OS i had to recollect it by doing all those procedures that is needed?

Again P.S. Do you know that after reading lots of your 18+ writing I was like " did it end ? "

Again again P.S. It doesn't mean that you have to write 18+ , its like , you know what its like...

Heyyy my Nancy baby!!!😃🤗 Pehle tou aa galay lag ja!😆😆

Thank you sooo much buddy for logging in the IF for my OS again...😳😳 Itni khushi...itni khushi...itni khushiii ho rahy hai mujhe ke kia bataon!😃😃

Yeaaa bro... mery OS wali Zoya kafi bindaas hai... 😃

Instant coffee!!!!🤣 Oh Nancy! I was missing your comments bro! 😆😆

About 18+ stuff... Yaar dekho koi sequence banta hai mind mien tou likhun gy... I will inform you ager kuch naya likha Bepannaah per tou... 😊😊

Lastly... Love you bro!😃❤️ Thank you soo much for coming to the forum for me... ❤️🤗