Thanking Him SS Part 3 Page 6 *Updated 14/5/18*

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Riya2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update

Thank you dear

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Riya2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Thanks dear

I will update it soon

Edited by Riya2020 - 7 years ago

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Quite similar to the show, nvm you gotta continue this 😆

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Riya2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Thanking Him SS Part 2

Aditya takes Zoya to the hospital with Noor behind him. Arjun comes behind them he still hasn't noticed Noor.

Aditya goes to the reception and tell them to admit zoya the nurse says

"It's A Suicide Case sorry sir we can't do anything we are contacting the police "

"I don't give a damn, admit her or I will sew the hospital I come from the family of lawyers. Arjun"

"Ji Bhai"

They admit zoya and take her to the emergency room.Adi thinks about the times he has spent with zoya and a small smile appears on his face.Noor comes to Aditya and she sees Arjun

"App"

"Tum"

"Coffee Nawaz app yahan kya kar rahe hai"

"Rani Chocomati yeh sawal tou mujhe pooche na chai hai"

Aditya joins and says

"Coffee kya aur Chocomati ab yeh kya hai Zoya emergency room mein hai yahan meri halaat kharab ho rahi hai aur tum dono mazak kar rahe ho"

"Nahi Bhai hum mazak nahi kar rahe"

"Aditya app ki halaat kyun kharab ho rahi hai. App ka Appi ke saath kya rishta hai "

"Kuch nahi par wo meri dost hai"

Before Noor could answer him the doctor comes out. Adi and Noor rush to the the doctor

"Doctor, How is Zoya"

"Haan Doctor how is my Appi"

"Mr.Hooda app ki wife ki halaat bohat kharab hai."

Aditya interrupts the doctor and says

"She is not my wife doctor "

"Sorry for the mistake but the way you care for her and were ready to sew the hospital for her I thought you were her Husband "

"It's okay doctor and how about Zoya's condition"

"Yes, If she doesn't wake up I am sorry to say Mr Hooda she can fall in coma "

Noor goes and sits on the bench and get teary eyed. Arjun sees her and goes to her

He consoles Noor

(ArNoor shippers a scene specially for you guys😉)

"Chocomati you know Zoya ji"

"Haan wo meri bari behan hai"

"Oh, Don't worry Zoya ji can fight this she is strong. Don't lose hope"

"Yes Appi is strong after all she is Noor Siddique's sister"

"So your name is Noor "

"Haan app ka naam kya hai"

"Arjun Hooda, Aditya Hooda ka chota bhai"

"Oh tou wo app hai the one who has saves Appi before as well thank you" Noor get teary eyed again and hugs Arjun

Arjun hugs her back

Aditya walks out of the hospital on the road and think about Zoya

"Zoya never thought bad for anyone App aisa nahi kar sakte please zoya ko wapas de do"

He sits on his knees and starts crying

"Please wapas de do"

He closes his eyes and he sees zoya everywhere

His thoughts are disturbed by the ringing if his phone

"Bhai"

"Haan Arjun"

"Zoya is alright she is conscious now"

"This really good news the news I was nothing I will be right there I got my life back"

Aditya cuts the call and runs back to the hospital

Arjun

Don't know what bhai is trying to say

He got his life back ? Huh

Is bhai in love

Let him come I will ask him

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If it is not good do let me know

And tell me if I should continue or not I just wanted to show Aditya falling for Zoya😉

Enjoy

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Sanjana malhotra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

ofcourse you have to continue... don't eave us hanging here!!!

Awww... coffee-nawab and Rani Chocomati is the most ridiculous yet adorable thing i've ever seenn in my life...

Good going!!!!:)))))

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Riya2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MissRight
ofcourse you have to continue... don't eave us hanging here!!!

Awww... coffee-nawab and Rani Chocomati is the most ridiculous yet adorable thing i've ever seenn in my life...

Good going!!!!:)))))

Thanks dear

Part 3 is coming soon it's the last part 😊

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Awww.. Coffee Nawab & Chocomati Devi's interaction was so cute & I'm definitely a shipper from the beginning 😆😆

Adi's caring side was evident obviously & LOL the doc thought he's the hubby 😳

You have to continue this & if the next is the last part, do right more on AdiYa 😃

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Riya2020

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SewzVB
Awww.. Coffee Nawab & Chocomati Devi's interaction was so cute & I'm definitely a shipper from the beginning 😆😆
Adi's caring side was evident obviously & LOL the doc thought he's the hubby 😳
You have to continue this & if the next is the last part, do right more on AdiYa 😃

Thanks dear

Gald you like it😳