Toxic ~ Even if we can't be together in the end - Chapter 23 Up ! - Page 27

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Posted: 7 years ago
wow amazing part! eagerly waiting for next part!
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Posted: 7 years ago
This has to be my favorite part of the story so far.
I loveee young Adi and Zoya. And the pregnancy??? Ohhhmygosh!
But the way Aditya reacted was so gentlemanly and proved his love for Zoya.
Young love is truly beautiful for these two.
Please update soon! I'm really eager to know what went wrong :/
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh man, that was a beautifully sweet love story.😳😳 Wondering why Zoya left Aditya😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update 😊
Wonder what happened to Baby AdiYa 😭
Please update soon 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
heyyy

red the ff in a go last week and didn't get a chance to leave a comment

I am in LOVE with this ff.. and the story on Adi's POV is so bang on-- how did you manage to get his POV so on point? It actually felt like a guy wrote the p[art, but thanbks for the clarification of your gender...
SO curious to know why zoya changed her name..
plz pm me when you update?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Read the synopsis will read it asap
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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear Harsha :)
Thank you for giving me the link..It's brilliant..you had me there in the court room scene..And your little secret didn't help me either..Anyway I think it as them by your definition..The bold, sassy characters made me hooked and titles itself are awesome that i can't stop to comment in between..
Both're perfect for each other:they know how to get back at others and the attraction Damn it ..I can feel the heated glances..I'm glad that I chose it in the weekend..I gonna finish reading it tonight..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Waiting for Chapter 15 😛
Please update 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
hi I am new to this forum
wonderful updates
read all the chapters in a go
ur story hooked me to the screen
zoyal is beautifully written
but Adi is just something on different level...this adi is superb
waiting to know what happened
cont soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Harsha dear once again Thank you for giving me the link..You made my weekend very entertaining with your effortless fabulous writing..

I absolutely love and adore Zoya character..Her mind voice is a great treat to read..She knows how to carry herself inspite of her secrets and fears..Her attraction, fight with herself to overcome it, wanting him and at the same time wishes to kill him-She's truly an unique piece..

She intrigued me..What's hidden behind her? I thought the past would be like she realized lately about his flirting with others or something silly reasons..I thought Aditya didn't care about her in the past or she did it because of some misunderstanding created by some jealousy ex..
Now the last few updates entirely changed my views..I'm shocked with the turns of events..If her name change was surprising to me you left me flabbergasted with the abortion and last update..Omg..did life make them change this much?? My heart went out for both..Such a cute, lovely, sweet, naive couple..What did the hell make them like this?? The only thought going on my mind is why can't be life fair for a change??
But this is life..nothing other than change happen..

And until I read Aditya's POV I didn't think you can pull it out so perfectly..Woman..No wonder that somebody doubted your gender..That was that much perfect..

As much as I want to beat the hell out of him for his views, I love him..In the end he's too a victim of dear life..But what made his world upside down??He was so unbelievably understanding and in love..How can a man be so damn attractive in both roles..it's like dual roles/different persons maybe twins..Yes twins like in IIT meets DU..hehe

I'm warning you about my silly theories..So be prepared..

what if Adi's father threatened Zoya then to go away from his life? and then Zoya found herself pregnant? ?
To save's Adi from sacrificing his future for her and to save herself and child from the threats??
But abortion? ? I don't have any ideas..

I forget to add my points on Ahola..You pictured the small town's happening brilliantly..Yeh..people know everything about everyone..You caught that correctly..And news spread like a wildfire..If one found with other gender ( I mean the young girls-boys) you don't have to ask..Even before he/she returns home from the nearby market 10 mins from his place, his mother will stand with all kinds of weapon in the gate to receive...LOL

As much as it dislikes by private people, it's a boon for business folks..You know who bought which land something like that..I enjoyed reading that part ..
Edited by gprs - 6 years ago

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