FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow what a confrontation btwn zaya. The pain and loneliness that oozes out of zain is so heartbreaking but he did hurt aliya and this is the real redemption now when aliya is there with him. His working at a place that started the most painful part of their lives is symbolic and makes things come full circle in a way. Of course its just the beginning there is still more pain and redemption to come. Aliya finally talked to him and her actions like not wanting to take th money kissing it while returning it totally show she isnt immune to zain his love and especially his pain. this is just the start and lets c what happens tomorrow. Beautiful update so heart touching and meaningful. Cant wait for the next one.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chappy sim
What a confrontation between zaya
totally loved it
continue soon
Take care
Lots of love










Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago
Khud se padva lo ...umra bhar bhurke mai bhi reh lunga ...koshish toh karo ...
The way Zain said this to Aaliya it was hilarious🤣

And the one when she said mudo & he was like peche say marna mat I was laughing hard at that line too😆
But I loved the way Aaliya kissed the currency notes and secretly kept one . . . ❤️
It was depicting her conflict being a lover and hater at the very same time & her heart was more attracted toward the first option

And the line when Aaliiya said: Agar aik baar or marne ki baat ki tw gala ghont dun gi . . . . .
It reminded me of her words when Zain had an accident in Beintehaa and Zain have mentioned that too.
The conversation between ZaYa was tit for tat type loved the way Zain was confronting her and she was adamant to ignore him but it was emotional to the level that it was making me cry😭
Clearly you have justified their emotions so well,It was truly depicting their pain masked in words
All in all It was a mind blowing chapter Sim👏
Continue Soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

This one is purely bliss.the long chat between ZaYa was mind blowing. Her Anger Her Rigidity Her Hatred n His Dedication His Truthfulness n His Love #ZaYa r Imperfectly Perfect.

The word "Haram"I don't no the literal meaning f this word but in my knowledge it is that word which is as strong as Venom.if Zain is HARAM For Aaliya then Love Is HARAM for each n every organism on this Earth.(That's my view)
I'm desperately waiting for that one day when Aaliya will Break all the Walls N Accept His Serene Love.
looking forward for the next turn.
Thanku Sim
love
Jaya 😊

Jaya
Thank you so much well Haram means forbidden ...one of the highest form of label that no muslim touches ...ranging from wide number of things to liquor too
yes she abused his love ...and acceptance will be earned ...one step at a time ...
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

wow ! Such an amazing chp
their 1st long convo
loved it
i can understand hw much angry zain wen aaliya addressed his touch to be haram
bt ik she is also nt happy
umm..nw where will she taking him?
Eager to knw
do cont soon !

Priya
Thank you so much
wait and watch ...where she takes him
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zayacrazy


Haha, I'm glad you liked those lines, My name is Sakeenah by the way...
Coming to the latest chapter you've updated Sim...it shows a pure maybe could be termed as 'frustration ki ulti' both of them have clerly made their points to eachother. Aaliya has melted but not to the core. It is heartwarming to see that her love exists and she expresses it unknowingly- Stopping Zain from talking about his death, kissing the notes.

But what I can make out from Aaliya is she is scared to fall in love again, is afraid to express...thaf she might have to face betrayal again...

Zain is again a legend as I can say, he has no bounds to love! His love is unlimited and 'Haraam' if falling in love is haraam then no one has rights to love on this planet. And 'Love' is a bueatiful feeling to where as I've experienced it. It's not necessary to be two sided...but once you love, it's love. No backing outs. And I'm proud to see Zain, has known love to it's insides.

Someone once told me. A man enjoys his good days, only when he sees the bad ones. And I accept this is true. Once Aaliya accepts him, his love will face a new phase...he will enjoy his love with atmost pleasure because then he'll value it!

Intezaar toh abh bhi karta hoon,
Aur khamooshi ke badl pyaar bhi maangta hoon,
Jaan aur jahan fanaa hein tere pyaar mein,
Intezaar hi maang rehi ho toh jaan bhi le lo...
Intezaar abh nahi hota laut ke aa ji jau.
Tere pyaar ke intezaar mein kahi marr na jau.

