Thanking Him SS Part 3 Page 6 *Updated 14/5/18*

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This starts after the scene Arjun confirms that the divorce papers are real and zoya is heart broken

Zoya leaves from Aditya's house and goes back to Arora house and is questioned by Noor and Madhu.Mahi rolls her eyes and starts reading the newspaper.

Zoya doesn't answer them and goes to her room and locks her self. Zoya thinks about the past memories she spent with Yash and is heartbroken due to the fact.

She thinks wasn't my love enough for you that you cheated I loved you with all my heart.I even went against my father to marry you and you cheated on me. Aditya Hooda was right all the time.I HATE YOU YASH!!!!!I HATE YOU!!!!

She picks the wedding dress, divorce papers and her pictures with Yash and stands in front of the mirror and says,
"I only loved you, I gave my everything to you and you never loved me only you only cheated on me"

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Should I continue?
This is a 3 chapter story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love it plzzz continued your story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

Love it plzzz continued your story

Thank you so much
I will post the next chapter in a few days
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Great Start😊
Please continue soon and pm me😊
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Nice to see this type of Zoya😊

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It's beautiful. Please continue .. I like this zoyaa.
AtleastHamaare Yash jaap sun na nai padega. Now even Zoya can join frustration thread🤣
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yes add more please, I like it
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Thanking Him SS Part 1
Zoya looks at herself in the mirror. Her eyes are filled with rage she picks her wedding dress and her picture with Yash and throws them she looks at the divorces papers and keeps them on the bed.

She locks herself and thinks to commit suicide.She picks the knife which was present in her room to cut fruits.She thinks about her ammi, abbu, noor, madhu, mahi and last but not least Aditya she smiles at the memories they have spent together.

She stands below the shower turns it on and thinks about Yaah she starts to cry but her tears are washed away with the water flowing from the shower. She slashes her wrist and after a few moments she feels dizzy due to the blood lost and she faints.

Noor is worried about zoya as it has been already an half hour since she has locked herself.She sees Zoya's cell phone on the couch and picks it up. She gets even more worried so she scrolls down the contacts and finds the contact called "Aditya Hooda" and dials his number.

The next scene from Aditya's POV

Why is Zoya calling me. She just left from here a while ago. Should I check or should I not I think it's fine,I will just mute it.

Noor's side

Why isn't he picking up I will try again.She tries again but he is not answering she calls him the 3rd time and he picks it up

Adiya's side

When he picks up the phone "Hello"

"Is this Aditya Hooda speaking"

"Yes"

He thinks why is zoya being so formal

"I need your help Appi has locked herself in her room since a while please help me"

He thinks this is not Zoya's voice
Oh this must be Zoya's younger sister.

"Wo soy rahi hogi after all she got a huge shock "

"Nahi please help me"

"Okay wait I am on the way"

He thinks I will tell Arjun to drive me there. He picks his blazer and shouts

"Arjun"

"Haan Bhai"

"I have to go somewhere"

"Itni Raat ko "

"Yes now let's go hurry"

"Okay"

After sometime they reach there

"Bhai where are we here at the Arora House"

"I will tell you later for now let's go"

"Arjun"

"Haan"

"I forgot my phone in the car, Go get it"

"Haan bhai"

The door bell rings

Noor's side

Finally! He is here. She opens the door and asks

"Aditya Hooda"

" Yes any problem"

"Nahi"

"Okay"

"Come I will take you to Appi's room"

She takes him outside of Zoya's room. Aditya tries to open the door but says it's locked.He thinks to break it

He hits it the first time, second time, third time and finally at the fourth time it opens

He shouts

"Zoya where are you"

Suddenly he hears the voice of the shower and says

"Your Sister is in the bathroom "

"1 Minute"

"Kya"

"APPI! APPI! "

"Zoya"

Aditya asks Noor that should he break the door she says yes he hit the door thrice and the third time it opens

He is shocked to see the view in front of him

"Zoyaaa"

He rushes to her side and looks at her wrist.He quickly takes his handkerchief out and ties it on her hands to stop it from bleeding.He places her head on his chest and says

"Zoya, Open Your Eyes Please "

"Appi " she starts crying

Madhu and Mahi enter and are shocked as well

"Zoya " both of them say it together


Aditya holds her wrist tightly and says

"We should take her to the hospital "

He picks her in his arms and runs downstairs

Arjun is on his way coming up when he see Aditya carrying someone and run past him .He starts running behind Aditya

"Bhai kya howa hai"

"Arjun take out the car fast"

"Bhai ye tou Zoya Ji hai"

"Haan Par jaldi kar"

Arjun gets in the car and starts it

Noor comes from behind and says

"I will also come"

Aditya nods and get into the car with Zoya and holds her wrist
And starts to feel guilty for his manner of behaviour with her.


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Hope you guys like it
Two more parts are left 😉
If u want me to continue do let me know in the comments






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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rjahan

Wow nice update🤗amazing


Thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: MissRight

Nice start! Continue soon


Thank you dear

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