FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 23

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

You've taken the breaths out of me Sim! I'm in a dilemma of who's side to take, should it be Zain who's suffering for a various order of events one after the other right after his father's death. Or shall I side with Aaliya who has been decived by love and life so badly that those words bring terrors down her spine. Both have pans once again, Zain has bowed down being tired with the neusense and he awaits Aaliya to bow down and start afresh. He's gone to the heights...what I truely await more than Aaliya bowing down is she getting to know why oit of all jobs in the world did he choose to dig down graves...

'Ghuthan' a word, a feeling every human being experiences atleast once in a lifetime...but I must say it has its own stages, and this is a feeling that needs cure, it jus cant be gotten rid of. The cure to it os surely LOVE! What scares me is if Aaliya dosent realise soon, and dosent cure Him soon I'm afraid she might loose him forever- thia time the distance will be infinite.

It's time for her to accept her love that still sparks within her and present to him that she's still his lady. No matter what. Zain I believe has gone through enogh and the true solo character of the story for me is not this couple, but it is Zain alone!

Tere intezaar mein..

Subah se raat bahi hein...

Laut aana tum ye jaan kar...

Ki milenge hum yahi kahi darbadar...

Na laut ke aayi tum Hamare paas...

Toh afsoos woh hi hogi hamari aakhri saans...

Originally posted by: manny136

Oh man poor zain his pain the way u described is so heartbreaking and its just getting so hard to not get mad at aliya and then u show aliya when all alone is also in so much pain herself. I cant believe poor zain is working there so sad. I really hope the confrontation helps them coz aliya does love him otherwise she wouldnt have had fahad call zain, cared about his behaviour or followed him. Loved the light hearted moments with zaroon lol poor guy will be crushed when he finds out about aliya and zain. Cant wait for the next update.

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

It seems like a heart to heart connection between us then😉

Thanks for this lovely reply😳

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Chapter 7

Zain's note for Aaliya when he said acha nai bana hai sahi thi tum

bahr k kutte nay bi khanay se mana ker diya those lines were just woww

what an incredible writer you are girl👏

and when Zain didn't looked back to let Aaliya smile when his clothes were blotted with ink by Zaroon it was a lovely moment. . . .❤️

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Aaliya reached her room and cried ...every hatred towards him was killing her soul...and he needed her, but she didn't want to move with him...the roads had dried up ...but she had to find what was hurting him ...it was more than her hatred ...he was still fighting with her ..but his soul was losing a battle against a pain ...

These lines describes Aaliya's state that how desperatly she want him to be with her but at the same time she cant It reminded me of Zain's dialogue in Beintehaa when he said tum is waqt mujhe apne pass b chahti ho or khud say door bhi. . . . .

Zain is working in graveyard when I read that I was on the verge of crying .😭

and how his suffocation is increasing day by day when he wanted to share it with Aaliya but he is all alone in spite of her presence the darkness of the room when he wished to spend just 5 minutes with her

It just drenched my heart I was feeling like some one is squeezing my heart in a fist believe me while writing this comment I'm about to cry

And the poem you have written what a marvellous work it was I'm speechless hats off to you my dear👏

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

omg sim bahut rulati ho tum sachi me!!!.. it was so heart wrenching and emotional😭😭😭 ..poor zain💔...but the way described it was so beautiful..brilliant job done👏👏👏...waiting for their confrontation...plz update lavkar lavkar...thanks for pm.. 😳

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

Ch-7 was Lite one but Ch-8 made me angry upon Aaliya.she was behaving so opposite of her character BTW hats off Sim as I never thought in my dreams even that a day would come I don't feel good of aaliya but your writing MashaAllah ...U R Incredible

Love

Jaya

Originally posted by: Riya5666

I am soo sorry Sim!

It took me a long while to read the chapters!

But kya karein... whenever i started reading, my eyes woulg get moist to such an extent that i can't read further and then i had to run to the washroom to wash my eyes!

I am sure my mom was thinking that I was watching some very emotional movie by the amount of confused stares she was sending my way!

I started reading yesterday but finished today! Actually i just cud not bring myself to read further from the part when Aaliya rushes to her room...

I know I sound like a duffer but i just cud not read further.. So I stopped reading after that... And I completed the chapter now...

Again, all the lines used were amazing... It is difficult to pick certain lines here but i will just give you a quick list-

- One, when Rehmaan tells Aaliya how Zain treated her n then how she is treating him... That sentence actually gave me a quick recap of the whole story and I got angry on Aaliya even more...

-Then, the first time when he asks her to just sit with him for 5 min and her horrible reply! Well, even that was when I was crying like a fool...

-Then was when she called Fahad Bhai... well i felt my own hated towards Aalia lessenin a bit...

-And finally... the mst touching scene... that 5 minutes of them together were so horribly given by Aaliya... and of course, Zain's lines,

'Da...bas paanch minute maanga tha ..usme mai bhi sivya khamoshi aur andhere ke mere saath mai kuch nahi.

Sorry tumse kuch maang liya, shayad galat kiya ...agar aise hi akele andhere mai baat karna tha toh khud ki kar leta ...

Rehne do ...meri ghutan mere seene mai hi dafan rehne do ...tarash khan eke liye shukriya ...chali jaao .."

What was this yaa? Whatever good i had felt about Aaliya some time b4 directly went into the drain... It was sooo sad... And to know what Zain had been doing to earn those damn 800 rs, it was more heart-breaking...

All in all, Amazing chapters... I dnt know you have even read till here or not... If u reached till here, then one last thing to say... and thats

HATS OFF TO YOU SIM!

Originally posted by: nashfa

Sim,once more u proved that u are a brilliant writer.

it was very emotional & th lines u were used were just awesome

continue soon

take care

lots of love

riya

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Superb updates felt bad for Zain

What hapoened to Zain in the 15 days and what's bothering him 😕