Nafrat hai yaah mohabbat OS part 9 up page 10 (PMSLATER) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
I think aaliya will dance na ...whatever continue soonand
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
I hope aliya recovers soon
Update soon
Thnks for da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Part 7!
While zain and nafeesa were practising aliya was just numb, how much she wishe she was in nafeesa's place but what can she do?nothing.Aliya went away and didnt go unoticed by zain.Zain rushed to Aliya and saw her talking alone ,then he got know that she was holding her parents picture with her right hand and talking..."Kiya khoa aur kiya paya,mujhe Allah dekhiena kiya saza dii hai,sahi kehte hai log,ke apne maa baba ki baat manni chahiye...paar mein,nahi acchi beeti ka farz nibha saki aur naahi ek acchi partner ki tarah." she was cryng her heart out that too alone.Zain couldnt see her sufforing anymore...
Haider mansion:
Zain rang the door bell and asked the servant if Aliya lived here...the servent called her parents and said somebody on the door was asking for Aliya..
Ghulam:Gii miya,aap kiski baat kr rahe hai?Main toh us larki ko nhi janta..shayad ap ghalat ghar aye hai..he said tryng to hide his pain..
Zain:Dekhiye, itna toh mujhe bih pta hai ke yehi aliya ka ghar hai aur aap uske parents aur please aisi behave mat kariye ke aap apni BETI ko nahi jaante.
Ghulam:Dekhiye mia, aapka koy haq nahi hai ke aap humare ghar ke mamle mein dakhal andaazi kare aur aap apni limits cross kar rhe hai
Zain:Dekhiye limit crooss abhi tak th nhi ki,par kisi bh waqt kar sakta hu agr aap meri baat nhi sune ghe..
Ghula:Konsi baat?
Zain:Aliya ke baare mein hai
Ghulam:Dekhyee mia, maine aapko pehle bh kha hai ke main use nhi jaanta hu..
Zain:Itne smart banne ki koshish mat kariye aur aapko pta hai ke Aliya ke saath kiya kiya jua hai ??
Ghulam:Miya aap kon hai? Aur Aliya ke baare mein humne kuch nhi sunna hai!
Zain:Main aliya ka dance partner hu...befor zain could say anythng ghulam cut him off..
Ghulam:Dance partner?Accha aap hai jh usk saath hai...
Zain:Jii hain,aur waise aapko pta hai usk saath kiya hua hain..
Ghulam:Sarak(Road) par hoghy bheeg mangtii hoghy,hume usse kiya..
Zain:Aap uske maa baba kaise ho sakte??wh itni kind hai polite hai, kamaszkam agr aapko uski feelings ki kadr nhii hai th atleast use insaan th maan li jiye!...nd for ur kind information.Aliya ka 3 mahine pehle ek car accident hua hai,jiski wajah se usko 2 din nhii hoss aya aur phir..Aur phir uska left side compltly parlise hogya hai...Aur aap???Aap apni beti ko atleast Insaan bh nhii samajte?Woh ek khilona nahi hai!!
Ghulam:Paralise???Kaha?? aur kaisi hain meri bacchi??Tumhe kiya lagta hai ke yeh sab drama kar ke,main us insaan ko waapis lekar augha jisne aapne maa baba upar apni dream ko chuna???He asked sarcastigly
Zain:Mujhe pta tha ke aap mera yakeen nhi karehe,isliye uski reports apne saath lekar aya hu aur yeh recording bh dekhiye haar din aapko yaad kar thi hai,tadapti hai woh!Is umeed se ke aap ek din usko maaf karde ghe..
Suddenly zain phone rang:
Sanam:Zain,come quickly..Aliya is having attacks...her body is trembeling and shes not waking up..cm quickly please..
Zain:Wat??Aliya..Which hospital??
Sanam:City center...cm quickly ok??
Zain:OK i will be there in 10 minutes...make sure ke uske paas koy na ayee ok?
Snam:Ok bye
Zain:Bye...
Zain disconected her phone..
Zain:Dekhiye abhi bh aap ki beti zindagi aur mot ke beech lar rhi hai,abhi hopital ja rha hu,aur please agr aapme thodi si bh insaniyat bachi hai th apni beti ko dekhli jie ka...uski halat dekh li jie gha..Please..An tear escaped from his eye and travelled across his cheeks..
He rushes quickly to the hospital..
Precap:Aliya wat happnd to her!will ghulam come and see her..

Edited by rantra123 - 10 years ago
zayalove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Wow double dose ..
Love part 7 plzzz update soon .
Thnks for da pm




Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Both the chapters were really amazing!!!
Loved them...
Amazing...
Pls continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
emotional chapter
beautifully written
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Continue soon , I hope she recovers !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Awesome part...
GHULAM is just urghhh...😡
Poor Aliya...hope she recovers...
Loved it...really well written
Continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Zain:Aliya,where is she?
Sanam:She is in the operation theater..doctor said they cant say anything.
Zain:Ok nd then zains phone rang.
Zain:Hello?
Danial nd rizwan:Hey bro,v need to tell u smthng just cm.Its urgent about Aliya.
Zain:Ok, ill try.Wait im cmng.
Zain rushed to danial nd rizwans place nd asked them wat hppnd.Danial nd rizwan pointed at the compter.Where nafeesa nd brkat were hvng a party as they were celebrating aliyas failure.Zains anger boiled.But riz nd danial stopped him bxz aliya was fine nd she was perfectly fine nd rushed to the hospital.When he reached the hospital he saw Aliyas parents sneaking into aliyas room.Aliya was cryng her heart out in her mothers arms.Zain never saw smthng cute nd adorable in his whole life.He was hapy for his aliya.He knocked the door nd said.
Zain:May i cm in,If u dnt hv any problem?
Ghulam:No beta come.Bxz of u our daughter is safe thank u soo much.He hugged zain nd aliya was the most happiest person in the world as she saw her father huggng the person whom he hated the most.A wide smile spreaded across her face nd suddnly her legs...she could feel her paraliyzed side.
Aliya:OMG!,Zain i can move my legs!im not disable anymore...mom luk dad...
Ghulam:Yes dear,u can.thank u god nd thnk u zain! thnk u...
Zain:Uncle plz...jh kuch bh hua wh mera farz tha...
Ghulam:Begum chaliye hume apse kuch kaam hai.
Shabana:Apna khyaal rkhna..ok?
Aliya:G..
As soon as aliyas parents left,Aliya gave zain a bone crushing hug to zain...Thnking him 1000 times.Zain who was suprised didnt know wat to do so he hugged her back.Shabana and ghulam were seeing this cute scene infront of them.
Ghulam:Begum,aapko nhi lagta ke,Baat chala leni chahiye.
Shabana:bilkul sahi kha ghulam sahab.Nd left smiling.
After the hug aliyawas talking non stop nd tlking about her parents and zain cldnt have enough happiness in 1 moment...he was 2 happy for his aliya.Butthen he remembered people who stole aliyas smile and her parents.Whilst aliya talking she fell asleep in zains arms.Zain laid her down and kissed her forhead lightly.He went to sanam and told her evrything she had a look on her face tht she was gng to kill thse 2 bitches and then saw her best friend lyngand sleeping peacefully after soo many months.Zain exactly knew what to do with them.Aliya rang zain as zain was driving to rizwans place.
Zain:Hello Aliya,is evrythng ok?
Aliya:Are baba...calm down..im ok
Zain:tumne th dara dya mjhe...accha achanak meri yaad kaisi ay?
Aliya:Woh..wh...i wantedto thnk u...Bcxz of u my parents r wid me..
Zain:yaar..tum or tmhare parents..kiya tumhara khandaan mein koy problem hai k bar bar sorry sorry thnk u thnk u...ab bas krdo ok?
Aliya:Ok
Zain:Waise aaj treat th banti hai boss.
Aliya:Bilkul or wh bh meri taraf e..
Zain:Nahii meri traf see..ok?
Aliya:Ok baba.Bye..
Zain:Bye luv u..
Zain:Oh shit(iN his thoughts)
Aliya:Wat??wat dd u just say
Zain:Nothing why??
Aliya:No,just though of smthng ok bye...(Aliya was blushng)
That day in aliyas house:
Aliya came and zain saw her and only thing tht came on his tounge was beutifull...
Aliya:I knw...
Zain:Wat?main tumhari baat nhi krha hai tha..main th unki baat kr rha tha..Dekho naa kitni hot hai...Tumseh th behtaar..
Aliya:Accha...Hoghy mujhe kiyaa...Acting sarcastic
Zain:Jalan ho rhii hai kiya..
Aliya:Wat nonsen:Mein aur wh bh jealous..never ok
Zain:Ok..main unse baat kar ke ayaa...winked at her..(But smiled at her back)
Aliya and sanam,zain and his whole were having soo much fun...Soon barkat mixed drug in aliyas drink..
Buttons ussycat dolls:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VCLxJd1d84s
Aliya on the dance floor with this random sexy boy
What it do babyboo?

Yeah, little mama you lookin' good
I see you wanna play with a player from the hood
Come holla at me, you got it like that
Big Snoop Dogg with the lead Pussycat

I show you how it go down, yeah, I wanna throw down
Me and you, one on one, treat it like a showdown
You look at me and I look at you
I'm reachin' for your shirt, what you want me to do?
(Zain was shocked seeing her sexy avatar but wid smoneelse?)


I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe (Aliya drags zain on the floor)
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

Typical and hardly
The type I fall for
I like it when the physical
Don't leave me askin' for more

I'm a sexy mama
Who knows just how to get what I wanna
What I wanna do is bring this on ya
Back up all the things that I told ya

You've been sayin'
All the right things all night long
But I can't seem to get you over here
To help take this off

Baby can't you see
How these clothes are fittin' on me
And the heat comin' from this beat?
I'm about to blow, I don't think you know

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

You say you're a big boy
But I can't agree
'Cuz the love you said you had
Ain't been put on me

I wonder if I'm just too much for you
Wonder if my kiss don't make you just
Wonder what I got next for you, what you wanna do?

Take a chance to recognize
That this could be yours
I can see just like most guys
That your game don't please

Baby can't you see
How these clothes are fittin' on me
And the heat comin' from this beat?
I'm about to blow, I don't think you know

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

Now you can get what you want
But I need what I need
And let me tell you what's crack-a-lackin' fo' I proceed
I'ma show you where to put it at
PCD on me, yeah, I thought I saw a puddy cat

Now roll with the Big Dogg
All six of y'all on me
Now tell me how I feel babydoll
Ashley, Nicole, Carmit
Jessica, Kimberly, Melody
You tellin' me

Loosen up my buttons babe
Loosen up my buttons babe
Baby won't you loosen up my buttons babe?
Loosen up my buttons babe

Come on baby loosen up my buttons babe
Loosen up my buttons babe
Baby won't you loosen up my buttons babe?
Loosen up my buttons babe

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

I'm telling you to loosen up my buttons babe
But you keep frontin'
Sayin' what you gon' do to me
But I ain't seen nuttin'

Aliya fell and whispered in her ears i know u r sexy my baby..Aliya smiled in her sleep.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update...finally aaliya is alright nw...beautifully written...jst loved it...do cont soon...

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