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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Nice update
All angry on zain
Decide to attack meher next even after zain asks them not to
Zain tried to talk to aliya but she ain't interested
Now she's in abeers gang
Glad abeer turned up to save meher from them doing more to her but now zain has agreed to do prank with him
If he's not careful he's gonna make his brother angry with him
Looking forward to seeing what's gonna happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
surprised to see shivangi joshi. liked abeer saying not to rag anyone. mehbeer talking about deafness was emotional. meher's fb gave me pain.very sad that because of her dad she became a deaf and lonely. the bug was sweet and emotional
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chp 4

Zain reaches home and sits on his bed resting his back on the bedboard thinking about the day. He thinks about crying Alia who didn't do anything and got hurt intentionally. He goes to the washroom and turns on the shower standing under it, don't know why he felt guilty on seeing her cry. Abeer enters the room and sits on the bed, he had the same condition like Zain. He was thinking about Meher, how she always cries whenever she can't hear. He didn't wanted her to feel different from everyone else.
Abeer says in heart, "I will do something for u Meher, I will give u your hearing sense back, I promise."

Zain comes out.
Zain: what's up bro? Are u angry on me?
Abeer: no ways, can I ask u something?
Zain: yes
Abeer: what to do for deafness? U know when ears burst and on completely losing hearing sense.

Zain: deaf aids are the only solution for that, but what happened?

He asks drying his hair.
Abeer: actually my friend need it so I was asking, and your uneasiness is there on your face, u wont tell but i will know your feelings, did dad say something?
Zain: no, I m feeling bad for Alia, what was her fault? My friends troubled her without any reason.
Abeer: I know, now she's in my friend circle, and u should apologize if u think that will be good
Zain hugs him: thank u, u r the key to my every problem.
Abeer hugs him back.

Meher in the ashram, she recalls her mother, how she missed her love in childhood, she has lived in this ashram since forever, she never complained about not getting her love as she knew how much pain she had beared.
Meher: I want to meet my mother, I m going to her.
She goes out of the ashram and turns on the GPS of her phone as she didn't knew where's the rehab where her mother is. It wasn't too much far and so she walks to it. She reaches the rehab and asks about her mother. She gets to know about her and runs to the room. She opens the door and sees her mother sleeping. She gets teary eyed and goes inside, she sits on her knees and keeps her head in her lap, she felt the peace in her heart once again which she felt in childhood and always wanted to feel it.
Meher: Ma, I missed u, I know u have beared a lot of pain because of papa and u couldn't ever give time to me, but the past won't repeat I promise.

She talks to her sleeping mother while crying. Her mother wakes up and touches her face.
Meher: Maa
She says looking up at her and hugs her.
Meher: I missed u maa.
Her mother hugs her back recognizing her.
Mother: I missed u too
Meher couldn't hear and so she didn't said anything. She breaks the hug.
Meher: Maa I m there for u always, I won't leave u like papa did.
Her mother kisses her forehead.
Mother: did your father hurt you?

Meher cries recalling that night looking down.
Mother: tell me
Meher keeps crying. Her mother lifts her face.
Mother: tell me plz.
Meher: I love u maa, papa is a stranger...I don't want to talk about him.
Mother: OK, I won't, I m happy u came.
They have a hug while Meher cries to her fullest, if she would tell her mother, she will get ill, what could she do except crying? Poor soul.

Next day, Abeer and Meher meet in the cafeteria.
Abeer: I have something for u
Meher: what is it?
Abeer gives her hearing aids.
Meher: what are these for?
Abeer: u can't hear and feel hurt about it right? Now u will be able to hear.
Meher smiles on knowing how much he cares for his friends. She takes it from his hands and wears it, her life again became happy because of him.
Abeer: can u hear me now?
Meher: yes I can hear everything, thank u, thank u so much for this

She smiles and hugs him tightly and he too smiles seeing her smile.

