50 Shades Darker- LAST 4 chaps on pg 13..8th Feb

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2...

Prologue

He's come back. Mommy's asleep or she's sick again.

I hide and curl up small under the table in the kitchen. Through my fingers I can see

Mommy. She is asleep on the couch. Her hand is on the sticky green rug, and he's wearing

his big boots with the shiny buckle and standing over Mommy shouting.

He hits Mommy with a belt. Get up! Get up! You are one f**ked-up bitch. You are one

f**ked-up bitch. You are one f**ked-up bitch. You are one f**ked-up bitch. You are one

f**ked-up bitch. You are one f**ked-up bitch.

Mommy makes a sobbing noise. Stop. Please stop. Mommy doesn't scream. Mommy

curls up small.

I have my fingers in my ears, and I close my eyes. The sound stops.

He turns and I can see his boots as he stomps into the kitchen. He still has the belt. He

is trying to find me.

He stoops down and grins. He smells nasty. Of cigarettes and drink. There you are, you

little shit.A chilling wail wakes him. Christ! He's drenched in sweat and his heart is pounding. What

the f**k? He sits bolt upright in bed and puts his head in hands. f**k. They're back. The

noise was me. He takes a deep steadying breath, trying to rid his mind and nostrils of the

smell of cheap bourbon and stale Camel cigarettes.


Hey guys..i know that this prolouge probably doesnt make any sence but u will find outsoon..i will hopefully update 1st and maybe 2nd chap by tonight..


link to previous part 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4221653

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index
prolouge: above
Chapter: 1 page-2
Chapter: 2 page-3
Chapter: 3 page-3
Chapter: 4 page-4
Chapter: 5 page-5
Chapter: 6 page-6
Chapter: 7 page-7
Chapter: 8 page-8
Chapter: 9 page-9
Chapter 10 page-10
Chapter 11 page-10
Chapter 12 page-10
Chapter 13 page-11
Chapter 14 page-11
Chapter 15 page-11
Chapter 16 page-11
Chapter 17 page-11
Chapter 18 page-11
Chapter 19 page-13
Chapter 20 page-13
Chapter 21 page-13
Chapter 22 page-13

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue already make me impatient.
update first part soon.
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue was a Lil confusing
Continue soon!
Thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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O can't wait more shiri soon soon ...
This prologue makes me think what has happened to him in his past...
Soon shiri
Like I told have not read original version
So want to read zaya way
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Posted: 10 years ago
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intresting prologue
eager 2 know more
do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely prologue shiri ..
Its already very much intriguing

Plzz update soon
I eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really don't know how to say this guys but I'm so, so, so sorry as I can't update today; ( I have the first 2 chapters ready and edited and my mums just taken my laptop of me as I'm getting engaged tmorro and I apparently need sleep ahaha..I don't think I do ..I was about to post them and she just came and took it from me..hopefully it will be updated tmorro before 3 in the afternoon (UK time)...I would update 1st thing in the morning but I have college for 3 hours and won't be home till 1.40 so I will try updating before 2.30 as that's when my mum comes home from work and from then onwards it will be hectic in my home lol..so yeh..sorry guys..if u don't are an update at that time then I will try updating in the evening if its not to busy..okay so till then please be patient my lovelies.. hope u all understand ahah.. kahaan phas gaiye hoon lol..bye for now and love u all.. Xxx

BTW if ur wondering how I posted this then I have done it on my phone and I would post chapter from phone but they are already written and edited on my laptop so I don't see the point in doing it all again as it will take too long and ur would be too frustrating..sorry again guys.. XXX and also its to complicated to do it from my phone..X
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looking forward to your update hun. Congrats on your engagement, wish you a lifetime of happiness 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brainbox1999

Looking forward to your update hun. Congrats on your engagement, wish you a lifetime of happiness 😊



I will post as soon as I get my laptop..
And thanks so much dear..aww ur too cute:-)

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