Sakeenah
beautiful name and beautiful lines ...
I hope you start writing your shayris on zaya ...would love to read them
everything about update was apt ...
yes love can be one sided too...infact thats more fulfilling version
we had spoken before and i told u then too...sometimes its better to blurt out ...you may or may not get the reply but the soul is free...
yes zains love and its depth ...will open her eyes eventually ...the journey back is long and difficult for him and her too
yes the bad ones teach us more than all the combined good ones can ...
You have lot of emotions bolted up ...write ...i would like to read it
and you write better than me sweets
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpitha18

Loved this chap...it is super se uper he

Arpitha 😳
first time comment ...super se bhi uper
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zloca

Dear, this was really heartbreaking.

I really didn't expect Zain to work there. Even I wanted to know from where is he receiving money. But didn't expect this. My dear boy. And u wrote it so well that I had tears in my eyes. What else he have to do to make his life beautiful again. He did one mistake that cost him so much.😭
For the first time I wanted Aaliya to hug him and not to push him away. Even she is hurt by hurting him. But after all what she got through, I understand why she wants to stay away from him.😭
I love the way u write. It looks so simple and yet so beautiful. U make me feel like I live their lives, like I see them and live with them. ZaYa were special and u just made them alive again.😊
My name translated to English means 'gold'. Also have meaning of gentle, reliable and good-hearted person.
And pic on my twitter acc is original so, thank u.😳
Hope so u'll write more stories on ZaYa once this one is over. I want more.
And definitely want more from this one.
With love.

Zlata
as beautiful s your name so is ur face ...
yes zain worked there with a strong reason ...as the story moves ahead you will see her pain his struggles too...its an emotional and rocky journey ...they may win or lose ...and the simplicity of zaya that makes the writing easier to read ...
yes will write more on zaya ...asap ...
and one quick question ...how do you understand hindi so well ..can you write hindi too...
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Oh i really don't know what to tell u Sim!
This was an amazing chapter...

And a little secret, only between you and me... I liked it thousand times more cuz of that dedication to me... Well well... U really liked my comment? I just wrote what i thought at that moment and I am going to do the same thing right now too...

Zaya's confrontation! Finally!!! Sooo... The longest talk they have had since Aaliya got her memory back... Hmmm... Chalo... Finally our Zain said it out... Everything that was on his mind... He finally let it out in front of her... I just am afraid for him... As he said... If Aaliya continued to behave like this with him... It would not take more time until he is completely broken... And Aaliya would b responsible... You just said it all... Again... I m sry it took time cuZ u already must have understood... This was heavier...

But yeah, i m still damn angry on Aaliya... How is she behaving with him... This is like a limit beyond enough, too. All of the words... Everything made me realise Zain's hurt... His 'Ghutan''...

Amazingly written Sim... Please please please please please please please please continue soon...

I am really excited to know what Aaliya has planned for Zain... To what more extent she can go to hurt him... To break him...

Riya
😆 i know and i loved ur comment
yes breaking zain is her mission ...but she dosent know how strong he is ...
aaliyas surprise ...well wait and see ...you might be a bit surprised ...
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Jis kabrastaan mai gunaah kiya , wahi jaakar apna harjana bhi bhar raha hu .


The tale of a broken man who is breathing in the only hope of gaining forgiveness. Punishing himself a little more everyday , throwing himself in the depth of that tomb . Zain scares me , because at this point he seems so vulnerable , as fragile as a glass . Their convo was a very much needed . His outburst was the mirror of his pain and Ghutan , what make me fall for Zain more is the fact that when he tries to say what is in his heart it seems so true and so innocent , that you just want to do something to sooth his pain .

Your Aaliya is very harsh , but i don't hate her coz she went through a lot herself many times , this is a war of emotions , we can't compare their pain without each other these two are just breathing , mere souls in disguise of living corpse .
I am scared tomorrow can't see him in pain again but excited too continue soon !
My Sim Sahiba the Great !

Saleha
those were the oroginal lines ...i extended the conversation much later ...earlier it was just a one page ...
you rightly caught the vulnerability part ...
as this moves...you will see a Zain ...who will be way different
Aaliyas pain is going to be defined soon
and yes they are dead people walking ...
loads of love
Sim
P.S : where is ur update ...you promised thursday 😡

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