Nafrat hai yaah mohabbat OS part 9 up page 10 (PMSLATER)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hy..Guys im new here nd wntd 2 write an OS on zaya...hp u lk it...
nd its cmpltly dffrent nd added few characters tht u dnt know about it...

Prolg:
teacher: So...class...Zain nd Aliya u r 2gthr... as she was deciding the partners nd preparing the choreograhy...
Aliya:Srsly God...u r mkng me dance wid himm...wat dd i do...Aliya stared at her best enimie...If he does smthng 2 me then nbdy is gng 2 b worst thn me
Zain:Y god...she alrdy embarrsd me ..tht 2 infront of evry1...wd her dad...Its the prfct way 2 tk revenge...zain said as he rmmberd wat hppnd in the bus tht day bcx of his 2 best frnds nd he gt in troubl...

Chrcter Sketch
Aliya: Bubbly girl lov her life,hates zain abdullah and she got 1 best frnd Sanam nd got2 fake frnds barkat nd nafeesa...Loves Dance nd gt a chance 2 perform in world championship wid Zain..


Zain:Luv his frnd hates nafeesa nd barkat as he knws tht bth of them r using Aliya 4 sm reason and knws tht bth of them got huge crush on his best friends...htes Aliya or myb not..Loves Dance nd get a chance 2 perform in World dance championship wid Aliya

Sanam.: Best frnd of Aliya nd hates barkat and nafeesa...lov Ali

ali:Best frnd of Zain lovs Sanam

Danial:Best frnd of Zaiin hates barkat as he knws she got a crush on him nd hates whn she showes off...

zubair:Best frnd of Zain nd danial .Hts nafeesa he knws abt the crush

nafeesa:Using Aliya 4 hr own reason and gt a crush on zubair shz partner wid barkat

barkat:Usin Aliya 4 hr own reason...crush on Danial nd partnerss wd nafeesa

Aliya nd zain try 2 convince the teacher but the teacher denied...(poor them),soon the practise started...first aliya diddn even wanted to go near zain neither did zain nd after a long tiime miss came nd said to dance or they could be out of the dance competition only because of their ego.Zain and aliya started their practise nd they ddnt do much just decided which step to do.
Lunch time:
Zain: OMG! loook at barkat nd nafeesa thy are just a piece of nothing nd still they think they r great...I cant believe that im saying this but thy should be thankfull that aliya still consider their friend but i still wonder what are they upto??. Zain said to zubair,ali nd danial.
Ali: yeah rigght,the only true friend is sanam.
Zain,Zubair nd Danil: OHOOO (Making Ali blush)
Ali:commmonn yaar,its my opinion nd dont 4get tht nafeesa has crush on u zubair nd whilst you danial barkat will die for u.
Danial:common ali u knw barkat is not my type nd she is show off nd i can bet u that she doesnt even know the alphabet in order.
Zubair:yh r8,nd nafeesa is such a clown with that full make up on,whilst sanam nd aliya r just perfect not too much makeup on, nd thy luk soo natural...(Making zain nd ali angry)
Zain:Y do i react aggressive when smbdy else praises her?????(In is thoughts)
Ali:Y dd he evn say tht abt sanam.SHE IS MINE! Wait y i am react lk this(In this thouhts)
whilst thy had their crazy thoughts in their mind aliyas gang passed by.Zain could feel smthing but what was it?????nd also Ali as he saw sanam.
Aliya:Why i zain acting so wierd today???aliya said to sanam nd also sanam wondered why is alii becoming wierder nd wierder everyday.
still zain is unsure about his feelings nd on the other hand aliya completly hate Zain nd Ali nd sanam nd ali dont even hate each other but thy have a strange connection.Whilst danial nd zubair try to know what are nafeesa nd barkat upto...
Precap:Zain nd aliya 2gether in a room...






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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice concept Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Very nice concept Continue soon

thnk uu...im new here
for pm buddy me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rantra123

thnk uu...im new here
for pm buddy me...

oh Kay
What's ur name??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

oh Kay

What's ur name??


well iv got a wierd name..im called adeela nd u?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems like a great concept.
I'd be waiting for the chapter.
Great CS. Good one! ^_^
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

New concept...
Continue soon

thnk u...ill try 2 update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Seems like a great concept.

I'd be waiting for the chapter.
Great CS. Good one! ^_^

thnk u so much..u dnt know how much it means 2 me...
ill try 2 update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rantra123


thnk u...ill try 2 update soon

u r wlcum adeela...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love the concept...cont soon...
I just love it young @heart...😆

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