Zain enters the college and collides with Alia.
Zain: hi
Alia makes an annoyed face and leaves from there.
Zain: I m apologizing and u dont want to hear, huh
He too leaves. Later after some classes, in the cafeteria, Alia was sitting with Abeer's group. Zain's friends sees all of them laughing and talking.
Ali: hey you, Alia, come here.
Alia: yes yes, why not?
They have an evil laughter as they thought their plan is working but little did they know their plan is going to be backfire. Abeer and others look on as Alia walks to them.
Alia: today u all will be welcomed to hell and not me.
She throws a fake snake on them but they misunderstand it as a real snake and gets scared, Abeer and others gets shocked while Alia laughs showing them thumbs up to which they smile.

Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
meher mother scene was very emotional.abeer giving hearing aid to meher n now she can hear everything.so sweet.tho zain apologized aliya doesnt care.oh.aliya took her revenge by throwing fake snake on them.ha ha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Nice one
So mehers mother doesn't know about her hearing
Abeer helped her giving her the hearing aid
Zain feeling guilty
But what will happen now when he finds out Alia retaliated against his friends?? Will he decide to support his friends or try to stop them from trying again
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Promos

Meher: Ma, papa tortured me that night, he broke things near me which bursted my ears.

Her mother is shocked, Meher hugs her and cries.
. . . . . . . .

Meher's mother gets stressed about Meher and faints.
Meher: Maa!

She cries more and more.

Meher: I want u, I need u...

. . . . . . . .

Abeer: Meher, nothing will happen to her, we will find a good doctor for her.

Abeer consoles a crying Meher and hugs her.

. . . . . . . . .

Aalia cracks eggs on Zain and his friends by hiding and makes videos of them.
Aalia: now it will be fun.
. . . . . . . .

A new girl comes and gets bullied by Zain's friends. Meher comes in between.
Meher: stop guys, what's ur problem?
They gets angry and takes her hearing aids from her, she too gets angry and slaps Ali.
. . . . . . . .

Zain: how dare u slap him?
Meher: how dare he bully everyone? Don't u dare do it again.
Abeer looks on.
. . . . . . . . .

Who will Abeer favour now?

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Nice promo
Now meher has told her mum what happened
She passed out
Abeer helping
Aaalia got some payback although she did attack zain too gonna make him think to retaliate
As for abeer choosing sides he should choose meher but he is really close to zain
Looking forward to update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well written update
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Chp 5

Alia throws a fake snake at Zain and his friends but they misunderstands it as real snake and gets scared, at first Abeer and others get shocked but when Alia shows them thumbs up, they understand and smile. Finally they throws the snake away. Alia and Abeer with others laugh.
Alia: my God! Today, the one who scares got scared. Tututut

Abeer comes and says: u deserve it.
Zain: u too?
Abeer: m saying about others, let's go guys
They go back to their table.

Mukti: these two new girls are becoming too much for us specially Alia.

Zain: we shouldn't forget that we were the ones who started the fight.

Ali: someone is developing care and possessiveness about the girl who came one day ago.

Manik: what? I m not being possessive.

Alisha: then why are u pointing at us?

Zain: I don't want to say anything about her...leave it.

Zeeshan: Buddy ko Alia pasand hai (buddy likes Alia [baby ko bass pasand hai tune])

Zain giggles along with everyone else.

Abeer: wow Alia u r awesome, u scared them off.

Meher: yes, they are too much.

Alia: this was just the starting of my revenge.

Meher: what are u going to do next?

Alia: the thing they did to me.

Meher: ohh

Abeer smiles seeing Meher happy.

Nisaar whispers: why are you smiling?
Abeer whispers back: because now Meher is feeling good, she got her hearing sense back, m happy for her.

Nisaar smiles at him.

Abeer: guys let's jam together right now what say?
Meher: I m also in a mood but I don't know how to play any instrument.
Abeer: don't worry, when Abeer is here what's the fear?
Nisaar laughs on him.
Sasha: I also want to come.
Nandini: me too
Nisaar: me also
Abeer: let's go then

They all go from there to the jamming room after taking their instruments. They all jam for sometime, Meher only sings and the others play instruments as well. They all go from there except Meher and Abeer. He thinks to teach her any instrument.
Abeer: do u want to learn how to play any instrument?
Meher: yes, violin.
Abeer: OK, here u go.

He gives a violin in her hand from back and makes her hold it in a correct position.

He keeps his hand on her hand which was holding the violin stick and plays it. Her back touched his front, she smiles as he helps her in playing it.

