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Lollipop16

@Lollipop16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Loved it!

Your creativity at bringing every character so vibrant is beautiful. Also, love how you've made Mahi a positive character and there interaction before the performance is heart warming! Continue soon

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

beautiful story can't wait to read more

Love

~Maha~

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Naina

@KhwabonKiRani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Well written

Very nice update

Loved it dear

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Awww okay so much has happened in this chapter I have all jumbled feelings!! I'll start from the top!

Firstly, Yayyy congratulations Zo!!!!! Starting up your own business is a HUGE thing. #proud!

Adi and zoya share that "hate-em-but-cant-live-without-em" sort of relationship with each other! Lolz it's hilarious.

I love mahi and zoya's relationship here... wish it was the same in the actual show tooo!!!! :(

But SHIT!!! I thought as much as soon as the party started! Parents hooda and parents Siddiqui are going to be IN for it!!

Although Adi has a hero complex.. like dude! She doesn't even LIKE you why would she agree to Marry you!??? He needs to be brought down from his high throne or whatever he sees himself on!

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jerry73

@jerry73

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

I loved the update, I've been reading your fanfictions and you write amazingly well, particularly this one. I was eagerly waiting for the next part 😃 glad you updated, eagerly waiting for the next one. I loved the way you have etched out the characters😊👏.

Edited by jerry73 - 7 years ago