FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Awesome Update Sim!

Well, maybe now Aaliya would be a little less harsh towards Zain... Hoping Hoping Hoping...

The point where Zain asked him..." roudne aayi ho naa..." This was just heart breaking...

And then all his dialogues to Aaliya... Everything was just perfect...

Pls continue soon...

I m more excited now to see what Aaliya will do to him now...

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

chapter 4
Khuda meri izzat k hifazat karna\
Ya Allah ..hifazat karna ...meri makhmali tvacha khurad na jaaye

The whole chapter was fun filled..but these two lines just cracked me up..perfect lines for this chapter..
Sim,I should start calling you a painter,who paints exquisite paintings which touch the core of our hearts..
it was jovial...something we can relate to zain..moresoever..its something I would die to see Harshad portray..
it was simply a treat...rejuvinating and beautiful...
Love
Ann

U back
Awww I missed u
Love u so muchhh
Sim

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priya arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

really beautiful chap
n aaliya's emotions u defined sooo beautifully
i jst love each n every word u wrote
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt chp
do cont asap !

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

chapter 6

"Sisak sisak kar ek aah ...meri dil se nikalti hai ..

Beparvaah si teri nazar ...mujhe ek pal mai hi zinda dafan kar deti hai ..."

I really wanted to quote the entire story..because it was that great..but it was the last line..your shayari..it just clinched the deal...

Those lines just summed up what Zain is feeling...her ignorance..her contempt..her silence..her disdain..everything..is just burying him alive..will she be able to continue metting out this kind of behaviour..will he be able to sustain this kind of pain..which is making wounds which will run deep through him for forever...how long will it be before the dam breaks..before they reach their breaking point...emotional pain just gets worse...its more dangerous than any form of physical pain...it just erodes one's sanity and will to live...its not just painful..its more than it.

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Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

"Lafz hi nahi milte aaj kal ...kuch likhne le liye ..."

Its even applicable for your readers considering that we don't have enough praiseworthy words to reward beintehaa ishq with..its one of those stories which you keep going back to ..even if it hurts you...even if it makes you smile..btw..i have gone back to re-read thread one...couldn't help it!

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

chapter 9

i dunno how you do it..or why you do it..but Sim,you make me..cry..i can't take this pain Sim..its breaking me..believe me..its rare..this feeling of almost reaching my breaking point after reading a chapter...its not everytime that i can connect to something and fall in love with it headlong..everytime Zain crumbles down in pain...everytime aaliya hides her tears..everytime they endure that pain which is clawing at their insides...every single time I wince in pain too..I cry.>Sim...and I have never cried for characters like this..I can't see my zaya in this misery...and your dialogues and words..just make the wounds a lil deeper than before..

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

i need some time to gather my thoughts...

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Zloca

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

While reading ur story, one understands how far a person willing to go for love. What Zain is doing only demonstrates the power of his love. Being stubborn and tenacious sometimes is good.

Aaliyas fears were justified. No matter how strong she seemed before him, she still cares for his own good. If only she invited him to stay in the house. Maybe watching him from the balcony is enough for her. But touch a loved one and feel the warmth of his body after such a dream is the best feeling.

Love is not a sin. If God wanted it to be sin, people might have fled from it. But to love and be loved is the best feeling. The two of them know it and one day when they come back together (IF they come back together) they will appreciate love even more.

I went through so many Indian films and several series that I learned the language. This is actually the best way to learn a new language. Listening songs and watching films or series is the easiest way to learn it. I understand Hindi quite well. So I understand all dialogues. 😃

Can't wait for the next update.

Best of luck for ur future stories. I am sure u will rock it and we will definitely enjoy it.😊

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

I thought u all will kill me for writing this
But I m still spared
Lucky me
Love
Sim

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Man that was heavy but Aliya is totally feeling zains pain as well as her own. The whole dream was so heartbreaking and zains emotions came through to aliya that is why she saw all that and heard all that. Now she needs to see for real that zain is trying to redeem himself. She is still feeling the pain she felt a year ago but now she is also feeling zains pain. That dream was pretty scary and aliyas feelings for zain came out. Poor thing is so confused coz she is in pain, anger hurt and also feels guilty which clouding her feelings for zain. Cant wait for the next update and pls keep zian safe lol

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