They both were really close that Meher could feel his breath on her neck. He slowly gets close and nuzzles in her neck, she closes her eyes feeling his touch.

Sham bhi koi jaise hai nadi
Lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai
Koi ankahi koi ansuni
Baat dheemi dheemi keh rahi hai
Kahi na kahi jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo
Kahi na kahi khoye hue se hai main aur tu
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


She enjoys playing it and he parts his nose away from her neck, she looks in his eyes and smile. He smiles back at her.

Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani
Jo khamoshi sunaati hai
Jise tune chaha hoga wo tera
Mujhe wo yeh batati hai
Main magan hoo par na jaanu
Kab aane wala hai wo pal
Jab haule haule dheere dheere
Khilega dil ka yeh kamal
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


Meher: thank u Abeer
Abeer: no problem we are friends

They keep aside the violin and she hugs him, he too hugs her and smiles.

Yeh kaisa samay hai kaisa sama hai
Ke sham hai pighal rahi
Yeh sab kuch hasee hai sab kuch jawa hai
Hai zindagi machal rahi jagmagati jilmilati
Palak palak pe khwaab hai
Sun yeh hawaye gungunaye
Jo geet lajawab hai
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai khaamosh dono
Ke boom boom boom para para
Hai madhosh dono
Jo gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye
Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahe
Gumsum gumsum hai yeh fizaye hai na


She was hugging him really tight smiling but suddenly she starts crying recalling her mother, her crying voice couldn't be heard by him as she was doing it silently. They slowly part away and she was the first one to get out of there. She walks through the corridors cryingly, she missed her mother a lot. She goes to the exit gate and hires an auto to go to rehab. She tells the directions and she finally reaches. She goes inside towards her mother's room. She slightly opens it and sees her sleeping. She walks in towards her and kisses her forehead trying not to disturb her sleep. She kneels down keeping her head in her lap, the most peaceful place ever. Tears roll down her cheek and her mother(Suman) wakes up.
Suman: Meher
She lifts her head from her lap and looks at her standing up.
Meher: sorry I disturbed your sleep.
Suman: no no u r still my little girl, I don't mind waking up for u.

She smiles at her and notices her crying.
Suman: why r u crying?
Meher: nothing, u sleep, take rest.

She was about to go.
Suman: why do u cry too much? And why r u wearing these hearing aids?

Meher: on your divorce night, papa tortured me, he threw things near me which bursted my ears.

Suman is shocked, Meher hugs her and cries. Abeer sees them through the glass. Suman is stressed, she too cries caressing her hair. Suddenly she faints.
Meher: Maa! I want u I need u, plz u don't go leaving me.

Abeer enters inside and holds her as she cries.
Meher: u here?
Abeer: I followed u I knew something is wrong so that's why...is she your mother?
Meher nods.
Abeer: don't worry she will be fine, we will find a good doctor for her.

She hugs him, he too hugs her.





In the college, Zain collides with Alia, she annoyingly tries to go but he stops her.
Zain: what have I done? Don't be so rude, can't we be normal?
Alia: which normal? Like this, hi Zain, hi Alia, how r u? I m fine...this normal?
She says sarcastically. Zain starts laughing.
Alia: and what's there to laugh?
Zain: u r so funny, let's become friends? I promise I won't do pranks on u.
Alia: friends my foot, your friends will surely play pranks on me if they get to know this.
Zain: oh God, we will meet like Romeo and Juliet.
He sits on one knee holding her hand.
Alia: what the hell? Stand up!

He gestures her to be quiet and let him say.
Zain: we will keep this friendship a secret.
Alia: I don't think that will happen.
Zain: till u don't agree I won't stand up.
Alia: OK ur wish, your friends will come and see what r u doing here, that will bring a rift between u all, OK we can be friends, now stand up.

He stands up and jumps in joy, she feels weird and laughs. He forwards his hand closing his middle finger and ring finger, she too does the same joining her index finger and pinky finger together. Then they both join their thumbs together unjoining their index finger and pinky finger swirling their hand and opens their middle finger and ring finger and do a handshake. (I hope u understand this he he) They smile at each other.





Edited by salley145 - 8 years ago

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