Harsha dear once again Thank you for giving me the link..You made my weekend very entertaining with your effortless fabulous writing..
I absolutely love and adore Zoya character..Her mind voice is a great treat to read..She knows how to carry herself inspite of her secrets and fears..Her attraction, fight with herself to overcome it, wanting him and at the same time wishes to kill him-She's truly an unique piece..
She intrigued me..What's hidden behind her? I thought the past would be like she realized lately about his flirting with others or something silly reasons..I thought Aditya didn't care about her in the past or she did it because of some misunderstanding created by some jealousy ex..
Now the last few updates entirely changed my views..I'm shocked with the turns of events..If her name change was surprising to me you left me flabbergasted with the abortion and last update..Omg..did life make them change this much?? My heart went out for both..Such a cute, lovely, sweet, naive couple..What did the hell make them like this?? The only thought going on my mind is why can't be life fair for a change??
But this is life..nothing other than change happen..
And until I read Aditya's POV I didn't think you can pull it out so perfectly..Woman..No wonder that somebody doubted your gender..That was that much perfect..
As much as I want to beat the hell out of him for his views, I love him..In the end he's too a victim of dear life..But what made his world upside down??He was so unbelievably understanding and in love..How can a man be so damn attractive in both roles..it's like dual roles/different persons maybe twins..Yes twins like in IIT meets DU..hehe
I'm warning you about my silly theories..So be prepared..
what if Adi's father threatened Zoya then to go away from his life? and then Zoya found herself pregnant? ?
To save's Adi from sacrificing his future for her and to save herself and child from the threats??
But abortion? ? I don't have any ideas..
I forget to add my points on Ahola..You pictured the small town's happening brilliantly..Yeh..people know everything about everyone..You caught that correctly..And news spread like a wildfire..If one found with other gender ( I mean the young girls-boys) you don't have to ask..Even before he/she returns home from the nearby market 10 mins from his place, his mother will stand with all kinds of weapon in the gate to receive...LOL
As much as it dislikes by private people, it's a boon for business folks..You know who bought which land something like that..I enjoyed reading that part ..
Edited by gprs - 6 years ago