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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Nice update
Abeer n meher coming closer
Zain cornering alia in girls room
Gets closer she tells him to behave N later he says he was joking ... hmmm looks like he's trying to up the friendship
Like how zains fiends prank ended up getting us a romantic pose unknowingly they're playing cupids lol
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
though zaya fought the last part was cute and sweet. though because of others meher slipped she fell in abeer's arms.it was romantic .perfect pics
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nice song
nice update
thanks for the pm...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Well written update...
glad abeer help meher...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Chp 9

Meher was going home, Zain's friends sees her and throws marbles in her way, Abeer comes from other side and Meher steps on marbles and loses her balance and falls in Abeer's arms.
Abeer: be careful
He straightens her and his gaze goes on the marbles on the floor. He could see Zain's friends from the corner of his eye making disappointed faces.
Abeer: Meher u go sit in car, I will come.

She goes to car and Abeer goes to Zain's friends and clicks his fingers in front of them.
Abeer: what's your problem guys? Just stop bullying her, don't use her disability else u all r in great trouble.
Ali: c'mon man leave it and sort out the differences between u and Zain, we could see he's upset he just didn't show it.

Abeer: oh yeah I will, but don't u dare bully my friend again.

He goes and sits in his car and glances at Meher only to find her looking down embarrassed.
Abeer: what happened?
Meher: y they always have to bully me?
Abeer: I m with u, they won't do it again.
Meher: I hope so, drop me to the asylum, it seems as if I haven't met my mother since ages.

She says and he nods. After sometime they reach and she goes waving him. He drives back to his house and goes straight to his room and sees Zain upset.
Abeer: bro
No reply.
Abeer: Zainy
He always calls him Zainy by love.
Zain: u think I will respond to u if u call me by this name?
Abeer: hey plz, don't be such a meanie, brothers r meant to be like friends not enemies, u r my only brother, pls stop ignoring.

Zain: Abeer possessive dude, just stop this emotional blackmail, I m not irritated by u.

They have a hug.
Abeer: I should call u Zain monster dude.

He lets out a small laugh and Zain also laughs.
Zain: monster seriously

He laughs like maniac.

Zain: I m going to have bath possessive babe.
Abeer: have fun monster.

He gives him flying kiss, Zain gets irritated and closes the door, Abeer laughs. Later Aalia comes to meet Abeer to his house but collides with Zain.
Alia: oh hallo coconut.
Zain: potato

He pulls his cheek tightly reddening them.
Zain: u r tomato now
Alia pulls his cheeks too but the small hair on his face hurts her and she leaves his face.
Alia: shave properly, coconuts don't have hair.

Zain bursts into laughter, she too laughs. Alia comes to Abeer's room.
Alia: hi
Zain comes and loudly says boo! She gets startled and Zain laughs.
Abeer: monster plz baby don't do na
Alia giggles.
Zain: m not a baby
Alia: yeah right I never saw a baby coconut.
Abeer: but u would've seen baby monsters.

He does a high five with Alia while she laughs.
Zain: u r my bro
Abeer: haha
Zain: not funny
Abeer: yeah yeah m monster's brother

Zain runs after him with pillow and Abeer laughs, Alia watches the tom and jerry brothers and couldn't stop laughing. Meher comes there and Abeer collides with her and hides behind her.
Abeer: save me
Zain: how funny, a slim girl can't hide a giant behind her.

Meher laughs.
Meher: Zain, sorry for slapping your friend.
Zain: its OK, help me in catching my bro
Abeer: Meher help me in hiding.

Abeer runs and Zain too runs behind him and they fall on bed getting tired. Meher and Alia couldn't stop laughing.
Alia: monster...baby...oh God

She giggles.
Zain: Aaloo stop murmuring plz
Aalia: nice nick
Zain: what did u come for?
Alia: Abeer called me n Meher for having fun, others r also coming.

Zain murmurs: here I go again with trouble, my friends are also coming, how to stop them? God.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Alia and Zain Part was so Nice.😊
Abeer teasing Zain was so Cute.😊
The bonding of Mehbeer and Zain was so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
abeer zain scene was nice.zaya scene was cute and funny. zain abeer meher scene was funny


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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Nice update
Abeer warning Zain's friends to leave meher alone
Glad abeer n zain made up
Loved the tom n jerry moment
What dramas gonna happen with all Zain's friends n abeers friends under same roof oh boy
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Chp 10

Zain's friends arrives at his house, their parents open the door. They go directly to Zain's room, they knock on the door as it was locked.
Zain: guys, can u plz hide? Friends is here, I will explain later.

They nod and hide under the bed. He opens the room and have a group hug.
Mukti: what's the plan for the deaf girl?
Zain: drop this topic, don't want to talk about it.
Mukti: y? She slapped Ali
Ali: yes she slapped me and I will get my revenge for sure.

Abeer whispers to Alia: they're talking about revenge from Meher, don't u think it's bad to get revenge on her? How to stop them?

Alia whispers: I think Zain will do that

Zain: look both the teams were equally evil, we took her hearing aids, she slapped u, the scores r settled, Ali leave it, don't be a baby.

Alisha: oh what do u mean? Don't u care about ur friends now?

Zain: guys, plz, I already told u all no pranks on Abeer or his friends.

Mukti: we didn't do prank on her, we did it on that new girl, who is she to come in between?

Zeeshan: u all are doing wrong, don't be too hard on her.

Alisha: that deaf girl is a bloody bitch, and we all are quiet because Abeer is your brother.

She says it loud and Meher hears this, she cries. Abeer couldn't take it anymore, he crawls out of the bed and looks at Alisha angrily.

Abeer: u! What do u think of yourself ha? Don't u dare utter a word against any of my friend? U understand? I m also quiet because u r Zain's friends, else I would've told u off many times.

Alia too came out by that time holding Meher trying to stop her tears.
Alia: u all, if u dare to say that again? Be ready for my punch, everyone, this monkey (Ali) deserves 1000 slaps, and this girl wearing very little dress (Alisha), don't u have manners? And u tomboy (Mukti) u r more like a witch to me, let's go Meher.

She takes her from there. Everyone fumes in anger besides Abeer.
Zain in his mind: she was calling me coconut? Now I will show my anger.

Next day, Abeer's group passed by their table and Alisha stepped right in front of Alia.
Alisha: u, behenji, do u have good clothes? Like really good clothes to wear!
Zain: Alisha leave it (he comes and stands in front of her and holds her arms tightly)
Alia pushes him.
Alia: enough! Monster!

She goes followed by everyone else. She sits on a table lost in thoughts.
Abeer: sorry for that.
Alia: its OK, I m going, need some me time.

She goes to girl's washroom and splashes cold water on her face and looks at her reflection.
Alia: y? Y does it always happens with me? I m breaking friendship with Zain...no more trouble.

She goes out directly to the cafeteria to their table and slams it with her palms hardly.
Alia: u! Mr.Zain Malhotra, I m over the friendship we had, don't ever show me your coconut face.

She then goes to her table and Abeer gets an idea to cheer them up.
Abeer: Alia, let's go watch a movie tonight what say?
Alia: yes, not at your home
Abeer: oh I mean the theater
Nisaar: yeah a movie with a pinch of romance

He winks at Abeer. He ignores him.
Abeer: will u come Meher?
Meher: yes

Everyone agrees. Little did they know Zain's friend heard everything.
Alisha: we'll see how they enjoy.

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