zaya ff: Teri meri love story chapter 33 page 140, 26 th december..! - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Dearu's very busy,😭that's why u didnot got time to read my story

And struggling with update, lol
My pen is not moving at all😛 I mean my hands😆 totally brain is filled with my
Clean shaved zain😳same here...zain zain every where
I hope u all had a safe Diwali darlings definately and wish the same for u
Love u all love u too
Will update after some time, work in progress😆 will wait for the under contruction post😆
Bye bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Congrats for a new thread madhu
Happy diwali🤗
Edited by craziness05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: craziness05

Congrats for a new thread madhu

Happy diwali🤗

Thank u Astha😊
And same to u dear, I hope u had a blasting safe diwali
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Math poocho, my Inbox is full ll 😆
Too much I have to read, once I'm done with this updae😭
I'm trying my best to make it sad😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhufx9...


Math poocho, my Inbox is full ll 😆
Too much I have to read, once I'm done with this updae😭
I'm trying my best to make it sad😆

lol..
if u make it sad me,kiran and anagha will definately attack u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

lol..
if u make it sad me,kiran and anagha will definately attack u

I'm ready 😛 future updates ll be entertaining, bear with this😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

I'm ready 😛 future updates ll be entertaining, bear with this😆

oh..
weapons down..😉😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
congrats for new thread dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Teri meri love story
Chapter 17


Hello all, I'm extremely sorry for being super late, here is the next part, I hope u all ll like reading it... update didn't turn out the way I expected..., ignore typo's plss like always😛




Zain saw sarah and Saif carrying a bouquet which is half of their height... he soon reached them and kneeled down down to reach their height..."what is this?" Zain asked in Amusement holding his laugh.. " Today, is friendship day so we brought this for u", Sarah and saif gave it to zain ... " And this bouquet?" asked zain pointing at other one.. " Oh this one..we asked momma to make one flower bunch for u, she made it, but we didn't like it, we made one for u on our own, how is our's, which one do u like...? " Zain was touched by kids affection for him, and their efforts to make it.., he really liked it..


Aliya who was returning from cellar Saw Sarah and saif. Taking to his friend... Aliya could see only back of Zain... she felt him to be very familiar to her, so she started looking at him curiously...she saw an improper reflection of Zain in photo frame placed infront of zain... she stopped walking and tried to have a proper glance of person with whom Sarah and saif were talking, she looked around and found Sanam next to them... then she was 70% sure about, Who is Sara and saif's friend...


she wanted to it to be someone else... she was praying to God that it should not be Zain... Zain started looking around feeling the intense Gaze of someone on him... Aliya hid behind a Wall catching her Drumming heart...she glued to place where she was standing , trying to digest Shock which made a grand Re- entry into her life..., she didn't know how to handle situation, but one thing was Always clear to her, she doesn't want Zain in her life...


Zain took Bouquet from Sarah and Saif with great pleasure...he loved their Affection and efforts to make it for him... " Off course, I loved it, best bouquet I have ever received..." Zain replied kids with Affectionate smile..." seriously" they gave an amazing innocent smile to Zain . " yes, Sarah baby" he kissed Sarah and saif and they shared a small group hug..


Aliya who was witnessing all these felt a urge to join their hug.. But a tiny voice quivered in her brain reminding her to stay away from him...she breathed deeper controlling her Drumming heart, Aliya quickly captured a pic of zain with kids, the most precious moment of her life...and moved away...


She went through the back way into Restuarant and gave instructions to manager... Sarah was showing which flowers she selected for him, Saif and sarah were asking him whose choice he liked most...zain and Sanam looked.at each other.. " Come on Zain Answer them" Sanam teased him holding her laugh.. zain very well knew answering them will deafinetly leads to a fight... , so he skipped answering them...diverting topic...


Soon one of staff member approached them...and informed kids that their mother went out on an urgent work and will return soon.

Zain, kids and Sanam were having ice cream together, Aliya was happy to see Zain and Sanam together.. but an unknown pain was chopping every nerve of her body like a Slayer...she decided to side pain for now, bcz she wants to treasure most pleasuring moment infront of her... Zain was cleaning chocolate ice cream on tip of saif's nose with a tissue..Sarah was marking saif's nose with ice cream again and again with her little fingers... making Zain to clean and again and again.. saif became furious on seeing Sarah's mischevious grin... to control situation Zain sat in between sarah and saif cleaning both saif's nose tip and sarah's fingers...


On seeing Zain's affection for kids, Aliya silently weeped holding her mouth not letting out sob..she wanted time to stop for ever... at a moment she decided to disclose sarah and saif's identity to Zain but again a tiny voice played in her brain alerting her to be selfish... " I cannot be selfless anymore, I cannot give my kids, they are the only reason for my survival... I cannot live without them" , Aliya ran away from there controlling befuddling emotions running through her body...


Aliya was staring at nite sky and crawling traffic through glass walls of her office room... Dark sky was filled with twinkling stars and raising moon which was hiding behind a Cloud resembling her life...


Her dark life saw lite after her twinkling stars sarah and saif's birth... She does not want to see her moon again in the lite of her stars... Her moon Belongs to someone else too...but she wanted her kids know who their father is...and at the same time she was scared to loose her stars too, she was scared to live in darkness again, that one year without anyone before sarah and Saif's birth she struggled so much... she was not at all willing to go through it again..


Her inconsistent emotions were making her demoralised...she has become a pessimist with fear of loosing her kids, she hated herself for becoming disheartened , Father is the First hero for any child but her kids doen't know who their father is... " My one decision is spoiling my kids life, and about Zain he does not know he became a father of my kids... I stole his Fatherhood of 5 years..." glimpses of Zain cleaning sarah and Saif were replaying infront of her eyes thinking about Zain's fatherhood...her Disoriented thoughts made her insane, she was loosing her sanity... she decided to talk with kids...


Assuring herself departure of Zain and Sanam Aliya went to kids.. she carried sleeping Sarah and saif to car and rode back to her home...

Next morning Aliya woke up early and made break fast for kids.. kids were talking about Zain, Holding Cosmic pain which she was going through Aliya tried to talk with them.. " Sarah and Saif ,Do u want to meet Gem?", kids eyes popped out with excitement hearing her words .. they gave her wide smile and said their excitement to meet Gem.. gripping her emotions and holding back her tears.. she asked them can they go Alone with him leaving her...??


Twins looked at each other... "Alone, no way momma, we cannot go anywhere leaving u, we ll get scared without u, with whom we can sleep there" Aliya tried to explain.." No momma we ll not Go, we dnt want anyone" they hugged her getting scared. Aliya hugged them back, finally shedding down unescaped tears...


Aliya decided to bring kids close to Zain , before he leaves to mumbai.. She don't want to reveal kids and her identity to Zain, she just want to see them together as much as possible...



That's all dearu's, I promised for a face off, but I planned it in different way, trust me it ll be more entertaining, waiting for feed back.. hit like button and comment plsss... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Agrata23

congrats for new thread dear😃

Thank u dear, updated next part 😛

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