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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

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+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Superb update

Please write an epilogue if possible

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Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

It was awesome...

Superb...i loved it .

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

awesome update yar

i want an epilogue

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Khidkitod

@Khidkitod

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Amazing story dear. Want an epilogue.

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Priyanka

@Imqueenofmylife

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Amazing story dear

Totally loved it

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a s h u

@SlytherInMe

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

great series
loved the depth and emotion in it
Would love to see an epilogue, maybe a silver lining for pooja and a baby for Adiya?

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Wonderful update dear

Totally loved it...

Please post epilogue too

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Shreya

@Adiya45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Outstanding story

Well written

Loved it ❤️

Edited by Adiya45 - 7 years ago

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Fabulous writing. Short yet very sweet and fast paced. You write emotions so well. Please write more.

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

This was such an emotional rollacoster!

The turmoil of Zoya as a 18 year old was shown so well. Loved Aditya's character here! And I can so imagine Harshad as that.

Beautifully written shot Di! Enjoyed reading it.

The title was so apt. Gives a mysterious vibe to the story.

Would have loved to read more but the ending seemed sweet, you should given some insight of Aditya and his daughter too, that would have been cherry on top.

Keep writing more such os. They sure are a treat.

Sam

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